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[LotMG4] Chapter 23: Species Evolution

🕑 Added 2025-06-30 17:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Bryan Dickerson

Thanks as always for the awesome feedback. I decided to go with it because I thought it had more story potential. The idea of all of humanity awakening to psychic powers sets up a lot of fun options and it dovetails nicely with the rise of beasts that's coming a little later. I like the idea about it reducing conflict between people too, I'll make sure to work that in.

Dahlilamma

I was surprised you went psi actually, I thought you’d go meta, make Nicks hyper specialized, But more I think about it long term you can see kids learning Psi as they grow up and through training getting passive defense to psi/maybe telepathy/telekinesis (new race cap through training is 25 right?) Also, many books and stories talk about races with telepathy/empathy are less violent to each other as they can feel it. Of course there would be those that like that but overall much less internal race conflict should emerge. I know I’m rambling..

David Hinton

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David Hinton

I am glad about psi. However, rejuvenation would have been better. 1. Kids aren't going to be in the forest, but on towns. 2. Stealth would've been good if it was more than an hour. Most things in nature is good at patience. The black death has been known to wait 24 hours to kill a lion. They'd wait an hour to kill the person. 3. Most child deaths - even in prehistoric times- were caused by illnesses or injury not predation. The thing that would protect the most children in this world without modern medicine would be a passive healing factor.


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