RunFaps
Magic_Smithing
Magic_Smithing patreon

Ch: 111.1

🕑 Added 2022-04-27 08:03:45 +0000 UTC

Comments

HardhatDoozer

Really enjoyed the world building. Definitely worth the extra effort it took. Looking forward to what is next.

HardhatDoozer

Aaliyah so far hasn’t self-admitted to any attraction to men or women. Maybe a late bloomer. Maybe being man in the previous life and a woman now leaves some room for internal romantic ambiguity. I’m thinking that when she is introduced to Pacore’s high society she may be faced with clarifying her taste at least. But romances seem to be things for other characters in this story so far.

Crisp Ratt

Thanks for the chapter

Mist of Shadows

I love the details and the sense of strangeness that come through in the writing. The bit with trying to figure out where the light was coming from was nice and helped frame things in the fantastical which is appreciated. Nice chapter in case that wasn't clear.

Carl Mason

I imagine the feather thing, in specific, is because off the ease with which feathers can be braided into your hair. You just braid around the quill and it will stay for most things. If the beast you took down had no feathers (say a boar, or something) you might harvest a tusk? Or whoever kills that dragon to free the lake might take a scale, tooth or claw instead of a feather. I imagine the predominance of feathers is just because more feather beasts cause trouble than others.

Andrew

Thank you!

ShadowOfHavoc

I honestly thought this was excellently done. I could easily picture everything you described and I liked how you talked about where the light was coming from.

Thundermike00

Would they become a lesbian couple or do they both love only men?

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! I like the surroundings info. Makes the trip more real

abowden

yeah, I really believe it's a 'magic dense zone' the way it's described really lends a feeling of beauty, diversity, life, strength, wealth, danger, and wonder.

Steven Palmer

Excited!!!!

Carl Mason

I had the thought, myself, that her mana sense might pass its test to level in here.

Kyfe

I'm looking forward to what kind of Feather she'll get. Question; considering the different environments, are feathers the only thing used still? What about if the most powerful creature you fight and win against doesn't actually have any feathers? Do you kind of make one out of the materials?

Carl Mason

I like it, it reads well, and until they run across some trouble (as happened at the end) the surroundings and general environment are worthy targets of their/your focus. I would like to see some unusual plants but I suppose they have yet to encounter a pool of off-brand mana that might change a tree to "weird magic tree." I am looking forward to reveal of the animal that is coming.

Kyfe

Ugh... why? Why make me picture that? Lol. You right, though.

abowden

That's one of the things I look forward too most, the materials and what she's able to do with them. Will she be able to make new alloys? new engraving inks? other things entirely?

DierBloodRose

Absolutely love the attention too detail.

Straven

Looking foreword to what's coming and especially how the merchant will react to whatever she finds and chooses to bring back with her. Thank you for another enjoyable read!

Seb

I loved the chapter! It was great to see her explore the mana rich environment and honestly, I'm looking forward to seeing her learn more about magic and mana from this trip! Also, typo: "I stubble for something to say but come up blank." should be "I struggle for something to say, but come up blank."

Imspinnennetz

Thanks for the chapter. I wonder if each mana rich region has an apex predator that rules each region. In that case, the chameleon spiders may have been the spawn of a larger mother spider.

White Neko Knight

The chapter was great honestly. I wouldn't change a thing.

Erriballon

First also love the details


More Creators