FULL EPISODE 56 ❤️
🕑 Added 2022-11-03 19:23:45 +0000 UTCWell uh- there’s not much dialogue in this ep so read it slowly so it won’t end too quickly.. 😇🤣✨
Hope you like it~
See you all! 😎❤️
Comments
Wond'ring Lisa
So I'm thinking, what if Keane was using Haley to make Onyx jealous and to try and get his attention? Or are we going to get an arc with Keane trying to decide where his heart lies, Onyx or Haley?
ivitti
AAAAAAAAA IM LITERALLY SCREAMINGFFFFFFKSKSKADKAKDKAKSKAJDAJSJAKDKAKXK
linaaa
its simply too good 😭
Ria
lmao i keep coming back and rereading this chapter too
Sydney
just now realizing he probably has a crush on onyx’s mom
linaaa
oh my god. its barely.. monday.
linaaa
guys i cannot wait much longer :) i feel like i am withering away :) pls :)
Jenlean Alvarado
omfg this got me kicking and screaming
lonely_merman
I just need them to have a honest conversation at this point. The constant interruptions, cliffhangers, and abrupt curveballs are making me feel bad/angry at this point. 😭
Neozone127
My heads spinning 😵💫
Kasper
Totally fair. I wasn’t so much hoping for a love triangle as I was character development lol
Shay
OMFG I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND DRAWING!! YES ONYX GET IT HUN!!!!!!
Meela R.
Onyx went in and I'm thrivin'! That lip bite, those kisses... *squees happily in fujoshi* Madukes coming in all of a sudden made me go "Noooooo" but also "whew" because I was truly scared of what he was gonna say. I hope it doesn't cause a rift between them. I can't wait until they both go into Onyx's room.
Meela R.
I was just thinking that!!! OMG hahahaha!
Meela R.
Same~~~
My_FleetingMind
Not for me I’m afraid. I hate love triangles with a passion and that kind of plot twist would really put me off. Hailey’s barely even in the picture… I feel like this is very much Keane and Onyx’s love story and I hope it stays that way. 💜
sin
oh my god.
Nicole Ant
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Ria
He never had a problem with kissing Onyx for practice. This was something else and i'm pretty sure he figured that out because he told onyx to wait. But yes i really do hope keane will start to realize that he has feelings for onyx too 🤞
Estelle
Keane not only never seemed to have a problem with kissing Onyx but he also admitted not thinking of anyone else while doing so. I hope Onyx's feelings for him will make Keane realize he isn't as straight as he thought
Kasper
I’m not entirety sure what you mean by that, but Keane and Hailey are dating, why not Ethan and Onyx? Same ages. Sure it’s not to everyone’s taste, but a guy can hope :’D
Estelle
I still can't get over the fact they made out like THAT. I expected either Onyx or Keane to freak out ngl
Ria
and by someone i mean onyx 😢
Ria
i feel like he's just gunna try to deny it and say it's only bc of the costume 😭 someone is gunna end up getting hurt
Elli
Onyx went in for the kill~ You go, my guy! Get your man! 👏❤️
uwu moll
i had the same thoughts sadly, however i feel like that’s how he will think of his “feelings” at first but then he will slowly realise that he likes onyx just as he is, OR I COULD BE TOTALLY WRONG IDK LOL
Landon Lu
No i think they didnt upload one of the chapters so i got lost for a moment
Estelle
I’m in love with this story
Alessandro
Rereading first thing in the morning
Ria
i keep rereading this and i keep having this thought of what if keane was only into it because onyx is dressed as a girl 😭 like would he have reacted differently if onyx was wearing his regular clothes?
Ria
bruh they are still underage in this 😭 i dont think the author would do that
probably killua
ima need u to log out 🪵
My_FleetingMind
Nooo!
SoftBoi
Have come back to reread this so many times today. Ahhhhh I can't wait a whole weeekkkkk. But I will! At least you bless us woth teasers in-between. Thank you!
uwunae
S C R E A M I N G … okay, Keane’s hesitation when Onyx got on top of him— bUT HE WAS REALLY INTO IT LEADING UP TO THAT. SO. KEANE. SIR. WHAT’S GOOD HOW YOU FEELING ABOUT ONYX. I’m literally quaking with anticipation!!
Kasper
Not me hoping Ethan and Onyx would get together for a bit 😭
Avery
Yellow sus
Aubrey Allen
So bold and Brave
little bit louder
Onyx was BRAVE this time. I hope it pays off but Keane didn’t seem too sure at the end. (Also it took me forever to type words because my brain was just incoherently screaming)
Pheneix
I knew it!
Wond'ring Lisa
oooooooh, they were really getting into it there <3
Kuro Neko
Omg Onyx ❤️🔥 Gosh whyyy why is mum coming Home..Bad Timing Lady xD
Kuro Neko
I feel that ❤️🔥🤤
Laetiiiiiiii
dang he bold bold
My_FleetingMind
YESSS! 🙏🏻
Carleigh
I think it was the protecting him from a classmate recognizing him along with Keane talking to him saying Onyx is the most beautiful girl Keane has ever seen
Gigi
Onyx deserves girlfriend status after this 🥵 omg onyx gave me a heart attack omg he bit his lip!!!! And he shudder dude if this doesn’t scream official couple idk but omg I have died and gone to heaven thank you!!! thank you!!! You are amazing!!! You kill it!!! You are the best ever!!! I’m literally dying here can’t believe it!!!
Emi Ancheta
Loving the development but hoping it doesn’t put a rift in our boys relationship 😣
Isabella
me too
Sunnybelle
I hope the next conversation doesn’t put some separation in the friendship before realizing their feelings. I hope Keane tells Onyx that he’s always had feelings for him, but didn’t think Onyx would roll that way. 😵💫
Misakai
Nooooooooo Onyx mon how you dare to interrupt😫... I... I want mooooreeeeeee 🥴(this is like caffeine, "Drug")
Sunnybelle
In my head they go back to his room and Keane initiates it this time 🙈
Kaydan Dua
GAYGAYGAYGAYGAY
Landon Lu
Am i the only one who feels a bit lost? What led up to this? Did i miss something 🥲
Moonless silver
I need moreeee
0cosmic_hamster0
loveee itttt
Jaejae The Jar
IM AT WORK BUT I HAD TO TAKE A "SMALL BREk" TO READ THIS AJFVKSHR
Monkey D Celia
Holy 🥵 but… blocked by your own mother is an whole other level
Hunter
Ahhh FINALLY, BUT WHY MUST THE MOTHER INTERUPT!!! but I also love that Keane first thought went to onyx, so cute I can't wait for next Thursday!!
jahnaya
nah fr imma need a good 5 more eps before i can take it💀
uwu moll
read it slower? nah i’ll just reread a couple hundred times
Tyler Eldridge
Omg! I was reading it and slowly watching each scene and I was getting so excited and then his mom broke and I was like she ruined the moment. What's going to happen now omg I can't wait. Hope he starts feeling the same way at least for onyx's sake
My_FleetingMind
Ahaha! My first thought! 😅
NidayghtArmy
I've read some naughty stuff and sometimes don't have any reaction but this has me blushing so hard
Cassie lol
AWWWWWW I CAN'T 🥺 I DUNNO BOUT Y'ALL BUT TO ME THAT ENDING IS ADORABLE
Bambibot
Keane FELT THAT! I’m terrified of what the next convo will be like, but oof😵💫🥵🥰
Bambibot
ABSOLUTELY! I wasn’t ready for what he would say at all😭
vinny
Omg omg omg omg omgomgom sydujsvdjsbdjd
MonoMe
I loved it so much.How are we supposed to wait a week now 😖 I wonder how their conversation will be once they are in his room again🫣
nyla
yah i loved this ep sm
izukugooo
SLAY AGAIN
Chrisp_Bee
Anyone else hear keane’s voice echo in their head about how curious he was to see what lynx would do to seduce him?? 🤣
Miles Westrich
HAHAHAH LITERALLY
illtalont
I'm sure they can still find a doorknob somewhere to hang a sock from. Not to sus right?
MAY✨
I said to myself before I even opened the chapter that his mother was going to be cockblocking 😩😩
Artiø Vollrath
And of course I didn't make a bomb ass wall paper from this chapter lmao
ChaosKekzz
Bc it's a fact 😊
Alessandro
The problem was that they weren't in his room
Artiø Vollrath
This whole chapter was hot and once again I have been left hanging lmao
illtalont
Mom don't come in! I'm doing........ homework!
mars !!
Bestie you have outdone yourself this is beautiful and I am already waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.
Charliie Kreitzer
I flew through the ep so fast...
enbysunshine
How DAREEEEEE SHE INTERRUPT!!
My_FleetingMind
Ngl, the panel with Onyx on top of Keane is ICONIC! 🔥
Payton Crader
AHHH NOW I JUST WANNA KNOW WHAT KEANE IS GONNA SAY 😩😩 IM SO EXCITED FOR ONYX
Ria
first of all i freaking knew his mom would walk in 😭 also WHY THE HECK DID I THINK THAT KEANE WAS TAKING OFF HIS FLANNEL TO HIDE A BONER
Alessandro
But the mum 😑
Alessandro
My fav Ep for sure
jahnaya
I needed that interruption bc that convo was boutta scare me😭😭😭
Gin Kurosu
Yeeeeeeees, love this so much. Assertive Onyx for the win 😩
linaaa
I FEEL LIKE IVE BEEN WAITING MY WHOLE LIFE FOR THIS- I HAVE LIVED UP TO NOW JUST FOR THIS VERY MOMENT
Skye
Lying on my bed kicking my legs in the air squealing omggggggg
- ehcetera -
omg
Ruppolo Evergarden
I like where this is going o.o
My_FleetingMind
Same!
Moises
Ok for sure best episode by far, I wonder if they would’ve continued or talked if onyx’s mom didn’t interrupt 😂
bbyjayb
I- thank you 🫠
Klauser
Oh my stars! Mrs Liv, your timing is just so.. 🫠Well, it was a miracle that Onyx hadn't even run into his mother all this time. Looking forward to see new episode!!!
leeahmistigri
Oh crap, that a #plottwist 😏
Miss Sophie L Loynds
This is my fav one yet
Miss Sophie L Loynds
Omg this is so good!!!!!
Carleigh
Its a part of the dress, probably a button on the back to hold it ip
Denisse
Aaaaaa Keane was getting into it. Omg this chapter left me in my feelings and my heart thumping. 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
My_FleetingMind
BEST episode! THAT kiss! ❤️ OMG! Onyx’s Mum… My heart!!!
Carleigh
First off: this episode was extremely lovely, thank you for it. Second off: the fact that Keane was the one who keeps protecting Onyx from hiding this from people.
uwu moll
i don’t think you understand how exited i have been for this chapter since the last one, hold on lemme just reread that another 20 times!!!
Ivette
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Sabrina M Klaker
Does Onyx have a collar
Musixman801
That lip bite!!! 🫦 🫦🥵🥵🥵 As always, you never cease to deliver!!
Sepitrise
"Read it slow" That's not physically possible for me
Karmaqueen
Is it me or is Keane getting smarter?
Sydney
ah yea
Emily Rodriguez
Yessss
Abby
yesssssss
enbysunshine
This is already my favorite episode disclaimer 😂
Alessandro
Speed