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Life of a Dominant Futanari Chapter 64/35 Version alternate

🕑 Added 2021-10-22 15:49:44 +0000 UTC

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Grangel

Both are good but I also agree she shouldn't bring up her own branding... that should be from someone else and I agree to liking the idea of all of her woman getting a brand with their pet names underneath them or at least just the pet name initials would be fine..... also they each can chose where to put it if Angela allows it so it can be hidden or pronounced depending on their situation... example: A woman like Hilda can't have something that can be seen in her normal day life (not saying she will get one, just an example)...

Mr.Tiemos

tldr: Second is better story-wise, first has a smoother transition, so a mix of both would probably be best? The second is a better ending in regards to how Becky breaks down, but I feel like she shouldn’t be the one to bring up the brand; I feel like Samantha and/or Crystal should be the one(s) to do so when they get into the house and see how Becky has broken down. Just that, it feels unnatural for the request of a ‘brand’ to come from Becky when Samantha and Crystal were the ones to bring it up to Angela before. It would be interesting if the brand had some personalization to it. In example: if the brand is like Crystal and Samantha talked about before (a purple? Diamond with the letter ‘F’), then for Crystal specifically it could have the word ‘Minx’ underneath (don’t know about specific coloring or font). For Alex it would be ‘Sweety’, Tracy is ‘Skank’, so on and so forth. The important part is that Becky’s would either be ‘Cum Dump’ if she fully breaks down, or abbreviated as ‘CD’ to not make it so obvious. OR, beneath the ‘brand’ would be something that symbolizes their names: Crystal’s I’m not too certain (a heart with the stereotypical succubus tail and horns?) but Alex’s is a candy (the one that looks like a bow tie or maybe a lollipop), and the rest I really have no idea…

jon dumey

Honestly I think if you remove the part where Becky mentions the brand in her breakdown and switch the last paragraph or so with the first ending it would feel more complete 1 because Angela bringing up the brand feel a bit more natural in a sense bc crystal mentioned it a while ago before meeting Becky and 2 Beckys breakdown felt more thorough in this one but overall this one feels more complete in regards to Becky, ending feels decent but the first one felt more “right” in a sense(no clue how to explain it any better that’s the best I’ve got)

Azurite Paladin

Okay ending two is good in its own way having Becky break down is the natural progression of her and having the tattoo idea come back is good now I think that the two endings show become one crystal should mention that it's a good idea and she wants a branding tattoo too and then Angela can think about it and then confirm it like she did in the first one (if what I wrote makes no sense tell me I'm on painkillers right now)

Han Pol

well she is new to being a Domina so it feels more natural that it would be one of the subs ideas and she just ran's with it. I will still wonder what it will be or maybe we can vote on different designs ;)

Royce321

Yea, it's the reason I like the original better. If it was added to this or the start of the next chapter I'd like this one more.

Curtis1122

I like the second one better, but I think it would still be good if she came up with the idea of her own brand


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