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Life of a Dominant Futanari Alternative Chapter 18: Yan's Sensual Punishment
🕑 Added 2023-01-08 01:02:43 +0000 UTCI looked at the Asian beauty Yan before me. She looked a little lost with her Red dress open and pussy juices that had already started to flow from the walk to the room. Something told me this woman might be an exhibitionist without any release on it. That was something I would file in the back of my head later while I watched her contemplate how to strip for me.
My cock was already starting to throb with need as I thought about what to do to her. This sexy Asian beauty was dealing with the order I just gave her to do a short quick naughty dance while stripping for me while still having a vibrator inside of her. The blush on her face was residual feelings of walking through the hallway. It was a dangerous play that she seemed to have loved, but I couldn't go from there. Instead, I would need to start in this bedroom and maybe build something fun.
My cock was throbbing as I looked at her deciding what to do, and I snapped my crop against my hand lightly. "Did I give you forever, Bitch?" I questioned her. "I told you to strip for me, not stand there startled," I snapped with my voice whipping her into action.
Chun Yan moved, finally turning on a dime and showing her boy even as the slight sound of the vibrator filled the room. Her arms pulled at the dress, and it quickly loosened up. I had no idea where she pulled at, but the dress got looser by the moment, and the spring blossoms on her red dress opened up, and she twisted her body so that her back was to me. She turned her head back and gave me a smile attempting to seduce me.
The attempt worked as my cock was throbbing in my pants. Her pale legs became more visible, her arms reached back, and she dipped down, bringing most of the dress with her just up to her ass crack and covering just the tip of her thighs, barely stopping the vibrator from coming into view. It was an enticing image as she came back up, and her arms were no longer in the sleeves of the dress she wore just moments before and turned back to look at me again and looked me up and down. I could see the excitement in her gaze as she looked below my belt and saw the bulge of my pants ready for her. A small swallow bobbed her throat, and I could almost feel her excitement growing with the moment.
I could feel the tension in the room thicken as I saw her pause for a moment looking back at me. She dropped the dress that she was holding, and it fell to the floor; the look in her eye as I appreciated her was one of superiority. I felt my eyes narrow as I noticed the look in her eyes. I hated that look, and she turned around, her pale skin now only covered by a matching red bra to her dress. It was beautiful on her skin, and she only showed a little confusion as my eyes narrowed. Her hands then dropped behind her back, and a second later, her red bra went loose. Her hands skillfully took the bra off with simple movements, and her slightly pink nipples came into view. They stood strong and poked out hard and wanted to be teased. Her shapely petite ass looked good, and I could only appreciate the woman in front of me.
The only thing that could be called clothing on her were those red high heels that matched the dress and her body. Yan's pale white skin and TYan's modest breasts and tight pussy, which had a teal butterfly covered in her drenched red [anties were all on display. It was enticing, and my cock throbbed in my pants as I looked her over. There was only one thing missing from it all, and I smiled as I realized what I wanted most to do. I stepped forward with a smile, and Chun Yan turned to look at me. That superior look still in her eyes still there, and I don't think she even noticed it.
Yan had faith in her body, enticing men and women alike, and I couldn't deny that underlying beauty of it all. She was remarkably beautiful, and her body was amazing and perfect for her demeanor. All it was missing was the strong red marks of my whips and spankings along it to decorate it properly. That pale white skin seemed to be a canvas for me to mark now with her screams and cries.
My cock was throbbing harder than ever as I looked her up and down. "Punishment to start," I told her, looking her up and down as if she was an object for me to carve. I wanted and needed to know where to strike and make her cry out for me. I closed the distance on her, and my hand reached out and cupped her breast lightly. "Well, this is a nice breast," I commented, and my thumb moved over that hard nipple.
"Ah," A soft moan erupted from Yan's red lips involuntarily, and I smirked. Her body shivered under my touch, and I could feel the submissive side come out of her as that look of superiority started to die in her eyes. I knew it wasn't gone, but Yan was seemingly no longer feeling superior to me anymore.
My eyes roamed up and down her body, and I let go of her breast as I stepped around her. My fingers pushed at the drenched panty-covered butterfly, shoving it a little deeper and making Yan moan a little more before I spoke, "You are like a canvas for me to paint on," I told her, feeling a little odd. I paused after saying that and stopped behind her back. I looked at her hair done up in a pun with those two silver sticks, and I realized that if she pulled those out, she would have extremely long hair the size of the bun. I wondered what it would look like water falling down her back.
I let that thought sit for only a moment before letting it stay tied up, for now at least. I smiled and touched her back softly, "You were a little naughty and didn't listen to my orders precisely. That isn't good, Yan," I said, my voice more sultry than I meant it to be. My hand crawled up her back, and I felt her shiver. The vibrator got a little louder as she probably tightened up on it. "What do you say to your Mistress?" I asked with a smile.
Chun Yan shivered, and I saw her turn to look back to reply. I used the crop to stop her from letting the leather lightly touch her skin as she tried to turn. "No, Look forward and reply," I ordered, and I felt her body still, and the vibrator got a little louder again, telling me she tightened up on it.
"I deserve punishment, Mistress Futanari," Yan said, her voice trembling as those words came out, and I smiled, my cock throbbing harder than ever. "Please punish me," Yan followed up a second later, and I couldn't kill the smile on my face. I stepped closer, pressing my breasts against her back and reaching around her body, pulling her back to me.
My cock pressed against her ass and my hands, with my crop pressed against her breasts, as I rested my head on her shoulder. "I will punish you good, my little slut. I will make you cry out for hours tonight before you go to bed. You will not even remember when I finished for the last time as you will orgasm out of this world and into dreams of me." My voice whispered into her ears, and I heard the vibrator a little louder with her breath hitched up, and she stopped breathing as I held her breasts tighter. "Are you ready to become my slut tonight, Yan?" I asked, "Are you sure you are ready for what Mistress Futanari demands of you tonight?"
My questions hung loose in the air, and I felt her breathing resume in harsh, more rapid movements. I could hear the last moments of hesitation leave her as she replied, "Yes, Mistress Futanari!"
Yan's loud words seemingly echoed in the room, and I couldn't help but lick my lips once quickly. "Then I shall begin," I told her, my grip tightening on her breasts for a brief moment before letting go. My arms were unwrapped around her, and I took a step back. The crop in my hand whistled as I lashed her ass once quickly on the cheek.
"AH!" Yan let out a small scream of pain and surprise at the sudden pain that hit her ass. She turned and was met with me frowning and whip in hand. "Ah?" A yelp of surprise, this time at my expression that told her that she just messed up, came out.
"Tell me, My little Slut," I began to ask, "Did I tell you to turn around and look at me?"
"N- No?" Yan said, her voice uncertain, with a blush starting to appear on her face.
"You are right, I didn't," I said. This time I walked away from her leaving her with those words as I walked over to the suitcase. I looked at the various options that were available to me, and there were so many displayed I had trouble choosing. I turned my head to look at her once, then back at the suitcase. I pulled out a leather paddle which I intended to use to spank her instead of the crop originally. "This was what I was planning to use to paddle you a little for a small punishment," I told her. "Look at me," I ordered, realizing she was a little scared to look.
Yan nodded, looking cute but a little frightened about what I was going to do next. "But you have been such a naughty girl. I will keep the same punishment," I told her, but I saw her fear increase. "But make the punishment's equipment harder," I finished pulling out a studded paddle with silver metal studs meant to make things hut more. It wouldn't break the skin, but it definitely would upgrade the level of pain that she was about to feel.
In response, I saw her swallow dryly as she gazed at it, and I snapped my fingers. Yan's eyes instantly returned to my face instead of the paddle. "First before punishment," I said slowly, "You will strip me like a proper slave." I told her, "You may touch me during this time, and if you do well in your duty, slave," I continued slowly, even as my cock throbbed, "I will reward you after your punishment."
The excitement in her eyes jumped to the next level, and I could see the anticipation as she looked at me. "Come now," I beckoned with a single finger as I stepped toward the bed, putting down the paddle, retrieving the vibrator's remote, and turning it down to the lowest, making her sigh. "Serve your Mistress," I ordered.
"Yes, Mistress," Yan replied, her face a little lost as she walked over. Her hands went to my shirt, and I let her lift them up and briefly pull them over my head. It was quick and mechanical, and quickly my vision came back with my black bra now visible to her, and Yan, with my black shirt in her hand, was now looking at my large breasts, her face blushing.
My breasts were large F-cup breasts that enticed both genders that enjoyed breasts, and I could see her gaze center on them. Yan's tongue ran over her lips quickly, and I could see the desire in her eyes with my breasts. I could see the need in them and the lust building in her eyes as she stared at them. It was almost fanatical the look in her eyes, and I realized something quickly.
Yan wanted to worship my breasts, and I could see her fascination for large breasts in a single moment. "Did you know that my breasts are one hundred percent natural, my little submissive slut," I told her before I smirked as her breath hitched with that small statement? It would be a mistake to show her my bare breasts at this moment, and I decided as she finally moved after looking at my cleavage for several seconds towards my bra. "Leave the bra on," I told her, surprising her. "Get on your knees and take some time removing my pants this time. You are a slave here to please her Mistress. Not to get your rocks off, Slut," I reminded her.
Yan looked surprised at the change but nodded with a little disappointment, proving what I thought about it. She wanted to see my large breasts first thing over my cock any day of the week, it seemed. Delaying that was a point of disappointment, showing me that breasts were a big deal to her as she was submitting to others.
Yan slowly got down on her knees and started to unzip my pants and undo the button, making me smirk as I looked down at her. The bulge in my pants was almost down to my knees and clearly off to the side, pressing against the pant leg hard. I could see her hesitation as she finished unbuttoning the top and swallowed again dryly.
Slowly Yan pulled down my pants, and finally, in a slow reveal, inch after inch of my fat futanari cock came into view. I felt her take in a deep breath with how hard she breathed in. Her hands continued to glide my pants down an inch, slowly freeing my hard cock as it strained against the fabric. Her breath released, and her breathing quickened as it continued to glide down to my knees. I winced as the fabric continued to press against the head of my cock. I wanted to groan but bit it back as finally the last inch to my knees, and my cock popped free, springing up against my breasts and bra with an audible slap that made her breathing freeze as her eyes literally went cross-eyed looked up at my cock. My massive balls also intimidated her, and the sheer girth of my cock hit home for her.
Yan froze with her eyes cross-eyed and her breathing heavy, staring at my large throbbing cock as if it had just introduced itself to her. My hands came down, and I decided to lightly greet her face with my cock, as she would no doubt would have had to introduce herself later anyways. I brought my cock down lightly on her face slapping her with an audible slapping sound filling the room as I lightly did so three times. "Wake up, Slave," I said, my voice filled with the superiority that she had shown earlier. "I am not undressed yet, Slut." I reminded her, "You will have plenty of time to worship your new god soon."
Yan's eyes finally uncrossed, and she looked up at me. Fear showed on her face but more importantly, lust and desire as she had to look past my breasts to see my eyes. I took in that look and felt my cock throb all over. Yan looked down at my cock that was now right against her face, still with my hands controlling it, and I slapped her one more time, making her wince slightly.
Yan's hands began to move again, and I felt her hands move down to my feet, and she noticed my shoes. She untied my shoes with a simple slip of the knot, and I stepped up with the pants still around my ankle as she pulled them off. I could see the blush of shame and humiliation as she did this and quickly followed up with the other before both my shoes were off and my pants a moment later.
I let go of my cock and let it spring back up to my breasts and looked down at Yan with my cock throbbing against my breasts now. I watched her with the eyes of a predator as she finally looked up, seeing me standing over her with my fat cock and balls and massive breasts as a stare of a predator looked down at her. A smirk lifted my lips, and my cock moved side to side as it throbbed. I noticed her shiver as she looked up at me.
"Slave," I began with contempt dripping from my tone, "I am still wearing panties." My voice lashed, and Yan looked surprised to see the black panties pushed off to the side of my cock, pushing them aside. Yan's face blushed a deep red, and she remained kneeling as she lifted her hands to the black straps hooking her fingers between my hips and the panties. Yan's fingers glided down and slowly brought them down my thighs as she looked up at me.
"I am so sorry, Mistress," Yan apologized, "Please forgive me," She begged slightly.
I looked down at her, and my eyes narrowed as I watched her and her fingers glided down slowly against my legs, slowly reaching my ankles as I watched her. I didn't say a thing, and she shivered under my unrelenting gaze. Finally, I stepped out of my panties and quickly said, "Kiss my feet, Slave and show that you are ready."
Yan froze in the spot then a moment later, and I felt her lips kiss my foot. I felt my cock throb not in pleasure but in our dominance over this international businesswoman as she lifted her face from one foot to the other. I felt that the humiliation play would end at the end of this for now as I felt her lips kiss my other foot, and she looked up at me. "Yes, Mistress," Yan said, her voice one of humiliation and desire. "I am ready, please, show tell me your will!"
I couldn't help the large smile on my face, and my cock throbbed, pressing against my breasts as it bobbed up and down in anticipation. "Good, Good," I said, stepping back. "Stand up!" I ordered and took a couple of steps over to the bed, and sat down. "You deserve a reward more than a punishment for all that. So I will ask you one thing, My slutty Slave," I began as I stood by the bed, "As a reward, I will let you choose to have your reward first or your punishment first. Tell me, Slave," I said, my sadistic smile showing in full force like a demon proposing a contract for her soul. "Which do you choose to have first? Punishment or Reward?"
Yan was still on her knees, and I could see her mind blank again. I loved taking her off guard again and again. It kept her from finding out what I would do next and kept that anticipation and fear. it would make it so she would have more choice if she followed instructions and rewarding following those instructions without thought. It would punish thinking twice and hesitation. I wanted her to follow my orders unconditionally and without thought at this time and for later when I fuck that thought out of her mind and put her into a state of bliss.
"Punishment, Mistress," Yan said, her body shivering in the warm hotel room. I could see how hard it was for her to say that, and I looked at her and grinned.
"Very well," I said, no longer standing by the bed. I combined some pleasure with her pain, grabbed something new for her, and pressed the remote for her vibrator off.
Yan looked down, and I got to the suitcase and picked up ten toys. Eight were the same thing, and I loved these little eggs on a wire. They were fully changed and could last a long time. I turned to her and let the toys dangling in my hand in a heap. "Stand, Slave," I ordered, my voice now lacking inflection. "I shall prep you for your punishment," I said after a small pause. I walked over and didn't show the two additions from the vibrating eggs. I had a plan in place, and it was a mixture of punishment and reward.
Chun Yan's mistakes were small ones, and I wanted her to associate the pain from me with pleasure. I didn't want to make her scream in pain like Jake or Alex. Alex loved that pain I noticed, while Jake was just a piece of shit that I didn't care about.
Those thoughts disappeared from my head quickly and instead turned to the surprised woman in front of me. Her Asian beauty took me for a moment, only for my smile to return and grin as I looked at her. "Come here now, Slave," I ordered with a stuck voice, "It is time for things to get started.
With that, I reached the bed and sat down. Yan looked at me for one second longer and stood as I beckoned her with a finger again before putting down the vibrating eggs. Instead, two vibrating clamps came into view for those cute Asian nipples that hadn't had nearly enough attention yet. Yan stepped forward slowly and stopped just before me.
"Good," I told her and stood again with the clamps in one hand, letting the other sit on the bed for the moment. Looking behind her, I could see her juicy pussy still with the vibrator inside, with slick liquids slowly drying on her thighs. Without the vibrator, she may be turned on, but it wasn't increasing the flow, it seemed.
It was time, and I reached forward and cupped her breast softly. I began with her right breast and softly stroked the nipple making her moan lightly. I looked up at her face, and I could see the anticipation and nerves she felt at this moment. She had locked in her choice and now was following through with it. It was hard for her, and I could see the underlying vulnerability and how much she loved and desired it at this moment. My cock throbbed, looking at those eyes and my fingers opened up the clamp, and the teeth of the clamp dug into her nipple.
"MMMM!" Yan groaned and moaned at the sudden sensory input as I squeezed her breast a little before letting go. She looked down at the clamp and the wire attached to it. There was a small protrusion on both sides of the clamp, and I could see her eyes examining it as I put the remote on the bed. I turned and picked up the second and turned to her left breast, and this time I cupped it for only a small moment before squeezing it and putting the clamp down on that hard nipple. Yan directly groaned with a sexy voice, and I felt my need for release increase, which I ignored.
I loved these moments and the build-up to that first penetration. It was something that I was quickly learning about myself since I met Crystal, and I have only grown that need since then. I loved the domination of this moment, and I grinned as I put the remote on the bed after letting go. "Good girl," I said, turning on the remotes and putting up the vibrations to the minimum settings.
"OH! MMMMMM!" I heard behind me as I turned on the remotes, and her surprised moan filled the room. Yan, without realizing it, confirmed my thoughts about her sensitive breasts with that single moment, and I turned to look down at her pussy.
Red-drenched panties covered a teal butterfly that was no longer needed. "Lose the panties without crouching. Hand me the drenched vibrator when done." I ordered before turning like I didn't care about her. I heard a moan as she got to work while I quickly untangled the wires behind me and sat down.
Sitting down, I was looking at her again, and my cock was against my breasts, which were still covered in my black bra. Yan was now holding a teal vibrator in her hand, her pussy now uncovered, showing a tight slit that almost kept her entire pink pussy from view.
I grabbed the remotes and tapped my lap with the other hand. "Lay down on my lap for further prep and punishment, Slave," I ordered her, put the remotes to the other side, and indicated which way I wanted her to lay down on my lap.
Yan swallowed dryly; her face was red, and the anticipation and nerves probably had reached their peak. I had no idea what the mature Asian beauty was thinking about at this moment as a person much younger than her dominated her in the bedroom. She walked on those red heels over to me and laid her stomach down onto my lap just after I pushed my cock down between my legs, increasing the amount of lap she could lay down on.
Yan's lightly toned stomach was on my legs, and her breasts were on one side. Her juicy pale ass was on the other ready for me to punish with her juicy pussy and ass ready to be punished. I decided that the paddling was not quite ready, and I twisted the nobs with one hand turning up the settings on her breasts lightly. I heard a soft moan of pleasure coming from Yan, and my hands stroked her ass lightly with only a slightly visible red line from the crop earlier.
"Since you love red so much," I began as I picked up the vibrating eggs and turned them on. The low vibration filled the room with sound now as more and more vibrators turned on. "I thought we might start with turning your ass into a nice deep dark red," I told her as I stroked her ass, then reached down with the vibrator and pushed it into her pussy. As I did so, I pushed a finger into her pussy and felt her pussy clench down on my finger a little.
I confirmed in one second that Yan loved this with how wet her tight cunt was. It was ready for me to plunder now, and my cock throbbed against her stomach. I pulled my finger out, grabbed a second vibrator, and turned it on with a higher setting before I brought it down to her pussy. Instead of pushing it in, I teased her clit, making her moan loudly, and I felt a small spray of fluids on my hand as I did so.
Surprise filtered through me, and I looked down at the blushing Asian on my lap. "Did you just squirt a little, Slave?" I asked.
I saw her open her mouth, and I pushed the vibrator into her at that moment, making her loudly moan out the reply, "Yes, Mistress!" Her voice as she moaned out the confirmation made my cock throb even more, and I quickly grabbed another egg vibrator and turned it up to a mid-high setting, and quickly shoved this one in deep.
"We haven't even got to the reward phase, and you want to cum?" I asked, my voice dark with unfelt anger.
"Sorry, Mistress!" Yan moaned as the vibrators, now hitting each other inside her started to sound in the room.
I reached for another egg vibrator and turned it on with a sinister smile she couldn't see. I grabbed a second, and both were turned to max settings. "No, You are not," I clarified to her. "You are not sorry, but you will be," I told her, making my words sinister. A second later, I shoved in one vibrator just inside her before using the second to push both vibrators inside at the same time.
"OOOOOooooooHHHH!" Yan moaned out with a large o shaped mouth. It looked almost comical on her face, but I said nothing.
I had better things to pay attention to as her asscheeks trembled, and the sound of vibrators filled the room. My hand reached for the dial on the clamps, and I turned them up and noticed her legs trembling a little; I knew I would need to hurry up.
I quickly grabbed the last three vibrators, and I used her pussy's juices to lube them up; just when she probably thought that I was going to put them in her pussy I brought them up to her little asshole and shoved the first one in.
"AH!" Yan screamed in surprise at the sudden penetration into her backdoor. I wasn't sure if she knew I was into anal too, but I didn't hear further protest as that scream of surprise turned into a moan as I turned on the vibrator inside her ass to a mid-setting teasing her sphincter and just inside her. Her ass seemed to try to push it out naturally, and I grabbed the second and turned it on, and pressed it against her clit, using her pussy juices to lubricate it as my wrist pressed against her ass, pushing the vibrator back in, making her moan. Her ass started to shake, and her legs started to tremble. I could already tell that she was gearing up to cum.
I brought the second egg and pushed it into her, and I heard her moan even louder. I turned on the last vibrating egg and quickly brushed it down the slit of her drenched pussy before bringing it back up to her ass and shoving it in. Subsequently pushing all the others inside her ass deeper making her tremble.
"OH FUCK!" Yan screamed out, and I reached out, grabbed the paddle, and turned the flat side to her ass first lightly. I could feel her coming closer and closer by the second to orgasm as I rubbed her ass.
"Punishment time!" I loudly declared to her without waiting to bring the paddle back, flipping it over to the studded side. My anticipation for what was to come made my cock throb against her flat stomach hard, and my hand brought down the studded paddle on her ass.
I watched her expression and eyes open wide as the studded paddle landed home, pushing vibrators in, and her pale ass cheeks rippled as it landed home. "OH, GOD!" Chun Yan, a Chinese businesswoman from Southeast Asia, screamed out. The next moment her pussy erupted, and her ass shit out a vibrator from her ass against the paddle.
"NO," I declared, and I took the vibrator and shoved it right back in, making her cry out.
"OH GOD CUMMING!" Yan screamed as her pussy juices squirted out again, and I brought the paddle back. A moment later, that studded paddle landed on her ass, making her scream all over, "FUCK! GOD!~" Yan screamed out again, her voice sexier than ever before as she was in mid-orgasm. I pulled back the paddle and flipped it over, and brought it down hard on her ass, making it ripple and her scream louder. "IT HURTS!~" She screamed, her voice sensual, and her legs trembled as her body rocked forward.
No mercy, I thought, and the paddle came down again as her pussy and legs trembled. I heard the vibrators clashing against each other inside of her, and the paddle came down on her ass, sending more vibrations straight to her womb, making her scream, "MISTRESS!" The paddle came down again and her ass vacated a vibrator again. It went a bit of a distance this time and I didn't chase after it.
"THIS!" I declared, bringing down the paddle again, "IS!" I yelled over her screaming voice, "FOR!" The paddle came down again, making her ass quickly turn red, and my arm pinned her in place as her legs tried to shove herself forward to escape. "BEING NAUGHTY!" I finished my declaration.
"SORRY!" Yan screamed with no dignity left as her legs trembled. I tossed the paddle away, and my hand came down.
"SORRY FOR WHAT?!" I asked over her scream.
"SORRY FOR BEING A NAUGHTY SLAvE!" She screamed out, uncaring if others could hear.
My hand came down hard three times in quick succession, and her ass vacated another vibrator out into the room as her legs trembled, and I brought my hand up. "CUM ONE MORE TIME, AND I WILL FORGIVE YOU!" I declared into the room, and my hand quickly fell down on her pussy; her screaming ended, and her eyes widened. I saw something special as it started from her toes. I saw them curl up her legs and her pussy gushed, and her ass vacated the last vibrator spitting it out into the room. Her ass cheeks trembled under my hand, and her cunt started spraying my hand with fluids as her hips trembled against my leg, and her abdomen started a moment later against my cock. My cock throbbed in reply even as her breasts trembled a moment later and her arms pressed against my legs a moment later.
I watched her full body orgasm from both pain and pleasure from her toes to her head, and her wordless scream made me want to take her now. Her head tilted back, and her whole body trembled, and a moment later, her scream echoed in the room like a slut being taken for the best ride of her life.
"Shàngdì bāngzhù wǒ, wǒ zhèngzài gāocháo!" She screamed out in her native tongue, "I'M CUMMING MISTRESS! I AM CUMMING!" She began to scream and repeat. A moment later, I smelled her liquids pouring down, and I didn't know if she also pissed herself, but I didn't smell any urine at this point. Her body shook on my lap, and I could no longer take it.
Her body slumped down, and her eyes were dazed; I pulled vibrators out of her, her moaning as I did so. That was the punishment, and soon it was time to make her serve before the reward came. That would come later after she served her Mistress Properly.
My cock throbbed in anticipation of what was to come, and I let Yan rest as I slowly took the last of the vibrators from her pussy. Tonight had just begun, and I couldn't wait to start.
Comments
Shamim
I really loved it, 😍
Madjic
Hey guys, I am still sick, but I am starting to improve. I think I did a good job on this chapter yesterday and double-checked after sleeping again. Let me know what you think, and Enjoy if I get enough complaints, though, I will edit since I did the chapter while sick. Hope you all Enjoy it!
