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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 3 Chapter 87/19: Little Star

🕑 Added 2022-02-15 13:04:56 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

Great chapter!! I look forward to seeing what else she does to Hilda over the night and what happens after... will Hilda even be conscious after all this... I like Little Star actually and the explanation she used for why star...

Grangel

"Moments passed, and we kissed our mouths, playing with each other before I broke the kiss." wording (grammar) isn't correct after 'and'

Grangel

"I smiled, and I continued to ear. " last word should be 'eat'

Han Pol

star is okay and can be a bit belittling if used right, too have an objectification and adding in theme with her burning passion she could be hottie? or blondie since she is blonde?

The Theoritizer

When I've suggested a Doll as a nickname I was actually imagining a porcelain one, not a Barbie. And with the glistening body in this chapter it wouldn't be that far off. And it is slightly racist but a business woman with uninterested husband... I have imagined her white with slight makeup. I might have missed a bit about her appearance though. Star is ok, Sun feels too intimate... I think I would have to know a bit more about Hilda to give her a definitive nickname. So far the ones you gave them are very fitting. I trust your judgement.

Madjic

So this flowed out a little, but it still took me longer than I thought to create this chapter since this sickness is sticking with me. Sorry for the delays, guys. I was hoping to finish two chapters today only to finish one. Anyways, Enjoy! P.S. What do you think of the Nickname? I was giving a lot of thought to Doll. But something didn't fit with me. Barbie was another but that was closer to Becky in my opinion. Star seems a little forced to me and I could use suggestions. I might not even make a nickname stick though. Bah! I'm ranting.


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