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ATS B5 Ch38 - Wing Purple (1)

🕑 Added 2025-01-16 05:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Antony Claughton

We don’t know how it’s communicated. We (now) know they have oracles to predict when they will occur, maybe the oracles are also aware when they do happen so there is no “communication” between hives. I think what you want is beyond the nobles as they don’t have the resources. The hives need to do those things.

Anthony C

How are the eruption location events communicated to the hive? You'd think a basic situational report would accompany it. With that report the proper beachhead QRF force could be sent. Dragons are essentially air calvary with limited air to air responsibilities. Honestly given way to much thought about combined force tactics on this. To be clear I know it's a story about getting the right cards not a story about a dragon army. But seriously why aren't nobles out there with their carded guards/soldiers acting as first responders and ground troops? Some earth powers creating evacuation corridors or redoubts/hard points to keep scourge away from civilians. They go through the logistical trouble of carting around dragon poop but can't develop basic tactical doctrine? Again I'm over here jonesing for the next chapter and a fan. But like humans are organisers not tantrum toddlers (please ignore my current president as I say this)

Antony Claughton

Having to justify how the writing “can” work is a problem. In the book it should be tightened up so it’s not contradictory. Simply saying ‘few’ other portals had opened yet, or ‘many’ were just opening would remove the confusion.

killer

It’s not like they can see every portal right away there could’ve been portal behind him, and that’s making the assumption that every hive has the same priorities as blood moon, which as far as we know they don’t except for worm moon to a lesser degree

killer

That last part makes sense and they probably should have a protecter around just in case, but sending purples first saves the most lives because they can get to people who would die if they get there too late rather than letting them die, and they aren’t going to be able to see or sense every scorgeling so what you said probably would make the death toll a little smaller depending on the speed of the scourgelings, but really that’s mostly going to minimize property damage rather than deaths

Salvo

I wonder if Brixaby can target people he hasn’t met with his map and his shout?

Antony Claughton

Actually, he did have to sit by and watch the people throwing their life away going into the Dark Heart after he'd learned it was a trap, and most would perish. But this is likely going to be more personal. Hopefully he can focus on those he saves.

Antony Claughton

It is going to be fascinating to see how it plays out. Especially if Arthur has to make some hard decisions. Although he's had to do things like steal from his original family, I don't think he's really had to make a hard, personal decision yet. But as a commander, he may have to make a call that he can't save all the humans. There will be a point where he has to pull out. Due to his card he should be able to spot & save more than most, but he'll also be aware of any that are left, and possibly have to make decisions about which ones to choose to save. This would be part of learning to be a commander, but we all know war causes lots of trauma and this might be the first dose for Arthur.

Antony Claughton

Also, Arthur mentions the purples should go first to rescue people. But, this may or may not be a reasonable position. Other dragons getting there faster and killing scouglings may reduce the overall size of the erruption, plus immediately stop scrougings headed for farms. I suspect it makes a great deal of sense to send the Purples last. Additionally, if the scrouglings had ranged or flying capability, sending the purples first might be a terrible idea if they end up in a direct fight with scrouglings. It could end up a bloodbath. Sending dragons who can establish a beachead around the portal in case of immediate attack would likely make most sense as the first wave. Establish a position so the valuable or weak dragons coming through aren't hit, and then build from there.

Antony Claughton

I'd just check some of the timing elements. You describe other Hive's portals as only just opening when Arthur gets through the Blood Moon portal. Yet, you also describe: "Dragons from all the hives dived down from the air, raking them with spells and casting elemental-based effects. A few briefly landed to fight on the ground before taking off again. But there were so many scourglings that..." If the other portals are only just happenning, this will be Blood Moon hive's dragons only (at this stage). You also mention other purples, which if they also come through last you would expect none yet from other hives. And the Strawberry Moon dragons were there. Again, if other portals are just opening, unlikely they'd beat Arthur & Brix there.

Kacey Ezell

Great chapter! So tense, thank you!


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