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Life of a Dominant Futanari Week 3 Prologue

🕑 Added 2021-11-15 01:05:05 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

I do question the wording of one sentence..."I didn't need to see her see it to know her most likely reaction if she saw it. "... this is almost a tongue twister and the use of see...see...saw makes the sentence very hard to read... there must be a better way to write what you want to convey here...

Grangel

Seems good for a Prologue, so much to do... so many story lines still to follow... Keep up the good work...

Madjic

I start the Weeks on Monday since that is where the first book started. I end the books on Sundays leaving the weekends for last.

Mr.Tiemos

Ah, quick question: is this chapter set on Sunday or Monday (in story)? By this line, “As I remember that Monday, which would be three weeks ago tomorrow-“, it would seem to be Sunday, but at the end she is running to the school with her school gear (backpack, textbooks, ‘equipment’ for Jake). Otherwise, thank you for the chapter!

Madjic

A little earlier than I was expecting to bring it out. But here it is. Let me know what you think since I feel it is a little short. Enjoy nonetheless!


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