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C662 - Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

🕑 Added 2025-05-11 10:28:42 +0000 UTC

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Wisnu Nugraha

When I wrote this, I thought Eiji had gone too far down the rabbit hole and it was too difficult to return to the surface. If I force him to go up, I'll make his personality so far inconsistent by taking it seriously without pretending. This plot is an exception because there are many famous beauties in history. However, since I didn't want to make a development that took too long with the OC, I made them fall in love with Eiji quickly. Adding a bit of interaction and depicting appearances based on characters from other franchises to make it easy to imagine was my way of adding their presence to Eiji's story. Even so, I'll try to refrain from adding too many OCs at once except for those who already exist in the future. As for the matter of the Goddesses in Danmachi, I will use that opportunity for comedy in the future. I'm not sure of the details but when the time comes, I can usually do it.

Ophis

I'll be honest, I think you're going overboard with this, author. It's not about the quantity, but now you started adding a ton of OC women that add literally nothing to both the story and Eiji's harem. All these Greek goddesses could be acquired from Danmachi or something. Honestly, I think you should focus on already existing heroines from the gazillion novels and anime out there. "Artemis looks like Enterprise", like why not just make the MC go to Azur Lane or just gain the ability to summon ship girls from it? Also, you say you wanted to add interactions to not make this "too pokemon-ish", but the MC here is just outright killing those women and brainwashing them. What's even there to be have in terms of interactions with them lol

Wisnu Nugraha

Done

KristofferXxXxX

"Eiji pretended not to know while hugging "Athena's" waist and squeezing her plump ass." PS: Another type error, please correct that author-san ^^


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