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Ch: 8 Rewrite Ver2.0

🕑 Added 2023-03-17 03:19:27 +0000 UTC

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Timo Immig

Please edit chapter 8 that it is clear for new People that the other version is outdated has a newer version

Luboš Hemala

I always wish she would interact with Anastasia more, especially after her mana abilities are known. But that would change the story quite a lot. Also, since Anastasia has Sense Mana, she would definitely know soon.

White Neko Knight

Wasn't the issue with buying spells the contract you have to sign so you can't sell the spell yourself. And by the time she gets to the point she can ignore contracts everything goes to hell and there's no one to buy them from. It might be relevant when she finally goes to Skrull.

Jon Oliphant

Markus and Ezekiel are definitely more arrogant and obnoxious, thoroughly unlikable. The epitome of tiny fish in an even smaller pond. I think there are still some problems with the relationship with Anastasia and magic in general in the story. As the story goes on money becomes a non issue for her, so just buying a spell or two should be possible. As I always like to say "A problem that can be solved by money really isn't a problem"


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