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Chapters 195-6: Memories and Maintenance
🕑 Added 2024-02-29 18:00:07 +0000 UTCComments
Ocean
Typo reddish TENT. Think this should be TINT. Also this 2nd book started well with the arena arc and it was nice to have an intermission between action, but it does seemed to have stretched on now. Maybe consider cutting this filler arc down in the final print.
Bryan Dickerson
Thanks for the feedback, it will be over soon and the rest of the book will be much faster paced (there won't be anything like it in the next book either). I'll merge some more chapters to shorten the rest.
JC
The pace is very slow right now and from my point of view this takes up too many chapters already.
