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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 4 Chapter 119/4: Offer

🕑 Added 2022-07-23 00:09:00 +0000 UTC

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Corodix

I don't quite get why Angela is even worried about having to choose a shit career when she's already making bank with her current job and could probably retire within a decade if she wants to.

Mr.Tiemos

I’d imagine Crystal would have LOVED a picture of Alex covered and leaking Angela’s semen (maybe with Angela’s dick off to the side, with some semen coming from the tip as she just came)

Mr.Tiemos

If I may put forth my two cents: The pacing of DomFuta is really good, but not something I would keep if you plan on going further into Angela’s life. Multiple chapters covering a day for every day of the week is good during the time she’s still in school- especially because there’s so much going on at the “beginning” of this story that her last year in high school could even be considered a prologue! But once you get past graduation and she’s gotten to college/uni, maybe switch it to the arcs being a month (instead of a week) and that would let you either summarize or even outright skip ‘lull days’ where nothing (much) is happening. Not to say that you wouldn’t cover a week like you do now, but not every week would always be as packed with activity. Week 4 Chapter 100 [Change to] January 4th Chapter 300

Madjic

This is something that I have had to do. I in fact do it a lot more often than I should have since I lost my notes last year when my computer died. So I have to go back at least once or twice a week to reread some of my stories, especially in the earliest chapters. Thank you for the suggestion though.

epoeck

Oh, I didn't know it. Now I'm really excited for the future then. Just a tip from someone who can't write a phrase without it being boring: when you are far into the story, take a time to re-read everything. In most of the stories I've read so far, after one or two years being released authors forget stuff they never finished, contradict what they've said on the beginning and stuff like that.

Madjic

Im not going to lie, I really hope that you are wrong about that I will never get there. I hope that eventually, once I finished a couple of novels or become a full time author to pick up the speed on Life of a Dominant Futanari since there will probably never be an end to it at this rate. But I could be wrong and I will die or something before I ever make it that far. I like Angela the story a lot and I think it would be fantastic to finish multiple years lol. I think it would both be funny and a true epic that the world would be like, WTF!?! There is how many books to this erotica?!

epoeck

I loved it! But this chapter was kinda confusing. I loved it and hope to see what will be their development in the future, but at the same time, the way the story is structured (in weeks) I don't think we will ever see this future.


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