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🕑 Added 2025-01-29 08:05:59 +0000 UTCHope you all don't mind the next post being Monday. And I have seen your opinions and decided the forge will be slower giving abilities. One roll every 10 chapters.
Owen is still due a roll however as I take has been 10 chapters since 20, so feel free to roll and post what you got. First roll comment wins.
Getting better. Sore throat clearing.
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Sunny Singh
Hey I took a sick day to read your story today. Keen for it to continue. Love it so far, and waiting to see how it all continues. Just some thoughts: - Focus maybe more on people Beyond-The-Wall - create a couple settlements beyond to station people or upgrade Hardholme - Start exploring deep sea and what has sunk to the bottom to find all manner of surprises - could even relate to Starks who went West and never returned - What if you sent an exploration fleet out West and maybe even find descendants - Explore other continents, if not, use the upgraded Stark and Northern forces to begin fighting against slavery - Essos slowly becomes a colony of the North - Bring in fantastical elements through the Celestial Forge like an enhanced world tree seedly you can mix in with the Weirwood or a manner for Dwarves and Elves to exist maybe? Somewhere like Ulthos or Sothoryos. - Personal view of Northern Lords and what the changes have done for them so far - this is something I want to see, especially for Mormonts and Northern Houses like Frost, Amber, Greenwood and others you explain still exist. - Discovery of certain magical beings and creatures native to the world but hidden or obscured to the point they could only be discovered by the steamwalkers. - TRAINS! Or better transportation across the North. - Show the development of its artistic and cultural side as music, artwork, and other such things become more prominent as wealth and prosperity increases. I cannot think of anything else but focus on the end goal of what you wish to see created and make sure you remain in sight of that.
Xuzar Horan
All chapters are on ao3
Xuzar Horan
What do you mean?
Mac
Where have the first few chapters of this story gone?
PhotoStorm
prehaps some sort of teacher perk so mc could build a techno/magic school? he's the single point of failure if something happens to him no one else will be able to build or maintain any of his stuff.
Savagesmiley
Just get him something like making him a child of Hephaestus and giving him and his child a bit more magic
Dea
He just got rid of Bloodraven, the animal controlling hivemind. So perhaps some sort of robot/technokinesis, so he can spy better and keep his ships and borders safe from Southerners, Wildlings and the Gods-forsaken Essosi
Retroman
Next do smithing techniques of celebrimbor LoTR. Have him make some mithril weapons, cutlery etc
Xuzar Horan
No...as rolls are controlled by the amount of chapters I write, not in universe time
Erick Myrthil
You also had a four year time-skip. Surely he had some new rolls in that time?
ThatGuyMo
Glad you're getting better! Definitely don't mind waiting.
