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Thank you for your comments and constructive criticism.

🕑 Added 2025-07-21 00:18:21 +0000 UTC

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Sam Kemp

I missed out on the post asking for comments. Currently on a break from CS. The transition from the war in Essos was just really abrupt, it kinda threw off the rythm of the story. Plus, it felt like you were looking to transition to a jumpchain style story,mso I was waiting for this arc to finish to binge it and get caught up.

ParaPhone

I use grammarly when writing essays but you’d still need to read it to make sure it makes sense


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