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A Forest Where the Rain Goes Up | 20 |

🕑 Added 2021-11-30 00:47:12 +0000 UTC

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Cuddly Canine

Ah the Crack Crack Rip, I see it now. Imo without a "timeline split" or "dream" visual effect for the unrealized actions it won't be very intuitive to understand for most people. But enough about that, I'll let you get on with the plot. :)

SpiritD

Yeah a lil so that Legoshi doesn't get too cuddly and canine happy in front of others xD Not really in his lap more like Legoshi came over to hug him and is leaning towards him. As for the last panel notice the last page and this one, also the black frame instead of the white, it's not actually happening. It's Louis having very conflicting thoughts, and they are literally represented in his head ( and on the page) as another him. In the previous page you can see the two splitting and even in this one on the top left you can see another set of horns of the original Louis still sitting there, same as in the last panel. I wanted to show in a surreal way and without words what is going on in his head ^^

Cuddly Canine

Louis getting pretty handsy there, very cute. Is he on Legosi's lap? Where did Legosi go in the last panel? Just out of frame?

SpiritD

So happy you are excited to see more and thank you, I loved working on the lighting there too!

Sirom

Aww, these are such wonderful panels here and the lighting in this one is sooo good! I think it's one of your best here. :D I can't wait to see what's next!