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AMSL Ch: 4

🕑 Added 2025-01-23 21:00:06 +0000 UTC

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M. Lampi

He exorcised them and used them to complete his work ==> He exercised them and used them to complete his work

M. Lampi

and Little Winning was south of them ==> and Little Winging was south of them

M. Lampi

“Where’ having a touch of a heatwave here.” ==> “We're having a touch of a heatwave here.”

M. Lampi

Thanks for the chapter! You might consider rewording this sentence: "Also, please make sure your trays are in an upright position " to "Also, please make sure your seat backs are in an upright position and the tray tables stowed "

Holly Harris

I like how paranoid this poor kid is. He really is going to feel silly for having so much stranger danger panic. I wonder why he’s so scared of people like him though. I mean, sure. I’d be scared of the feds, but other supers? Nah. I’d definitely want to talk to them if I couldn’t tell anyone else about my powers.

Scott Fellman

Thx for the chapter. I like the fact that the old man just smiled and waved which scared the crap out of him. Looking forward to him getting a hogwarts letter and calling himself an idiot

Scott Fellman

I think him training the way he is would be quite normal. He doesn't know what the energy he has is bit he can somewhat move and control it. So focusing on extending his control is the most cost effective method. Many magic systems involve creating magic circles imprinted either in the heart or brain.

Grappleshot

Cultivation is an Asian specific thing unlike magic. I think he's going to try to figure that out since he keeps mentioning it. There's the power of God, but no mention of that yet and he already assumes magic. I also think you've just been reading cultivation novels.

Austin

Thanks for the chapter!


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