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秘密の日記 : Secret Diary #17
🕑 Added 2021-11-18 15:33:49 +0000 UTCコミケの開催がきまりました。
私も現在絶賛コミケ原稿作業中です。
コミケについての詳しい話は後日改めていたしますのでお楽しみに。
コミケ原稿を描いてて頭を悩ませるのが修正の問題。
ノリを貼るというやつです。
普段は消しを入れる作業は出版社が独自に行うので作家は考えなくていいのですが、同人誌はそうはいきません。
全て自分でやらないといけない。
さらに、コミケで配布する本は会場で内容の確認があります。
いわば検閲です。
これが結構厳しい。
消しの薄い本は実際配布禁止になります。
デフォルメされた二次元キャラクターに修正を加える是非とか、自主規制なのに現状は集団的圧力により個人の自由がなんちゃらとか、そういう話はとりあえず置いておいて、とかく、即売会で配布するエロ本は修正が強くなりがちです。
一方、ファンボックスに上げているイラストは文字通り僕が自主的に消しを入れているだけなので、いつもの同人誌より消しが薄めです。
一応、ピクシブにイラストをあげるときの消しと同じ感覚で入れてます。
たとえば現在作業中の原稿から…。
ファンボックスのイラストだと消しはこんな感じ。
結構攻めてますね。
ちょっと薄すぎるかなぁ…大丈夫だと思うんだけど。
コミケで配布する本は大雑把に言うとこんな感じになります。
もしかするともっと消さなきゃだめかも。
ね、全然違うでしょ。
エロ漫画家ってのはね、みんな消しなんか入れたくないんですよ。
別に、陰部を見せたい！もっとスケベな絵を見せたい！
という理由じゃありません。
漫画はわずかな線だけで物の形を表現するので、その線の一部を隠すというのは重大な問題なのです
絵のニュアンスが大きく異なってしまうのが嫌なのです。
そういう意味で僕は常々、このファンボ支援の最大の特典は消しが薄い原稿を見ることができることだと考えています。
実際、貴重。
ただ、今回コミケで同人誌を作るにあたり、ファンボと同人誌で修正が異なる部分をどうするか少し考えなくてはいけなくなって来そうな予感がしています。
すり合わせが必要かも。
ファンボのイラストは一期一会、という事です。
あーそうそう、それから支援者の皆様、くれぐれも、ファンボックスにアップされているイラストの転載はしないようお願いします。
それは有償支援者限定のコンテンツを無断で転載するな！というレベルの話ではなく、今回語ったように修正の根拠が異なっているので、何かあった場合全て消去する羽目になりうるからです。
よろしくお願いします。
The Comiket event has been decided.
I've been confirmed as a winner!
I'm currently working on my doujinshi.
I'll talk more about Comiket later, so please look forward to it.
One of the things that annoys me when I'm working on a Comiket manuscript is the problem of revisions.
This is what is called "applying seaweed.
In my normal work, the publisher takes care of the revisions on their own.
But that's not the case with doujinshi.
You have to do everything yourself.
In addition, books to be distributed at Comiket will be checked at the event.
This is a form of censorship.
This is quite strict.
Books with weak corrections will be banned from distribution.
Let's leave aside for the moment the issues of whether or not deformed two-dimensional characters should be corrected, or whether or not corrections are being forced by group pressure even though they are self-imposed.
Anyway, erotic books that are distributed at trade fairs tend to be heavily modified.
On the other hand, the illustrations I've uploaded to Fanbox are literally just erased voluntarily by me, so the erasures are lighter than those in regular doujinshi.
I use the same erasing technique I use when I post illustrations on Pixiv.
For example, from the manuscript I'm currently working on...
In the case of the FANBOX illustration, the correction is as follows
(Illustration 1)
It's quite aggressive.
It may be a little too thin, but I think it's okay.
(Illustration 2)
This is the general idea of the book to be distributed at Comiket.
I may have to revise it more.
What do you think? It's totally different, isn't it?
All manga artists don't want to do any revisions.
Do I really want to show my genitals that much?
No, it's not. It's not that simple.
Manga uses only a few lines to express the shape of an object, so if you hide part of the lines, it's a problem.
I don't want the nuance of the drawing to be significantly different.
In that sense, I have always thought that the greatest privilege of being a FANBOX supporter is to be able to see a manuscript that has been thinly revised.
In fact, it's invaluable.
However, in order to make a doujinshi for Comiket, I will have to think a little about how to handle the differences in revisions between the FANBOX and the doujinshi.
I may need to reconcile the two.
The illustrations in the FANBOX are a once in a lifetime experience.
Oh yeah, and supporters, please do not reprint any of the illustrations on FANBOX.
That's not to say it's not just a matter of "don't reprint the content for paid supporters without permission", but also because, as I said this time, the basis for the correction is different, and if something goes wrong, I may have to delete everything.
I hope you can keep your promise to me.
Comments
ぐすたふ
Yes, it is. What bothers me is that the management decides whether to distribute or not, but does not reveal the criteria. As a result, authors have to make excessive revisions. In fact, there are several circles that are banned from selling by the management every year. However, since being banned is proof that the contents are extreme, such books are sometimes popular in bookstores. This is because books can be sold in bookstores even if they are banned in Comiket. Of course, such cases are rare.
shawurai
I didn't know they were that strict on the revisions for the doujinshi sold at the event. So if an artist isn't careful enough with his own revisions, he'll basically lose the rights to sell anything the day of the event? Sounds like a big risk for the artist (financially) if the comiket staff doesn't allow the doujinshi at the last check.
