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Ch: 112.5

🕑 Added 2023-01-19 07:43:26 +0000 UTC

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HardhatDoozer

Take your time and get it how you want it. But I think this turned out great. The action was gripping and she even used air walk. (From my secret wish list). And their after battle discussion made it clear. Considering the level gap and how much she has battles goblin, it is just like Alyssa to overthink while trying to do better than last battle. Once she starts moving it is clear who should be the victor. I hope those hobgoblins don’t raid them at night. But still morning. Maybe the duo won’t be nearby by then.

Timo Immig

It is written very well. The character development is very appealing. The only possible change is that i believe the hammer was kagelese not delinium. Delinium was only used for the arrowheads as far as I know.

Lord Lucifer

I liked it. I can see how it was tricky to write. There is probably room for improvement but I'm not sure where it is. I thought you did a good job with the scene.


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