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B4 Ch12: New Party Member?

🕑 Added 2024-01-11 05:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Bryan Gray

I agree, it's definitely harder for me to take seriously, at least.

Daniel Dieling

I really like your work so much. The world you have created is unique and super interesting to learn about. Your characters and dialogues are convincing and believable and your plot is great and has kept me reading for hours. This is seriously great Literature you are writing! I really mean it, this is a work of art that you are creating here, that is probably appealing to a general fantasy audience. So far you didn’t write a niche litrpg book, but high quality fantasy novels. That being said, the fact that you are placing Arthur in what is basically modern USA cheapens all that for me. It just makes everything unnecessarily less believable and keeps me from being completely draw in. Where is the fun, in exploring a new world, if it’s basically „just“ the USA? I mean, so far we have Student loans, for profit healthcare, the interstate, sheriffs, bisons and New Orleans :) maybe just make it less obvious or add some really unique aspects. Anyway I am still enjoying the story of course :) p.s I am not even from the us but from Germany :)

Blas Borde

N’awlens is probably New Orleans, so I am guessing there was an apocalypse at some point in the past that brought magic, dragons and the scourge to modern day earth.

Zizawah

never thought rescue duty would bad. — was bad

Zizawah

born as a surf — serf

Daniel

Betting dragons learn the language while in the egg still from people talking around it.

FossilWreckers

Do Faberge Folk speak dragon language? B and Joy hatched talking.

Decide

Bet the girl is who they're looking for


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