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Life of a Dominant Futanari Book 1: Epilogue Attempt #2

🕑 Added 2021-06-05 04:20:59 +0000 UTC

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Mr.Tiemos

Only on rereading this have I noticed that Angela’s mother is sniffing quite a bit when Angela came back home smelling like sex. Foreshadowing?

Grangel

Maybe this dream chapter could be the prologue to the next book... with a little fixing to the style I think

Grangel

Well written!! I agree this is more along the lines with the rest of you chapters!! Closes the week and sets the anticipation for the next week and beyond.

Ritsu 229

I think you should keep the other one too, but label it as a extra or bonus, and call it something like ' Angela's Dream' or something

Azurite Paladin

This one is a nice close for the 1st week everything feels wrapped up but open for the weeks ahead

Madjic

This is a second attempt at the Epilogue. The cold welcome of my first attempt made me feel like I might want to try something more along with my normal writing style. Tell me what you think.


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