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《Legoshi & Bill Part 2》p19-23

🕑 Added 2023-11-06 21:16:27 +0000 UTC

Comments

Baneko

I would be down for french kissing haha. Agreed, Legoshi is so dang adorable. ❤

Antediluvian

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈lemedodis4u

Monsieur Foxy

I guess Frenching and tonsil jousting is the only way. LET THEM KISS *cries* Legoshi is such a Precious Big Bean... I can't he's so cute and adorable and foofy with that SNOOT picture... I want him as a sticker.

Baneko

I can see that, maybe Legoshi could kiss similarly to how he "kissed" Riz? it's not a big deal if they don't kiss, I'm still enjoying this comic quite a lot. At the very least, maybe Legoshi could just lick around bills mouth with Bills tongue sticking out too? And Legoshi can just lick his way slowly down bills body until he reaches his cock. Idk, I just really wanna see Legoshi and/or Bill use their tongue on each other's body cause their bodies look so good in this comic hahaha!

Hao Sadness

To be honest, I've find it's hard to holding the right position for them to kiss, because you know, how long Legoshi's mouth is and it will be very odd.

Baneko

Those "let me do it for you" faces hahaha! I'm still hoping they kiss at some point, with tongue and all. It's a small detail but I like how you drew Legoshi tongue. Maybe kissing might help get Bill in the mood?

Alex Talbain

Saw the dialogue change and I gotta say, it's a lot better. It definitely works great in context too.

Hao Sadness

Thanks for your advice. maybe I should change the last dialogue to make it seems less offensive.

Alex Talbain

Well, for one, I feel like it's out of place. In the first part, Bill was the one who started it, but then backed out. So it feels odd to me. Second, It's clear that Legosi is the one taking charge, which I like, but for Bill to tell him to do that makes it seem like he thinks he was in control, which he wasn't. Finally, I don't like the idea of having someone bowing before someone just because that person demanded it. I don't like people who have that sense of undeserved superiority because they look down on others or they believe they deserve whatever they want whenever they want it. Don't get me wrong, I know that's not what's happening here, I'm just talking in general. I would have liked it if Bill just gave in and let Legosi take the lead or ask him for help getting in the mood. Makes it seem like it's a mutual attraction where no one has more power in the relationship. But that's just me.