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Writathon project: Duskbound Chapters 31-34

🕑 Added 2024-11-22 14:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Yshua

I can’t say this story has done too far in that direction. I also dislike misunderstanding-based story development, but some amount makes sense. We’re still doing well here.

Silver Beard

I like story, but it's beginning to get annoying seeing both sides and how they 'should' work together instead of fumbling around having to wait for them to either grow up, run over each other or magic a group event into being.

EmergencyComplaints

Whoops. Thank you. Fixed.

Yshua

> Praise remained as effusive as always, but Jensen was used to it. Praise remained as elusive as always, but Jensen was used to it.

Yshua

Started this yesterday, just caught up. Good story!

Silver Beard

A bit bothered MC didn't look for a class skill or utility skill like mana-sense (now we know about it). I get the whole physical build, but I think that's topped...he should be filling in his weakness not expanding his strengths. Oh well.

Jeremy Goldberg

I wonder how she knew about that ritual to get a new class?

Bookworm bibliophile

She is lovely charecter but somehow I am getting annoyed by her. it feels like her class is too unique for a village girl and the only thing that so far make her stand out is her compassion towerd mc. It feels like she is rewarded by her been close freind of Mc.

Silver Beard

Thanks


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