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Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter One Hundred And Twenty

🕑 Added 2024-12-07 12:58:35 +0000 UTC

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John

If you haven’t found it yet dodging prison and stealing witches. Though honestly I find Ginny to be the one of weakest characters in the story. Still worth a read.

Rudy

I think you’re gonna have to address some problems soon. Alice Longbottom is one. Neville practically sees Harry as the second coming but ghat’s gonna do a 180 right quick if he finds about the two hooking up. I suggest Harry stave off this problem by waking Frank up, freshly obliviated with the memories of a gay man having taken on Alice as a beard. It would be a master prank on Harry’s part to make Frank’s memory lover James Potter, both on his dad (and Sirius) and to also help his own mom out with the story. Second problem would be his lovers outweighing the time & attention he can give them each. Obviously living in the past can make him master of both death and time, so controlling multiple clones daily (or simply having more than 24h in a day) should become trivial for him.

Rudy

Gdamn I do hate me some Ginny, little Mrs Perfect-for-Harry while the two have zero chemistry.

Jake Parkhouse

Can you link DPaSW, or give me the full name please? I’d love to check it out :)

Mauison

A pic of Lily from this chapter would be amazing

Kevin Thunder

I actually like Hinny, but only when its done right. The depiction in the books was terrible. But JKR is terrible at romance. If she truly wanted Hinny and, God forbid, Romione (yuck), she should have built up to it. I have read a few fanfics where I'm a big fan of Hinny. Probably my favorite is DPaSW haha. Harry and Ginny can have great chemistry when they are written by a competent author. But I do feel that Harry should have ended up with Luna or Hermione. I thought Rowling was setting Huna up when she introduced Luna in OotP. Can't wait for more Luna here!! About time wouldn't! It's past time. Bring on the artwork!! And honestly, I wouldn't mind seeing Rob's depiction of Hinny. Ginny can be can be his Bellatrix. Harry could use a Vanguard. She's a little crazy here, but crazy girls can be fun, and if she steps out of line, then Narcissa, Appoline, and Susan will set her right.

Jeremy Smith

If I imagined anyone to end up with a random red haired lass, it'd be Seamus.

Jeremy Smith

Exactly! I mean I get it, everything gets tied up in a neat little bow, but I didn't really feel there was any point to Harry and Ginny aside from Harry gaining a family out of it.

Darth Reven

Same no Harry/ Ginny I feel like here it can come down to Harry not forgiving or trusting Ginny due to her error of what she did with the hole diary and diary page. As for the lily part in the end that was good show that Lilly will have to redo her work again but this time put even more planning into it.

vardic d

Yeah I felt like Harry and Hermione was a more natural relationship when I first read the books. I was pulling for them to get together till the end, I felt the Ron/Hermione relationship felt shoehorned out of nowhere.