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B4 Ch43: Utility Challenge

🕑 Added 2024-04-24 04:29:51 +0000 UTC

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Jasmine

'If was reality and not a challenge from the dark heart' spelling mistake: IT was reality

Tajana Centis

Dun dun dunnnnn

Alric

In the first paragraph I saw this "were unsteady, too and the" wouldn't " were unsteady as well..." sound more gooder?

BoxQueen

If Brixaby learn modern machinery, it would be an interesting what he does with guns.

satetheus

1 chapter in the 4th book of a series is all it takes, eh? Not a fan of authors fleshing out the world & lore I guess.

Devin Campbell

Well this just ruined the entire series for me. I'm completely uninterested in anything that happens now.


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