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Chapter 35: Card Anchor

🕑 Added 2022-08-06 05:54:09 +0000 UTC

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Honour Rae

I make an effort to stay out of threads like this other than to please ask everyone to be civil. To answer your concern, I'm trying to balance out laying a foundation for Arthur's growth with moving the plot along. I've said several times on Royal Road there will be time skips involved. There are issues, however. It's less satisfying to read a sudden jump in skills and abilities. Plus on the spectrum between Slice of Life and Action, this falls more towards Slice of Life.

Jersbears

Are you guys saying you don't want anything out of this novel, lol. I believe I am giving valid criticism I obviously appreciate the novel since I am paying. But it's funny how you disregarded everything I said and boiled it down to, what, whining? Do you think all criticism is whining?

Mogwai

Thanks for clarifying, though I can't help wondering now if the part about how cards might become attached is some foreshadowing

Honour Rae

I start editing in the evening PST. I don't want to commit to a posting hour as I want to upload it as soon as I'm done.

Honour Rae

When you put a card in your heart it's hard to take it out again because the card becomes part of you. He briefly had the Trap card in his heart and it still feels a little bruised from taking it out again. Basically, people become super attached to the cards (and the cards might become attached to the people)

ARHHH

He has to get settled and “safe” before anything major, but I think his main card justifies he should be doing something noteworthy consistently. Combat skills is what horatio would probably want him to learn as dragon rider prep due to his upbringing (obviously doesn’t know his leg card)

Touch

I'm not against the time skip if he develops his awareness a bit, otherwise atleast show some sign of development

Steven

We just need more chapters. We are getting set up for the future well

Emby

Agree on the time skips. This novel drags

Smaug

Just read some xianxia if you want your super strong protagonist fix.

ARHHH

What’s the upload schedule? What time zone?

so you want to skip most of the novel just to get to the "hes now op" part? just read some op mc novels where they get sent back in time with lvl9999 skills after dying a meaningless death or smth

Doom

"I want I want I want I want."

Jersbears

I really just want a time skip to where he is comfortable and not in the control of those around him. There is too much teaching going on instead of exploring and finding out ourselves. And I cant tell you how little I care about leveling up Tidying or other low effort skills. I just want to skip to him having higher level skills and possible ability to protect himself. I also want him to be an adult all ready. I really like this world and your world building but the MC is so young and naive and uneducated

Even though the chapters are short, I’m appreciative that there isn’t filler. I wouldn’t mind more imagery and description, though. Thanks Rae 🤙

ARHHH

I prefer a large throw over jumper thing covered in the raw tabacco and dirtied from its smoke. Carry it in a bag filled with cigarette parts so if caught the bag provide the story that it’s the kids smoking bag

Christopher Thomas

I feel like the real priority should be finding a way to hide his legendary card from the white dragons. Otherwise he ought to just become a 12 year old chain smoker. Then again now that I think about it, with a card the health detriments might be negated by his card, so that might be his best option currently

Tycho Green

If you put it into your heart then take it out it feels like you are missing something. Kind of a metaphysical level.

Touch

Moarrrr more chapter plweseeee

Mogwai

I am not sure if I missed this but what are the benefits of using an anchor versus putting the cards in your heart, I see that he can deactivate the trap card when it is in the anchor but is there anything else? Is there another reason for the card anchors?


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