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Book 5, Chapter 55

🕑 Added 2024-12-25 14:40:26 +0000 UTC

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EmergencyComplaints

Thanks. I'll add this to my list of typos to make sure the editor caught when I get the manuscript for book 5 back.

Anne

Bouncing Ammun around between his forces mines: HAHAHAHAHAHA

Anne

Paragraph 18, second sentence

Anne

"Immediately, flew straight up to put some distance between me and the force mines..." There is no subject in this sentence. I think it should say, "Immediately, I flew up..."


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