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Futanari System Chapter 226: Between Realities

🕑 Added 2023-12-10 10:08:30 +0000 UTC

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Jesterr90

The chapter feels like the first of two parts to me. It feels like the set up to exploring this enlightenment more in the next chapter/s. The army logistic side of it feels a little overdone to me personally but its not difficult to read or follow.

ReclamerS117

I for my part like the chapter as it is. The enlightenment part is slightly confusing but that's fine in my opinion since I think there is no straightforward or clear path to find enlightenment.

Madjic

I could really, REALLY use feedback on this chapter. I did some editing but I think it might be easy to be confused. I understand it but I am also the Author so I will redo it if it is a confusing mess. If it is perfect then that great and I hope you all enjoy it!


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