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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 4 Chapter 136/22: Pick up game

🕑 Added 2022-10-22 01:13:11 +0000 UTC

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Mr.Tiemos

Personally, I’m very glad you glossed over the section after Angela was subbed out, as we don’t really need the details of a match that even Angela seemed disinterested in. Were this a sports/volleyball-centered novel then that’s another story. In terms of how the match went, I have nothing to say negatively. It was a fairly normal match of volleyball. This isn’t a sports anime like Kuro no Basket! Now we finally get to see Angela interacting with her family (namely her mother) after a long pause due. I feel there’s going to be some rough waters. Though it’s nice to see that Angela hasn’t entirely tuned out her family!

Madjic

Thanks!

The Theoritizer

How good does an erotica need to be to make me read it's volleyball sections? Well... about this good. Great work 😁 Also, a pickup match? Please, Angela already scored like 12 or more in the first 4 weeks! 😏

Madjic

To be honest, I am not exactly writing a volleyball book but an erotica so I don't want the Volleyball sections to seem like what the book is centered around but I also want it to be important so... I need to find a balance and make them enjoyable. So I am starting to experiment with this now and looking more into it as I go along. I have been watching a lot more Girls Volleyball stuff to get this down but I am still not what many would call an expert lol. Thanks, Any feedback on this is useful too me.

Curtis1122

I know nothing about volleyball, so it seemed pretty good for me. I don't know if I was just reading it fast but it seemed fast paced.

Madjic

Hey guys, So I am going to be real with you that I have been working on my passport for the last couple of days and finally got confirmation that the government will not fuck me on this. Thank fuck, So that is a lot off my shoulders, although I still need to talk to my MP. Besides the point, I Just wanted you to know that it seems that I should be clear about vacation, and that relieves a lot of stress for me. Now for this chapter. I want feedback, to be honest. Do you like the game sequences? Do you want me to do more? Less? Think I am not Clear enough? I actually need this information since the coming books will have more scenes like this, and I need to practice them, and I will be doing some studying even more for the next books to make sure I understand even the rules and formations of Volleyball. I wanted a team game, but I might only be slightly regretting not choosing running or some other track and field sport. Anyways I want to hear what you think and any feedback. Thanks! and thank you all for your patience while I am dealing real-life stuff. Enjoy!


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