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Ch: 113.5

🕑 Added 2023-01-27 07:09:52 +0000 UTC

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Kosnik4

Thanks for pointing that out.

Eliezer

...I don't think the armor is dellinium?

Ironwolf

Aaliyah as a character sometimes feels a little disconnected from her surroundings. She doesn’t have the same morals she did as a human, but her morals and ethical code towards killing is very unique in this world. I think that this is the best and worst part of Aaliyah, as it allows her to differentiate herself from soldiers and mercenaries on a fundamental level but also limits her growth in a way that normal people aren’t restricted. You could say the same of her work ethic, but I’m relatively certain Aaliyah’s rapid growth may be related to the size of her soul. That being said, it feels like Aaliyah is slowly changing to become this being that she does not enjoy. Soul devourer is making her want more exp per skill, Tabitha is helping her awaken a love for battle, and it seems there is no way for this to stop happening. Not that this needs to necessarily be a bad thing, but I think this is certainly a slippery slope. Aaliyah needs to change to grow stronger more quickly, and the extra confidence and cautiousness will probably help her in the long run. I just think eventually she should become aware of how much she’s deviated on who she was before, so she can reevaluate whether she still wants to be the same moving forward.

Gon of the Dra

Ok I love Tabitha. I also really like that it finally feels like there is some real tension, and Tabitha isn't some all-powerful chaperone.

Kosnik4

Thanks, I started writing the saying as usual, but then I thought it would be funny to change it up.

Kyfe

I really loved that comment about gorillas.

Quendolayne

Thx for the chapter - and now cleaning duty for the girls :-)


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