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B2 Ch7: Tying Up Loose Ends

🕑 Added 2022-10-08 05:54:03 +0000 UTC

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Undead Writer

Lol. Love her

Flopmind

Error: By then it was so late at night it was practically dawn. Arthur hesitated before he picked a direction: Should he return to his old apartment or take Kenzie's advice and finagle himself a room in the hive like a proper noble son? The note said Kenzie had already gotten him a room. There's nothing to finagle.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Well I personally hope that the two of them will develop a good romance, he saves the dragon with storage she is engaged in saving it and proves to him that she has the nobility as in characteristics to save a (seemingly) inferior dragon for her belief and a nice connection is made due to both knowing secrets of the hive.

Honour Rae

Yeah, Arthur is a bit of a rolling stone...

Ninetails

For very long series, there just is not enough content in a typical romance for it to really get to be that significant part of most of the story, aside from being plot motivation, as that normal amount of romance justs gets really really thin when spread over hundreds to thousands of chapters.

Nathan Sto

Yeah, whatever is fine.

Josh

You know, I'm fine without a romance. I used to think it was a must in a story, but it'll take away from the grind. Also hed probably be more reluctant to leave when (if I'm reading between the lines correctly) he eventually moves on from this hive.

luke eustace

I think there just talking about hit getting buff with his new card

B Whistler

I'm confused, a couple people are talking about 'buff Arthur' in the comments here but i can't see any mention of his strength or anything like that in this chapter. Was something edited or are comments feeling extra off topic today?

Some BS Deity

Same

Christopher Thomas

Ah, point of clarification, by shallow i mean whether the writing of the relationship is in a way that there is no examination of the characters’ feelings or dealing with any issues. There is a difference between a shallow writing of a relationship, and a well written shallow relationship. By too fast, I mean the characters are all of a sudden inexplicably in love, not that the relationship needs to last an extended time.

seth dauer

Lol, whose first romances were decent? Shallow and fast are the norm. We all struggle with stumbling steps.

Victor

very short chappy, i wanted to see his interaction with cressida

Touch

Jeez, gym rat arthur? Buffed arthur lesss gooo

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

TayTay, The Pirate Queen

Tftc! And I agree with most of the comments about the romance. Slow and steady is the name of the game. As is trouble. And it looks like he's going to get pulled into a *lot* of trouble.

SweetRoll

I agree on romance being a fact of life and unless the MC completely lacks emotions there should be romance of some sort. Doesn't always have to be both ways, but you can't be telling me a teen boy doesn't at least daydream or get silly notions in his head! That being said if you don't have confidence in pulling off a decent romantic relationship then don't force it.

Christopher Thomas

From the perspective of an avid reader, lots of authors seem to have trouble with writing romance. Hard to strike the right balance. I personally prefer when it’s present, just because relationships are a fact of life, and whenever I read a series that avoids any romantic entanglements it feels… flatter? Then again a bad romance (too fast, too shallow, overshadows main story) can really sour an otherwise good story. Idk, as of right now I can see the relationship between the two characters developing, and it’s enjoyable. Do whatever you are comfortable with.

Yashakami

My favorite part of final fantasy crisis core was that Zach was always doing squats.

Honour Rae

All The (Gym rat) Skills. Love it. :) Edit: Do you even lift, Arthur?!

Honour Rae

LOL that's kind of the vibe I was going for. (Though I'm still unsure if there will be any romance in this book). Man doesn't know he's already doomed. Edit: Thanks for the correction!

Christopher Thomas

threw burly men —> three burly men Hadn’t done anything wrong but was absolutely sure he was gonna be in a world of trouble? It’s like he’s already married to her!

Yashakami

Thanks for the chapter! The best time to do push ups is when you are stressed. He needs a personal gym


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