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🕑 Added 2022-02-18 03:11:38 +0000 UTC

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Devin Williams

Reel and Aliyah get along too well for someone not to at least comment on it. Regardless. Yeah, Aliyah is one of the bros and is a giant tomboy, but her parents still assumed she would be interested in a boy. I would like to see how her dad would react to their scenes, especially when she first started tormenting Reel by trying to hug and him and initiate skin to skin... Someone has to say something, even as a joke

Bable Zmith

Very good chapter, compelling but not too compelling. A well balanced read that makes me want to read more LOL.

Via

Right, just went through the announcements. What a fucking dupe. I totally get writing for fun, but remove the damn +12 chapters thing. I feel absolutely cheated.

Via

Wait, I just subbed, where are the extra chapters?

Stephen Pearson

Btw, wasn't the plan to also sell some Magicite to Kervin, as that's also in short supply?

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Drake_Azathoth

Thanks for the chapter!

Jinx

Thank you for the chapter!

Aclys

Find out next chapter I guess which I eagerly anticipate, really enjoyed these latest ones!

Jonathan

In fact, I realized he keeps things interesting. I've realized main offices, in case no comma with Giovanni, where he spelled out no comma What were they doing here? Were they building some sort of fortification? are and Are If I knew that, I’d probably would’ve brought more. If I'd known but a fort non the less. nonetheless tracks of were multiple carts passing through here. tracks of where multiple carts have been passing through here. “Kervin, you’re alive!” “We did. Was there any doubt?" These two statements don't match. “If I was, did you think I would just tell you," “If I was, did you think I would just tell you?" how about we have a quick sparring session. how about we have a quick sparring session? just like me and board just like me, and bored I finally realized who the woman was. realize who the woman is. “You have no idea how much I needed this,” I've needed most likely more aware of how many blades are hidden all over his person than any of us do. us are. "The gem you brought is enough.” I can see the excitement in her eyes. no paragraph break “That and then some,” I tell her. The goods here were enough to cover her debt to the company and then some. and then some twice close together. I recommend changing one to 'and more.' At the end there, if Kervin leveled, I'm guessing Aaliyah Leveled!

Rairarku

THANKIE FOR THE CHAPPIE!! A few typos below: "...like me and board at the moment" board -> bored "I snap the rains, making the bivol..." rains -> reins "Reels draw drops" draw -> jaw "The gem you brought // is enough" for some reason, where I put the // there's a paragraph break. Like the "is enough" is on a seperate line from "the gem you brought" I love these POVs outside of the MCs. They're so enjoyable!

Mqrius

It's been a while since I read the story — Aaliyah turning red at the end, that's her getting a ton of experience or something? Someone remind me please 😅

Sky

Thanks for the chapters! Not sure what you mean, I thought this chapter was plenty fun. I really enjoyed it. I love seeing other people's viewpoint in these kind of scenarios.

Erriballon

Love your story

Thundermike00

I definitely liked the business side of Kevin and mc dealings. I liked the POV of how the village and anything related to it how it differs so much from the last time the merchant came.

Owen Wilson

You know what I missed? These chapters, thanks for posting again

Bonobo

Great chapter, Loved it!👍

HardhatDoozer

Great chapter. The merchant transaction is always worth going through. Plus a second magic pen. Perfect

Dave

Great chapter having some happy come back into the story does wonders btw shpuld mention the amount of food kervin should be returning with seeimg that is the reason for scholls invasion and also alliah told giovanni via communication amulet that the feilds have exploded and for kervin to collect them.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the new chapter!! I love it! Can’t wait for more!! Please keep writing!

Imspinnennetz

"The woman asks with may too much enthusiasm" => Replace may with way "board at the moment" => Replace board with bored "four and a half tuns of metal" => Replace tuns with tons

Steven Palmer

Amazing chapter, excited to see the next.

Alex Galaitsis

Great chapter! Like others have said, it’s fun to occasionally see the protagonist from another character’s perspective. I really liked the banter, too. I’m excited to see what happens once Pacore collects her for the next story arc (if that’s the next arc???) but some more chapters in the village will be great too. I just love this story.

Derun

Great chapter! I don't usually like multiple POVs, but you always do them well. Wasn't expecting Reel to agree to spar, but now I want to see how it goes down.

Stephen Pearson

Really enjoyed the chapter, thanks!

Straven

Kept suffering from giddy laughter while reading through the chapter, just enjoying it too damn much! Oh and I'm 'so~' looking foreword to that bout to come!!! Curious what she scored from that skill transaction, must be pretty damn good for her to pop off like that! Thank you for the chapter, loved it very much and that ending news about another chapter of your other story has me suffering even more giddy laughter~!!!

Alex C

Love side perspectives that give others thoughts on an MC

Mist of Shadows

As much as I enjoy Aaliyah's point of view, it was nice to see things from the Merchant's point of view, mostly because it reminds us how strange Aaliyah is at points. :) It was nice to see the ugly enchanted light, it screams progress.

Lictor Magnus

I love Kervin chapters. I thought it was great, I’m excited to see how Rael does in a straight fight with someone on his level.

Imspinnennetz

Sandra and Aaliyah should try to sell their self driving bivol (nearly dead one) back to Kervin as a joke. Thanks for chapter

Captdeth

Thx for chapter

Captdeth

Yaaaaaa


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