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Spicy of the Month๐ฌ๐๐ฅ๐คซ
🕑 Added 2022-06-30 17:54:08 +0000 UTCOcs: NYX and Jenn (now with white cyberpunk hair๐๐) plus our lovely guest Crystal๐คญ๐ Don't worry, I'm pretty sure she's having fun. I mean I would if I were there๐คทโโ๏ธ๐
Link will be sent to y'all's inboxes soon๐ค๐
Well, all in all, not happy with this piece tbh๐ not happy at all. But at least I've managed to figure out what I need to improve๐ค... again๐ฌ๐
I gotta start doing some things and gotta stop doing some things... I gotta stop rushing my artworks, I gotta start spending more time thinking about what I'm drawing and how it's gonna look๐๐ I gotta start looking at more references and gotta stop just inventing stuff where it doesn't fit... Gotta work on my faces still, and gotta work on that shading... oh and add darker shadows and blacks in it so my drawings don't come out looking all soft and bright๐ฃ๐ well, practice patience and persistence I guess๐ช๐
Anyhoo, can't do anything about this piece now๐ So next month shall have two Spicy of the month pieces...๐ค๐ Need to remember to make them in cartoony style though, especially if I'm gonna use more than one full-body character ๐ค๐
Gotta work harder๐๐ Better and Smarter...๐๐ Cheers y'all...๐
Comments
Reflection
Love this piece :) Jenn is right when she should be ;-)
Vivacious Alice
THANKIUUUU so so much hun๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐๐๐ And yes, you're absolutely right๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ค๐ค๐ Darn it, i gotta start putting more thought into my work ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐๐๐ well, I'm noting these down in my 'stuff to improve' list๐ค๐
Blazertbro
I think the rendering is still strong in this piece. Some advice I would give would be to improve the connection between all characters. Maybe some more dynamic poses to show off the "intimacy". You can try pressing the bodies against each other. More "squish" :P
