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Ch: 113.12

🕑 Added 2023-02-09 23:32:02 +0000 UTC

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Marcus Martin

I agree! Seeing Tabitha develop respect for Aaliyah is really cool. I am not excited about this as a ship; I like Aaliyah and #4 more. I think there is more fun energy there. I also like the entire arc, because Aaliyah did everything right, but she and Tabitha still lost. If the elemental had not shown up, they would have died. They both know it. I think we can see some more character growth from both of them here. Aaliyah has always had someone around to help her out and tell her what to do. I can't wait to see what happens when she goes out on her own.

S10NN4CH

I've just read through the entire series and I'm in love. This is honestly one of the best stories I've read in a while..

Oskatat

"I'm going to explain you all about elementals. They roam mana rich zones and only attack you if you are hostile to them. Errrr, I forgot the rest" Thanks Tabitha XD suggestion for correction - the waves of emotions that came along with surviving something

Gon of the Dra

Nice, love the arc, and I love the reasoning for the elemental. Im also staring to miss forging....

Robin

I think the whole arc was great, good character development and lore sprinkled in super well done as well imho. I think Tabitha is indeed finding someone to respect beyond pacore, this will be fun to see that develop further.

Bad Timing

It was a very nice chapter, though I think there was a natural cliffhanger before the fight truly started (in the middle of 113.7 maybe?),, where you could have started chapter 114. Still, it was a nice arc, both from a progression perspective and a world-building one. Very nice job here.

Aezy Ken

Others have already said everything. Now where are the numbers Kosnik? WE NEED THE NUMBERS

thkiw

it was great, I loved it. instead of having no details or making it superficial you tried to make a detailed adventure. you added lore to the story in the process, and made alliyah's journey to a magical filled region much more engaging. it was much better that the expected "grab this, fight some monster, get back.". instead we have an entire journey into the magical jungle filled with hardship and danger as the two heroines try to survive. yup. reminds me of a dnd campaign, or those training trips some of my friends in the army told me about. same struggles, except this one is in the jungle instead of being in the desert.

Kosnik4

No, thank you for your honest opinions. It's exactly these concepts I worry about, so to hear they're coming through is super gratifying.

Ironwolf

I think I’m jumping on this ship. Tabitha and Aaliyah have this energy. About the story: I like the world building with the elementals and am super interested in finding out how the world came to be, especially with the hints about the world being stronger in previous ages. I think the story is developing great and that you’re doing fine on character development, world building and relationships between characters. When I’m trying to write a complaint about aspects of the story it just feels super critical, or forced or extremely opinionated, so I think the story is great.

Derek Walker

Thanks for the update. It’d be nice to see a status update next chapter since it really seems she pushed a bunch of her skills recently.

Luboš Hemala

I think the story was awesome. The elemental truly spruced things up and made it interesting. Following it opens quite a lot of opportunities too, to learn of it or gather in its wake.

heh

Tftc! Much longer than they have been lately, which is good!


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