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Futanari System Chapter 126: Tiebreaker

🕑 Added 2021-08-03 05:23:42 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

Good chapter!!!

Grangel

"Francis wouldn't take that excuse, and I wouldn't be in his position either. " remove the 'be'

Grangel

"Neither of these two wanted to give the other a small wound to give the other an out to live their life." this sentence needs to be fixed, it doesn't make sense...

Madjic

So I went over the chapter with a much clearer mind than what was essentially 10 pm for me at night. I did need to make some changes, but they were not very large ones. It was simply acknowledging things, but the attacks wouldn't have done much anyways to swing the fight in fact. I realized that Francis wouldn't have been affected by the damage it would have caused with both his personality and fighting style. Sorry for that. Please Enjoy!


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