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Chapter 104 - Dreadborne Harbinger

🕑 Added 2025-03-28 03:14:51 +0000 UTC

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Frank Armand

Not sure if it is the "academism" of the author that is being expressed in the MC but he is worrying about his "grades" when his fucking life is on the line????? Getting ahead in power should be the only thing on his mind since day one, not gallivanting on campus and going to classes that are not essential, what good are A+/honors if you are dead? I've said in Royalroad I'll say it here...your MC lacks focus....for the tribulations you have created for him he is hardly in a true sense of urgency, that passive /reactive "kid who lash out at the unfairness of the world" attitude is a massive turn off....there got to be a way to milk chapters whitout making your MC a fish on the chopping block that will get saved in critical moment of enlightment through plot armor....

epiclitwriter

Thank you for catching that, I missed making that edit before posting! I've just updated it now.

Lister of Smeg

He was told about those same mission boards by the essence professor a few chapters ago, so they shouldn't be a complete unknown for him.


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