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Mind Games - Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2024-12-10 12:49:25 +0000 UTC

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Slayer Anderson

You make a compelling series of points. I will consider it. After all, plans can change over time and it would be interesting to see their attitudes evolve.

Bob Saget

I've got diction suggestions. Rather than getting rid of their original handles when the time officially comes, they can mark their progression to semi-official Hero-dom by making their past titles part of their epithet. So, Kirishima could be 'the Buster hero, Red Riot'. And Shinso could be 'the Bootstrap hero, Free Man'. With 'free' referencing how 'bootstrapping' can get one 'out' of a confining situation. Also how boots are used to freely walk about. And it also fits with one of Venus's many epithets, libertina or 'Freedwoman'. To further the theme, he could call his quirk 'Lead'. Referencing a 'leading strap' (especially fitting if he makes use of a tool similar to capture tape), his quirk's ability to compel others to follow his lead, and possibly his supernatural ability to buff/lead/train others (depends on how he crafts his public image, how open he is with certain sidereal abilities, etc).

Slayer Anderson

Noted and fixed in the doc, thanks.

Jeffrey Gassenheimer

This takes place after sludge villain in the timeline, right? Because if so, Amijiki, togata and Nejire should indeed be second years.

Pi

Declare she's developed a sudden interest in theatre and puppetry and carry around a collection of masks so she can display one to her date and one to her stalkers at the same time. A flawless plan.

Skrubstar

I love Himeko’s POV honestly. Seeing a social mimic who copies not to get n advantage but because she gueinly doesn’t really understand is really fitting for her quirk.

Zerak

The reason I mentioned the smoothie is that it stood out, as it is kinda awkward to to buy a drink and finish it than buy a drink for another person, now they have to drink while you finished. Specially in a budding friendship. Not a big deal, just something that stood out. I personally don’t care about such things but I noticed enough people be awkward when they had to eat/drink while others were not.

Slayer Anderson

I didn't cover the minutia of the transaction for the smoothies, but it can be reasonably expected that Hitoshi followed through with his offer. Thanks for the feedback! And, yeah, I think that's the only solution to writing Himiko. Get her to a better place.

Zerak

I think you forgot to buy Kirishima his smoothy. Also on that note, his template from Casandra as well as his Exalted template should warn him if Kirishima is ever about to slip with the love confession. I really liked the Himiko section, was really well done. It’s funny how Casandra’s power/skill hard counters her. But used by the right person it would be the perfect one to help her learn to socialise since the person would know how she is feeling and help her associate the feeling with the right word/expression. It would also be a good tool to explain things for her in a way she understands as the person would be able to read her body language. So instead of just making expressions or mimicking tones she doesn’t understand, the nuances of why they are used can be explained. I think the only way to really get past feeling sad from writing Himiko is to keep writing Himiko till she improves. It will lift your spirit seeing her progress through your writing.

Diego C

This is so peak. Hitoshi/Himiko isn’t the rarest rarepair I’ve ever seen, but it’s up there.

123456789

Love it! Characters who have internal motivations and bullshit company fuckery explained like it's actually an Eldritch abominationz I love all of it!

Austin

Love the story thanks

DeAD Scholar

Pure unadulterated woobie straight to the veins.

Anonymous Daniel

Yep, that is absolutely some top shelf toga himiko before she went villain.

Sumgai101

Calling it. Himiko is going to end up either looking like she's having a stroke... or making Bethesda faces.

Calamity

Ooof. Poor girl. Hopefully things start improving for her. Or get exponentially worse given the new pitfalls on this world.


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