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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 3 Chapter 69/1: New Locks

🕑 Added 2021-11-17 00:54:33 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

Great chapter!! This is about the right time for rumors to start with everything she has been doing these 2 weeks, now to see who was talking and consider what to do about this... if there is anything that can be done.... rumors will fly no matter what one does... and stopping them is hard because they could already be flying through out the entire school.... plus all the other items she has to deal with now a new one gets tossed on her plate... should be an interesting week.... I look forward to the next chapter!! Keep up the wonderful work!!

Grangel

"Alex's reaction was to smile with a radiant smile that I would place on a kid that just got a Christmas gift that they wanted all year." I think you don't need the 'to smile with' at the beginning

Grangel

"I finished with a grin making sure he had his phone on him as I grabbed min again." I believe 'min' should be 'mine'

Grangel

"Sweety knew better to talk, and I could see the anticipation on her face." I believe you need a 'than' between 'better' and 'to'

Mr.Tiemos

She was happy for five minutes! But really, it’s no surprise that rumors are starting to spread considering Angela and Crystal walked through the school together during lunch last week (iirc). Then again, it could be that someone ‘overheard’ Angela ‘playing’ with someone in the teacher’s locker-room… or saw her getting in Alex’s car without knowing who’s car it was… Too many variables. Regardless, next chapter is going to be a doozy!

Madjic

Hey guys, Finished this up since I wanted to get it out. I am about 500 - 1000 words into a chapter on all my other stories. Just wasn't feeling them today with the shit weather here in Canada. Anyways Enjoy!


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