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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 3 Chapter 99/31: Elana

🕑 Added 2022-04-05 21:55:23 +0000 UTC

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Mr.Tiemos

Because it’s probably the guy that Angela got info from Tracy about, considering that Tracy even mentioned that he was out drinking with friends.

Azurite Paladin

I have 9 sisters and not all of them are from the same mother so I've been in that position being yelled at and looked down upon because I'm the younger one it hurts something rotten when I meet a younger sister I try and be welcoming it helps that my mother never married my sperm donor

Grangel

Oh, that would be a very interesting turn of events... wonder if Angela might get her half-sister in her little group... hmmm

Grangel

Great work!! Wonderful interactions and reactions... very natural all of it. I think the drunk driver was the either the guy she was waiting for or him and his friends after being out drinking all night.... I am wondering how this half-sister will react if she finds out about Angela's life style... I wonder if this might make Angela want to move out and move in with Crystal... So many things still planned and more and more twists and turns get pilled on....Keep up the great work!!!!

Han Pol

I think, they all acted naturally, maybe not good but naturally. On another Note maybe strawberry and Elana know each other from church Camp or sunday school.

Ritsu 229

Damn. This was a set of plot twists that i wasn't expecting. Great writing though. ( why do i have this strange feeling that the person driving drunk will have a major impact on the story)

Madjic

Thank you. I really appreciate that since as you can tell this was a very difficult interaction to pull off.

The Theoritizer

Can I just that this chapter was perfect? There was so much different conversations here! And the dynamics! A tired atheist/pushy theist, the family reaction is basically extremely natural, the awkward silence, shy newcomer and careless teenager... Even that little detail where Elena became a bit more pushy and open because Angela was the one that gave her a hand! Man, I read a lot of cheap wuxia usually, an interaction like this would end with blood there... But you can actually resonate with each character, no matter which one. Even the father's reaction was so good. I can see how it's hard, but I can see how you are a good writer more! I love it!

Madjic

This is a very hard chapter. Please, Let me know what you think about the interactions. I could very much use the feedback on this one as this was a difficult chapter to write. Thanks! Also, Enjoy!


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