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Chapter Seventy-Five: Nick Versus the Pack: Trapmaking 101
🕑 Added 2023-10-24 17:32:09 +0000 UTCComments
Bryan Dickerson
Thanks for the feedback, I'll see if I can improve the chapter.
I enjoy the story but i end up skipping entire paragraphs as there is excessive exposition. The author should have some faith that the readers can understand the logic of the characters actions without their explaining every passing thought that goes through the protagonist’s mind.
