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🕑 Added 2025-08-09 13:19:26 +0000 UTC

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the batman

Welcome!!!!

blaiz

Thanks for the chapter and for your hard work

the batman

thanks!!! yeah the last 4 chapters will have extra quality because well, out of 19k words, 13 k is written one year ago before this story is published and i have re-read it dozens of time over the year, all the while changing it when i see something i didn't like.... also being like a climax arc and full of conversations which is my easy thing to write all enhances the quality.... yeah canon is officailly over.... change is coming...

the batman

as of now mc with grandma convo is in plans... for daemon she is almost irrelevant and it is just for gloating over a old woman.... yeah vissy and rhaenys will not just allow loosing their position.... but unlike the idiots during dance thwy are very careful and decided to wait and see how the game will end upon... they are very cautious and will appear loyal until they could get some kind of winning trump card... who knows, by the time something like that happenes, they may be really loyal to daemon because, well daemon is exceptionally charming and charismatic when needed.... his own abilities enhance them to insane degree...

the batman

it is precog dream...hightowerrs have intermarried with the garderners after all..... not daemon snow messing.. he has no reason for messing with otto till now....

the batman

yep.. one of the most foolish thing the GOOD queen did.... i have seen somewhere that it is just G R R M satisfying his fetish and pure author fiat....

fireball77

Viserra's Manderly marriage in OTL was such a dick move by Alyssanne, especially since she knew Viserra would have NOTHING after Theomore died, since she had married some of her ladies-in-waiting to his son's some thirty years earlier

Lord Sturm

Is Hightower getting precog dreams due to having magic talent or is it Red Demon messing?

TyrantGod

Will you do a 1 on 1 MC grandma conversation? Mc will troll her so much. Looks like how things r going MC will be forced to wipe out the velayrons anyway. Both Viserys n Rhaenys r stubborn idiots. Can’t wait to see how the MC will put them in their place?

Lord Sturm

they are 66+ years...

KickedElm0

You know the Old king with old queen are only in they 55 years you can make them live till like 90 years before they kick the bucked for safty reasons

AJ

I like the vibe of the chapter, I also think that the previous chapters were amazing as an climax to an arc and I know some times the transition to an another arc can be awkward but it’s better than others . I’m looking forward to this part of the story because for most of the story Daemon the elder has been avoiding/ not wanting to have any relationship with the Targaryen and he was developing in the North. He has already changed things by having Aemma pushing Viserys to claim another dragon and Corlys wanting to learn magic. Plus a rift now formed between Visery and Daemon the Younger earlier than canon .

the batman

ah well... lets see in next chapter..... it is hard for me to write without conversations... last 4 chapters of both ads and glh has been entirely full of conversation and this one has barely any... maybe thats why it seems off to you... yeah i got one place it was something else.... corrected it...

the batman

ohh?? don't know what happened... if it is the rhaenys portion then maybe it was i wrote it at the end after chapter was ready to publish and i realised how i missed rhaenys... and edited it at the same time... usually i write it and edit it the next day.

the batman

yeah !!! i had to include it when this hit me ... 🤣🤣🤣

TyrantGod

This chapter seems off. Compared to GLH, ADS quality seems to have fallen. Baleon name is spelled wrong.

avatarjedi

Glad for the update! In the over the year I’ve subscribed to your Patreon I’ve never commented on writing quality, but the Viserys section read as exceptionally clunky in comparison to your usual writing.

Rachel N

You ran away and married a bastard,” Alysanne snarled. “From what I heard, you did the same thing, Mother,” Gael shot back. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


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