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Mind Games - Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2025-04-10 09:34:58 +0000 UTC

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Slayer Anderson

Himiko hasn't actually gotten any power-ups yet. This is entirely her canonical abilities on full display. She's a monster. Think of the last few chapters as, rather than characterization of Himiko, the introduction of someone who doesn't understand or know what Hitoshi is doing and, therefore, someone that he will need to explain his actions to. She exists not only for Hitoshi's companionship, but also fills an important role in facilitating narrative dialogue that you can read to understand Hitoshi's motives, aims, and goals.

Edoardo Abbondio

Hmmm I really like how you write, but have to say I'm not the happiest with the increasing attention given to Himiko, nor with her random power ups to keep up with the bullshit cheats that MC has. Honestly I'm here for Shinso, and the last few chapters were practically just on Himiko.

Slayer Anderson

There was a section in the previous chapter where (Not!)Hitoshi and Fuyumi were talking about the infiltrator's mission. During that conversation, it was mentioned that whoever the mysterious person was got a bonus if they'd 'mark' a certain number of heroes. It's addressed in the chapter I'm writing now, but Himiko had a sharpie tucked away while she was fighting.

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> Then Endeavor stood, slapping his hands together as he knocked them free of crumbs. “Bootstrap, you're with me. I've seen enough and Himiko has accomplished her objective. It's time we shut this farce down.” > I hummed as I stood up as well, emptying the last of my drink and dropping it in the recycling bin next to the man's desk. “I was wondering if you were keeping count.” I’m not sure what exactly happened here? What were they keeping count of?

Zebra Von Claw

How is this story getting better as it goes on? Normally fanfics start to hit a plate at the very least but the character dynamics and sidereal talks within talks just keep adding so.much fun/depth to to this story. Toga's family meal alone was worth the 4$.

Jeffrey Gassenheimer

Are we gonna get some Shoko in up in this story? Cuz I love a good Shoko

Jairo Enrique Quevedo

So, I wonder how many more genderbent cast we're getting... Fem!ku maybe? Edit: Also, I hope Hitoshi shows Himiko lots of love after the rough pounding he's about to give her. 😉😉😉

Einar Strandberg

God, I love Endeavor more every chapter. It's nice to see that he has in fact failed with his family in areas, and learned from them. It's also always really fun to see the perspective of outsiders on characters we know well (why PHO interludes are fun) but here that's built into progressing the plot. And I really love the way Himiko just goes "oh, I instantly lose". And the flip and usage of the chain is such a perfect way to fade to black. I wonder if Hitoshi will be involved in the remedial training? After what they just saw he's pretty clearly qualified. And the explanation for Toga is fun. Just reread entrepreneurial spirit, and it's lovely fun.

MrTarven

i gotta admit, i absolutely love what you're doing with this version of endeavor, he very much feels like a hero

Cole Deucalion

These are some great characters you're writing. I'm super into this version of endeavor and his personal community

Empty Shelf

Oh dear. Counseling? Whichever poor shmuck they pick for these two better be the All Might of counselors.

Wildcard

Had to go back to the last chapter to catch what Fuyumi was referencing as tells. Great chapter!

Skrubstar

Ahhh Mind Games, always a favorite. Enjoyed seeing the philosophy, and an even further breakdown on Himeko. I also kind of envision her as a cat having way too much fun with the CQC until Shinso comes along with the spray bottle. Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to seeing the rest of that fight

Adam Daw

I have said it before and I'll say it again, I love this Endeavor.

Nate

WOO! MIND GAMES ONE TOP!

Slayer Anderson

*Length* of the chain. IE: How long the chain is. He's planting *that* in his head so he knows not to overestimate his range of motion. As far as contortionist tricks go... well, I could reference the templates he has, but there's also the solid fact they're in anime-land.

Zerak

Could this friends existence be another change from canon? Or even possible one of the things that resulted in a different Endever. Because if so the company would like that info since it would make it easier to get worlds with an Alt Endever who isn’t an ass.

Sumgai101

>I tested both sets as she moved away, nodding as I firmly planted the length of the chain in my head This one is unclear. Ankle and handcuffs, handcuffs behind. And he's planting the chain IN his head? Aside from the fatal move, his limbs wouldn't bend that way without some serious contortionist tricks.

Slayer Anderson

Maybe 'head down'? I'll change it in the doc.

Sumgai101

>“Ah... if the boy could go ahead and start down? Start down? Bit of an awkward phrasing here. Did you mean "start on down"?

Harley Shockley

Technically, it’s not handcuffed. He’s anklecuffed. 🤓

Sumgai101

Man helps girlfriend get a job. Proceeds to beat her up at the urging of his boss while handcuffed. Truly, there is no escape from her personal torment. It simply changes shape. :p

Anonymous Daniel

Kek, showing that you could still kick everyone's asses even when hand and ankle cuffed as the new guy. Love it! Toga as always is a cutie. Very much a power couple, that drives their bosses to drink. And did I see you mention a Shoko? Seems like Shota is a hime in this story then. Looks like a larger number of characters from class 1-A are female then. Still of the Class 1-A characters the one I like the most would have to be Mina. She is almost on the level of Toga in a very close second place. I'm betting word of the new hires from the endeavor agency being physical combat monsters is going to attract Mirko's attention. While official word likely won't get out I expect that rumors will crop up especially when comparisons are made to other physical heroes and heroines. I expect that who could beat who is something that comes up quite often in that particular community given the shared profession. So in closing, loved Toga as always, looking forward to more Mina, and looking forward to Mirko showing up in the future looking for a fight.

Slayer Anderson

As with the rest of the fights, it was caught on video. So expect it to come up again later. But this chapter was already at 5.5k and needed to go to print.

Alex McGregor

That was fun, kinda sad we didn't get the rest of the spar between the MC and Toga though

Tannim Murphy

Thanks for the chapter!


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