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Duskbound 2- Chapter 31

🕑 Added 2025-02-11 14:01:18 +0000 UTC

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Gwalmeich

Especially with them having seeds of corruption on hand. Those things don't just come out of nowhere.

TheShadowSlayer_

She merged her monster tracking skill? Ugh, that’s going to be a pain. Not that she had a choice, really, since that’s how the magic system works, but still

Tom C

Ahah my comment was similar. It’s like Shakespeare and hamlet vs one of his comedies, and in the comedy there’s a pivot away from the tragic at key moments but one thing different and it’d be awful. Velik doesn’t seem to be getting any of those pivots. It’s all going down hill! Sorry if I’ve not explained myself v well!

Tom C

Awww I feel sad for Velik. It’s like a shakespearian tragedy. Or a Greek one? If only things had gone a little bit different. if he’d encountered good ppl in town. If the guild hadn’t been corrupt. But all his misgivings keep getting reinforced by the shittiness of the people he meets. Doesn’t bode well for his growth as a person. Might bode well for him turning into an amoral killing machine though… in which case, fuck it! Bring on the murder-hobo Velik! Always fun to read haha TFTC

Silver Beard

Just seems like he's been consigned to live the life of a fugitive forever. Get you a portable habitat and go wild. When you pass the century mark, what others think or attempt to do won't matter at all.

Silver Beard

Screw storage; Velik needs a portable home. Then he can just keep moving around, leveling until he hits 100.

sebsebs

I bet the one who ordered the hit is an agent of corruption

Warren Zielke

A bit of a comment on the dialogue from the mercs - it largely wouldn't matter that they thought one of the party was a monster, they clearly attacked a party of people. I think you could have one of the party acknowledge this without changing the theme of the chapter

lenkite

Noting wrong with being a [Wild Hermit]. Spend another 5-10 years in the wild and everyone will forget about him anyways. Its not a bad way to let problems die out, lol.

Nick Nicholson

Honestly I think this story would be better if he took off on his own. The second he got to town the story got pretty damn boring.

Thaabit Rivertree

This story is turning into something of a tragedy at this point (genre wise)

Selvias

Dang it really sucks to be Velik, the only thing he wants is to keep minding his own business, but he keeps getting fucked over by humans again and again.


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