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FULL EPISODE 69 😏

🕑 Added 2023-02-10 01:16:17 +0000 UTC
FULL EPISODE 69 😏
FULL EPISODE 69 😏

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SUBTLE KEANE, *SUBTLE*

Nicole Ant

Oh, I’m definitely open to changing the text and panel order back to how they were if you guys preferred it that way! 😌❤️ Aws, thank /you/ for reading!! 🥹❤️

sunshine2919

Like another person mentioned (@C), I also liked the previous dialogue a little bit better, and I think that the panel first panels should be switched back too, just because I think it flowed better. It effectively shows that Keane was staring at Onyx after he flipped over, but here it shows as if that he was just looking at him from behind and then Onyx flips over. I just think it made more sense before. I also found it hilarious when Keane said, “I can’t believe he let me hug him. I thought he’d flip for sure!” Kind of makes him start to ruminate on their actions and feelings 😆 But ultimately it’s up to the author, and I’m happy to read this beautiful comic!! 💖


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