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Ch: 103

🕑 Added 2022-02-11 06:23:52 +0000 UTC

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Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Dave

100% most important thong is this story continues really great MC that you have built I dare say ypir on genious level of creating the MC the story though is getting more and more detail bogged down with points of view on characters and side storys, the village wall timming in the story is horrible since it's already been more than 15 months since alliah turned 15 and the festival and wedding should have already happened. Please get some big picture stuff written out.

Steven Palmer

I just figured it he something like a cave with monsters and the prizes for it would be resources. Like the high mana zone, it's comparable to a dungeon setting but doesn't have to be in the ground. Dunno something random like that. But makes sense. Would be interesting if they were to burrow into an ant nest 9r something.

Stephen Pearson

No dungeons in this story, at least according to Del-Razen. From chapter 14: “Dungeon Crawl? What’s that?” With sparkling eyes, staring into the abyss, I can’t help but channel the joy every kid feels when playing their first game. “A maze of corridors and passageways; teeming with traps, monsters, and treasure!” … “Kid, I don’t know what cave you’ve ever been in, but this is just a mine.” “But aren’t there monsters?” “Of course.” Finally, I thought a part of me was about to die. “All caves have bugs and animals you have to look out for.” “That’s not what I mean, Del! I’m talking about a place of adventure, where people challenge themselves or hunt for treasure, places like that!” “Well… I guess a bandit lair fits those criteria, or maybe an old ruin somewhere. Heck if I know! A cave is just a cave.” So, no dungeons... I hang my head in defeat. Even with the game elements, this world isn’t a game. People live simple lives, and, as Del put it: a cave is just a cave.

Steven Palmer

Love this story. I'm excited to see if they discover something from the mine! Either a dungeon or a dangerous ore. So many options!

Bonobo

Thanks for the chapter, I don't mind you share it for "free", I like the story and hope to read more👍

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!!

Jonathan

could focus more on its newly acquired territories. newly-acquired This area was meant to be torn down anyways anyway None of my contacts in the guards reported him leaving the city so, I knew he was here somewhere. city, so But now that I’ve killed him, I’m out of targets to vent my rage. upon whom to vent Sighing, I dash for a nearby ally alley considering the way the war is turning out or the lack thereof. considering the way the war, or the lack thereof, is turning out.

Jonathan

Master and I mined a bunch of stone a couple of days back, and Richard brought them in to help prep it before they're carted off to the village. Either stones, prep them and they're or stone, prep it and it's all be it as begrudgingly as possible. albeit and then reheel the section with magic. re-heal

Straven

Did indeed enjoy the chapter, hope the sis does indeed make it through as time goes by. Love that our main girls truly growing! Especially love her reaction to the rising difficulty and earlier easiness of said diff!

White Neko Knight

It was plenty long enough.

Bunny Waffles

THE RETURN! I think I'll have to do a reread from chapter 1 this weekend, but I am thrilled it is back! and to think I was about to turn in for the night!

Imspinnennetz

Thank you for the chapter. Looks like Aaliyah is wrapping up the last remaining tasks in the village. I wonder if Reel will get challenged by Tabitha (with Aaliyah's secret maneuvering of course)


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