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Celestial smith chapter 27
🕑 Added 2025-01-19 17:29:23 +0000 UTCCelestial smith chapter 27: Seeing is believing
9k words. Started writing around 4am cause i couldn't sleep. Its 8pm now. Never doing that again
I have said this on my discord but ill say it here
I just want to point out that in scenes or chapters when I know there are many characters and I don't mention them, I am sorry but it is hard for every character to have input or appear in a scene or chapter. Just know they are there but I either forgot them or didn't know what input I could put for them in convos.
I almost messed up by forgetting the Tullys were there and they only were given a mention at the end. I am verry sorry.
Anyway enjoy until next time.
Comments
Xuzar Horan
will correct in the public chapter. wanted to show him still drunk and confused but i went overboard. Thank you for criticism
Fire_Fox2590
They will be SUPER pissed off when they fail. And will probably do something REALLY stupid.
YayPepto
I'm thoroughly enjoying the story, obviously because I actually joined the Patreon! My concern with this chapter is the hyper fixation on Robert "Booze-addled brain" or his "drunken brain". It got really repetitive.
Hayden Williams
Don't apologize, the chapter was excellent!
Richard Alvarez
I hope Ned was at least smart enough to betroth all of his children. No Southern matches.
Iori Daemona Angel
I bet it will be because of Sansa's Goddess level beauty
weird song
you could always have owen heal willas of his limp to gain reach favour
weird song
I bet one of the southern ladies tries to seduce owen in the next chapter or two
PhotoStorm
that was allot fun. am guessing not one will be picking there mouths off the floor for the next few months lol. hope Owen keeps his invisibleity spells to hand. u know all those noble lady's are going to be hunting him 😄
Nisiris
I have question, in the rebellion, the Arryn became hand of king, Baratheon became king, and the gold digging late comer that didn't lose anything Lannister had his daughter became queen... What did North get? How was North rewarded for it's work? And now South will demand more without anything good in return? Hopefully this North will not become doormath, Ned's oath to Robert or not, his first priority should be North and his people wellbeing and honor, honor that was constantly stepped on
Rachel N
MAGNIFICENT CHAPTER!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Lictor Magnus
Thanks for the chapter! As amazing as everything else they’ve seen so far has been the ability to magically hide an army has got to be the most terrifying thing for the other lords to see 😅
Psyren1596
I just know Joffrey is going to cause some stupid incident, can’t wait for the fallout
Iori Daemona Angel
This was worth reading the shocked expression of everyone. Urgh, Cersei that old bitch is gonna be trouble...
ShinySpiritomb
Many thanks for the beefy chapter.
