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Celestial Smith Chapter 35

🕑 Added 2025-02-05 14:08:54 +0000 UTC

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Henry Smith

I hope we get more ship battles!

Henry Smith

If you want an idea of how to write naval battles from the perspective of a captain, I have kind of an odd suggestion. Go read the Her Majesty’s Dragon series, it has really good descriptions of an officer in command of a crew during combat and although they are commanding dragons, the dragons are treated similarly to a ship in that they have a crew and fight in formation. Plus its a fantastic book.

weird song

are you going have the north attack the slavery alliance and the ironborn or attack the rest of the ships waiting for white harbor to be taken?

Iori Daemona Angel

Hahaha, this was cathartic

Xuzar Horan

Must not really be good with writing naval battle if someone sees errors.

Xuzar Horan

Very sorry.

Xuzar Horan

Will work on it

Retroman

Good chapter but some of the commentary on the naval battle came across as repetitive...

Theodore c

2. What a great chapter. Since he’s claiming the Old Gods was his salvation for this, I wonder how strongly the old religion resurgence will impact Westeros. Also, the entire world now knows that the balance of power has shifted from the agrarian south, to the more industrialized north, and house stark enjoys a monopoly on technology, feudal legalistic power, and the spiritual head and defender of the nation’s religion. I hope you continue to talk about the effects of the maritime economy shifting northwards from KL & places like old town hurting from decreased trade & the maesters monopoly on scientific advancement disappearing. Also, the north has plunged swathes of the reach into poverty by lowering global prices. Imagine how the lower classes will react to the “system” in a deep recession. Peasant uprisings!