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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 5 Chapter 153/1: Texts

🕑 Added 2023-02-04 10:16:40 +0000 UTC

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Madjic

Whoops. I put that in to help with the saving on the webnovel site I use lol. I forgot to take it out this time it seems.

The Theoritizer

"I didn't know if I could tell her not to be with Jake again" I think that the "not" is wrong, since last few paragraphs talk about how Tracy doesn't want to be with Jake

The Theoritizer

blah xDDD

Madjic

Hey, I would love feedback for this chapter. I am unsure about it but I cannot find what is bugging me about this chapter. Please let me know if you think there is something wrong with the chapter or don't like it. I think it might be the anxiety that I have been feeling lately affecting me. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the chapter!


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