Magic_Smithing
patreon
Ch: 99
🕑 Added 2021-05-17 07:48:34 +0000 UTC"After that, I went back home to write down my notes," I explain to Sandra how I spent my first day off. While talking to Sandra, I removing the kaglese arrow shaft from the forge, moving over to my anvil to use my smaller hammer to straighten it out better. Just looking at the arrow shaft, you could see the slight bend on the one end that needs to be fixed.
“What’d you do next?” Sandra eagerly asks me.
Delicate work such as this doesn’t require a lot of force and produces a lot less noise, so Sandra and I can talk while I’m working without needing to shout at one another. "Well, I wanted to continue experimenting, but after I made it home and recorded my findings, I decided it just wasn't practical."
“Oh?” Sandra gives me a curious look, expecting me to explain my decision.
“I used up more mana than I thought I had,” I clarify. “Drawing all those runes and testing them out took up a good chunk of my mana. Even if I went to Master’s clearing to get some blacksmithing logs to experiment with, I’d at most have enough mana to do one or two more experiments. It just didn’t seem worth it to bother Master for such a small reason.”
"I appreciate that," Master comments from his bench, only this time he's sitting up and watching me work instead of pretending to nap. It's actually Tabitha who's lying on her bench this time, looking like she's bored to death. Master has been ignoring her all day, choosing to focus on my work instead of entertaining the battle-hungry monster.
I look up from my anvil and offer Master Del a quick smile before turning back on my work. "Plus, by the time I made it home, Mom had already finished most of my armor and needed me to tailor it. Mom made me stand in place for an hour before she was happy with her work," I chuckle, recalling my day to Sandra.
"The same armor Tabitha destroyed yesterday?" Sandra's question makes me pause mid-swing. "Your mom must have loved that," Sandra giggles to herself.
I turn my head and narrow my eyes at my friend, causing her to stop laughing immediately. "Sorry," Sandra holds up her palms in a placating gesture and retreats a half step back.
Letting out a sigh of frustration, I move the kaglese arrow shaft back into the forge. “Needless to say, Mother was not happy when I returned home last night.”
"You can't blame your mom for being mad," Sandra tells me, casting a glance at Tabitha, who's staring up at the sky blankly.
"I know; I just felt bad after trying so hard to defend myself."
“If you can call what you did yesterday defending yourself,” Sandra pokes fun at me.
“Maybe you should just spend my sparring days with Richard,” I snap back.
“And miss watching you get your butt kicked, no way,” Sandra smiles good-naturedly at me. "I spent the last five years in Drey studying; watching the two of you fight is the most interesting thing I've ever seen in years.”
“Didn’t your magic teacher take you out of the city to hunt goblins?” I point out to Sandra.
Sandra snorts and waves off my question. "We were a group of mages escorted by a handful of mercenaries. We were more in danger inside the city than we were outside hunting goblins. Now watching you and Tabitha fight, that's action! Even if you can't do anything against her," Sandra can't help but throw in that last little quip.
"I'm getting better," I defend myself while pulling the kaglese arrow shaft out of the forge and moving it back to the anvil. I got the bend out, and now I need to do my best to round it out perfectly.
"Well, it is getting harder to follow the two of you," Sandra admits. "But what was up with yesterday? It looked like she was meaner than usual, and that's saying something."
“You missed it,” I tell Sandra. “The day you left to hang out with Richard, I scored my first hit on Tabitha, and apparently, that means she doesn't have to go easy on me anymore."
“Gods!” Sandra hisses through her teeth. “No wonder you were trying to dodge so much.”
“Yeah, yesterday I was trying hard not to ruin my chest piece, but that just backfired on me. I was trying too hard to dodge and block Tabitha when I should’ve been looking for an opening. If I swung at her more, my armor might have lasted longer than it did,” I admit in a downcast voice.
"Alright," Sandra claps her hands, drawing my full attention for a quick moment. "As much fun as it is making fun of the golden girl, this conversation is getting a little too depressing for me. Forget about yesterday and tell me what you did on your second day off. I want to hear everything before you show me what you learned tomorrow."
I can't help but smile at Sandra's excitement. Sure, I was too concerned with my gear yesterday, but I won't make that mistake again. Mom was mad at me when I showed her my armor, but she quickly got over it and was just happy it did its job. Though, Mom did say she wouldn’t be putting as much effort into my armor if I’m going to destroy it twice a week, which is understandable.
“That’s right, tomorrow will be our first official day practicing enchanting,” I comment like it’s no big deal.
"Well, you'll be practicing," Sandra crosses her arms over her baby bump. "I have to watch until I can get my hands on my own engraving pen, and who knows how long that will take."
“Kervin should be here in another week or two,” I remind Sandra.
"I know, but I doubt he'll just happen to be carrying everything I need," Sandra pouts out to me. "I probably won't get what I need until after the new year festival."
Shoot, she's right. And with all the chaos in Drey at the moment, there's no guarantee Kervin will be able to get his hands on the right mana gem for Sandra. Grey's dead, and yet he's still making life difficult for people.
I should contact Giovanni and ask him if he can help me out. Now that I think about it, there are a few more things I should ask for as well. My mithril supply is starting to run low now that I'm using it in more things, and it wouldn't hurt to get my hands on some more eathrosse and devil's poke. I have enough herbs to make three more batches of engraving ink, but I doubt that will last long once I really start enchanting. And we'll go through our supply even quicker once Sandra starts practicing with me.
“I think I might be able to help,” I reassure Sandra.
“Really?” I see Sandra brighten up out of the corner of my eye as I hold up my arrow shaft and examine it for any flaws. I’ll still have to make a few more adjustments after the arrow is completed, but the shaft is good enough for now as it is.
“I can try,” I tell Sandra as I place the completed arrow shaft on my workbench. "That's two down," I remark out loud. I don't know what it is, but announcing your progress just gives you a sense of accomplishment.
Sandra watches me grab the next ingot of kaglese and move it into the forge. “Are you sure I’m not distracting you?”
“You ask me that now?” I smirk at Sandra.
“I know these arrows are supposed to be important, and I don’t want to mess you up.”
"It's fine. To be honest, these arrows have lost most of their meaning since Pacore captured general Pitz."
“Then why are you making them?” Sandra gives me a confused look.
"Money, mostly," I tell her. "I was given most of my materials on credit, and I need to pay Silver Herd back."
"They just gave you all of your supplies!?" Sandra stares at me with her mouth hanging open in shock. "Merchant companies seldom do that."
I chuckle at Sandra's astonished look. "It wasn't all through credit," I elaborate. "I used my profits from my last delivery to buy my magic obscuring magic tool. And it also helped that Grey, Drey's Silver Herd branch manager, was trying hard to get me to sign a contract with him."
"I remember you told me about him. Didn't you mention something about solving your problem with him earlier in the week?"
"Did I?" I scratch my head. I tell Mom and Sandra almost everything, and sometimes I mix up who I've informed about something.
I shrug my shoulders, less I have to explain. “Anyways, yeah, I’m honoring the terms of my contract, even if it isn’t with the person I signed it with.”
“I get that, but why are you making arrows? Why not try a sword?” Sandra suggests to me.
"I admit, it crossed my mind." Removing the kaglese ingot from the forge, I move over to the anvil and start drawing it out, paying particular attention to the metal's internal mana structure. "It would be fun to try and make something new, but I don't want to risk the coin."
“You’re worried that much about money? How much gold do you owe Silver Herd?”
“About 450 gold coins." If Sandra was drinking something at the moment, she certainly would've done a spit take. Hearing how much I owe Silver Herd immediately sends my friend into a coughing fit.
“That much for some ore!?” Sandra exclaims once she finally catches her breath.
I nod, understanding her surprise. For a small village like this, 450 gold coins is practically a fortune. “Kaglese, the stuff I’m working with now,” I hold up the glowing ingot that is slowly taking shape, “Is a magic metal. I probably won’t try to enchant any of them myself, but the weapons I’ve made from this material are perfect for doing so, or so I was told. If I have to guess, each of the swords and spears I've made are worth between 3 and 5 gold coins apiece. At 70% market value, I would get between 168 and 280 gold coins for what I’ve already made.”
Sandra’s eyes widen the more I explain. “Then there are the arrows I'm making; I'm confident they'll sell for at least 50 gold coins apiece, maybe even more. I could make a sword with what I have, it may even be the best thing I've ever made, but it isn't what was asked of me.”
“Hey, Tabitha!” I turn and call out, grabbing the bored warrior’s attention.
In a split-second, Tabitha swings her feet off to the side of her bench and snaps up with an excited look on her face. “Do you have time for a quick match?”
I ignore Tabitha’s sparring invitation and instead ask for her opinion. “You know a bit about weapons, right? Which are more important, a good arrow or a good sword?”
Most of Tabitha’s excitement fades away when she realizes I have no intention of fighting her. But because I’m asking her questions about weapons, Tabitha doesn’t entirely revert to her expressionless self. "That's tricky," Tabitha thinks out loud. "Good weapons are always in demand, but I'd say quality arrows are always desired the most."
Sandra doesn't seem to get what Tabitha is getting at, so I explain it to her. "Swords can last a long time if you take care of them; arrows are the same, but which are you more likely to lose in a battle, an arrow or a sword? Archers are always looking for replacements, and it will be much easier for Silver Herd to sell a handful of quality arrows than it is for them to sell one amazing sword.”
“I get what you’re saying,” Sandra nods along in understanding.
Tabitha lets out a small laugh, drawing both Sandra's and my attention. "You make it sound like Silver Herd will have a hard time selling your weapons. I'm sure our Master has already worked out a deal in which your weapons will be immediately shipped to the two front lines as soon as you pass them off.”
“Really?” I ask, honestly a little surprised by this news. Pacore seemed interested in my work, sure, but I figured he would simply ask me to make more weapons once I was finished with my order. To think Pacore is willing to pay retail price for my work, that’s honestly a little flattering.
“Your crafting abilities are far beyond your combat skills," Tabitha remarks with just a hint of dissatisfaction. "Master Pacore was looking for you even before the two of you ever met."
“He was?”
“Yes, during the battle in which we took Fort North Ridge, General Pitz managed to injure Master with a surprising arrow we were sure she shouldn’t have had.”
So, my arrow was used against Pacore. "And that's a good thing?" I nervously ask. Knowing Tabitha, she wouldn't be mad at me for selling an arrow to the General, but I did indirectly put Pacore in danger, and she cares about her Master above all else.
"It is," Tabitha starts smiling like she does when we're sparring. "Thanks to your arrow, Master Pacore was able to relish in his fight with General Pitz. Without it, I fear Master wouldn't have had a single challenge this whole campaign."
Does she mean everything other than taking the fort was easy? “Glad I could help,” I off-handily remark as I turn my attention back to my work and Sandra.
“Maybe once you finish your arrows, you could try them out on me,” Tabitha giggles sitting back down on her bench.
Nothing would make me happier, but I don’t have the skills to use arrows this good. I doubt I could even hit the broad side of a barn with a bow, let alone someone like Tabitha.
“The point is, I’d rather take the money rather than chance it.”
"Don't take this the wrong way, Aaliyah, but what do you need money for? Technically, you're a student under someone as powerful as Pacore; I'm sure you can ask him for anything you need," Sandra reminds me of my wealthy new Master.
I scoff at Sandra as I move the arrow shaft that's slowly taking shape back into the forge. Sandra glares at me while I work the bellows, challenging me to prove her wrong.
"Putting aside the fact that everything I ask from Pacore will put me further in his debt; the money isn't even for me. In a few months, I'll be leaving the village, and I have no idea when I might be back. In case something goes wrong, I want my family to have enough money they can flee if they have to and live comfortably someplace else."
“In case something goes wrong?” Sandra repeats.
I nod my head. “Tabitha has been alluding to it that I’ll have to prove myself once I make it to Scholl. I don’t know what that exactly means, but if everyone in Scholl is like Pacore and Tabitha, I doubt they'll be challenging me to a dance-off."
“You're right; I don't think people will enjoy dancing with you as much as Tabitha does.” Sandra misunderstands my earthly reference, but she gets the point I’m trying to make. Still, her misinterpretation makes me smile.
"I plan on leaving a couple hundred gold coins for my family. That's why I want to get this order over with and focus more on enchanting before Kervin returns. Even if I can only enchant a few basic runes, I'll be able to make a lot more money quickly."
“Simple, I like it,” Sandra remarks. “But is enchanting really that easy? You still haven’t told me what you did during your second day off.”
“Mostly more tests,” I smile coyly at Sandra.
“Nice try, but we both know you want to talk about what you found out.” Sandra knows me well.
“Well, after my morning workout routine with Mother, I had to stop by here and grab the blacksmithing logs I mentioned earlier.”
“Naturally, go on,” Sandra eagerly pushes for me to get to the good stuff.
“Fine, I’ll skip over all the boring details of my family life,” I say exaggeratingly. When I don’t get that big of a reaction from Sandra, I let out a soft sigh and start explaining my second round of rune experiments, all while continuing to work on my arrow shafts.
"Even though I went to get the blacksmithing logs, I didn't actually use them in my first few experiments. You see, the night before, I thought of a really important test that I didn't consider during my first round of testing."
“Well, don’t leave me in suspense,” Sandra smiles at my theatrics and plays along.
“Do you think the size of a rune matters?” I pose Sandra the same question I had, and when her eyes widen, I can tell immediately she understands where I’m going with this.
"It's a simple question, but it has a big impact," I explain to my friend. "I took four regular planks of wood and engraved a basic tier 1 mana absorbing rune onto each of them, each a different size. The largest I stretched from one side of the board to the other while keeping the rune’s dimensions right. The smallest rune was about the same size as the runes I copied from the magic items. And the last two tests were in between those.”
“So, what’d you find out?” Sandra enthusiastically asks.
“Size does affect the runes performance, but only to a certain degree,” I explain my findings. “I measured how quickly all four of my tests could absorb enough mana to reach their breaking point, and it was surprisingly close. I expected the largest rune to absorb mana quicker than the smaller ones, and it did, but only by a little bit. In the end, the largest rune only absorbed mana 13% faster than the smallest one."
"Did the larger rune put any extra strain on the material?" Sandra quickly hits me with a question that reminds me how great it is to have someone discuss these things with me; I didn't even consider how a larger rune might put more force on the base material.
For a moment, I stop swinging my hammer and consider Sandra's question. "I don't think it did," I reply. "But the larger rune definitely took up more room, and I would've had a harder time engraving anything else."
“Then I wonder if the runes used to enchant buildings are different?” Sandra ponders out loud.
That's a good question; now I want to kick myself for not studying the shop's enchantments back when I was in Drey. "I guess we'll have to do some further testing down the line." All the same, I don't exactly have any enchantments you'd want cast on a building. I might be able to replicate a lightbulb, but that would eat up a lot of mana for something both Sandra and I could do with a basic spell.
“Looks like it,” Sandra agrees with me. “What was your next test?”
"The next few tests were a little boring," I tell Sandra. "I finally switched to using planks made from the blacksmithing logs and started checking to see if the runes worked differently on different materials. Basically, I retested my first few experiments from yesterday."
“Anything of note?” Sandra asks me.
"Not really," I reply. "My earlier hypothesis was proven correct in that the blacksmithing logs were just better at holding the runes. The stronger wood was able to hold a lot more mana than your run-of-the-mill timber and lasted nearly fourteen times longer than my experiments from the day before. It really does boil down to the materials you use."
Sandra nods along but doesn't interrupt me as I continue talking about my experiments. "After finishing my more basic tests, I moved on to the more fun stuff. My tests proved the blacksmithing logs could hold out longer than the regular wood, so I jumped straight into trying to engrave a full enchantment to see how it would work on a plank of wood.”
“What enchantment did you go with?” Sandra can’t hold herself back from asking.
"Nothing crazy," I tell her. "I only know a handful of complete enchantments, and most wouldn't exactly work well on a plank of wood. No matter what I do, a plank of wood can't purify water after all," I joke.
"I kept it simple and copied the enchantment found in Master's mining helmet. My thinking was a small ball of light shouldn't be too dangerous. But it was either that, or I enchant the plank to produce a small flame, and I think you can guess what the results of that would look like,” I glance meaningfully at the forge where the same logs are burning now.
“Did it work?” Sandra pushes for me to continue.
"It actually did," I smile in triumphant, remembering my success. "The enchantment worked like it was supposed to and produced a ball of light on the wood's surface where the light rune was inscribed. The enchantment even held for two minutes before the wood started to disintegrate."
Sandra looks a little disappointed that the wood didn't survive the test. "Even before the wood failed, the light rune was singeing the wood around it," I explain what I saw.
“But light spells don’t produce that much heat,” Sandra scrunches her face in confusion.
“The ball of light didn’t produce much heat, but the rune itself did,” I clarify. “Channeling magic didn’t exactly help the wood either. Though I did get something good out of the test."
“And what was that?” Sandra asks me.
“After channeling my magic for a few seconds through the completed enchantment, I finally unlocked the Enchanting skill. It’s official now,” I boast.
“Then I’ll need to complete a full enchantment if I want the skill as well,” Sandra ponders out loud. “Can I borrow your notes on the runes you’ve deciphered? I’ll make my own copies and start practicing drawing them.”
“Sure, no problem,” I tell my friend.
“Thanks,” Sandra brightly smiles at me. “So, what’d you do after you unlocked the skill?”
“I took a nap,” I chuckle.
“You did not.”
"I had to," I tell her. "Well, I didn't exactly take a nap, but I did stop to meditate for a bit. As I explained, enchanting eats through your mana quicker than you would expect. If I wanted to do more experiments, I had to pace myself.”
"How long did you meditate for?"
“An hour or so,” I tell Sandra as I move on to my next arrow shaft.
I'm surprised by how efficiently I'm working. I know I told Sandra she wasn't hindering me, but I didn't think either of us believed that little fib. Yet, here I am swinging my hammer as good as any other day, all while having a pleasant conversation with my friend. Swinging my hammer feels natural, the glowing metal moving as I want it with each swing; it almost feels effortless.
As soon as that thought crosses my mind, I feel one of my skills leveling up. I don't even have to pull up my status page to know Blacksmithing gained another level. I'm only one level away from reaching the level 75 test. Master said reaching level 75 in Blacksmithing means you're on the cusp of being considered a true blacksmith, or at least that's how stone kin see things.
I want to reach that level! I want to push my skills to their limits and see what Blacksmithing does once I pass that test. I have plenty of skills that have passed two tests, and each has grown significantly more versatile; it's only fitting my blacksmithing skills finally join them.
“Then what’d you do?” Sandra’s question brings my focus back to our conversation, but my hands never stop working.
“After I regained some of my mana, I did the next sensible thing,” I wryly smile.
“And that is?” Sandra asks, bracing for the punchline she knows is coming.
“I engraved a flame enchantment to see what would happen.”
Sandra shakes her head from side to side with a smile on her face. "Didn't you always tell me not to waste resources when we were experimenting with engraving ink? And didn’t you say you didn’t want to test the flame enchantment?”
“I wouldn’t call it wasting resources,” I defend my actions, knowing that’s exactly what I did. “And I said I didn't want to use the flame rune on my first test with blacksmithing logs; I didn't say I didn't try it later. Plus, I wanted to see how a rune of the exact opposite nature of the material it's engraved on reacts with one another." I'm happy I was able to come up with that excuse on the fly.
“Sureeee you did,” Sandra looks at me like she can read my mind.
“I might have wanted to see if it would explode,” I admit to my friend. But in my defense, I was picturing magic grenades when I thought of the idea.
“So, how’d it turn out?”
“Well, it didn’t explode as I wanted it to," I tell her in a dejected manner. "The wood just caught on fire after a few seconds and sort of popped after the runes structure’s failed.”
“That sounds like an explosion to me,” Sandra remarks.
"Please," I scoff at the idea of that little pop being called an explosion. I've seen an explosion; hell, I've been inside one. "Even someone with your physical stats would've only gotten a few light burns, nothing more."
“Then did you learn anything?” Sandra asks with her best mom look. You know the look where your parents catch you doing something stupid and asking what you learned from your mistake, that’s the look Sandra has on her face. I bet Mom or Sarette are teaching her how to make these faces; I'd put money on it.
“I figured out the most expensive way to start a fire,” I joke, earning me a small gasp from Sandra. "No, but in all honesty, the test with the fire rune did help me out. I didn't notice it at first, but after I tested my third completed enchantment, I noticed something I missed with my two prior experiments."
“What was your third test?” Sandra asks for clarification.
“I copied the sharpening enchantment.”
“You tried to sharpen a piece of wood?” Sandra asks more than a little judgingly. “And how was this also not a waste of resources?”
“Have you never heard of a wooden sword before?” I counter much to Sandra’s amusement. “And, shut up, it was a good thing I tested it.”
"Oh?" Sandra's mocking smile fades, and she eagerly listens to my explanation.
“The enchantment didn’t do much to the plank of wood, but that isn't the point. While the enchantment was activated, I noticed a difference in the sharpening rune compared to the light or flame rune. It might have been because there wasn't anything for the sharpening rune to do, considering I didn't exactly specify an edge for the rune to sharpen. But even without a specified target, the sharpening rune held up remarkably well, and the mana inside the rune was flowing more naturally than the light and flame runes."
I give Sandra a minute to digest the information, and she quickly gets a look of inspiration. "The sharpening rune worked better with the earth mana in the engraving ink."
I can't help but smile and nod; Sandra came up with the same conclusion I had. The engraving ink we made is mostly earth mana, and even the ambient mana the ink absorbs to cure is processed into the stuff naturally. I think wind mana would work better for the sharpening rune, but it explains why the other two runes had a harder time working. I didn’t have the ink specific for the job.
“This could be a problem,” Sandra bites her lip.
"We shouldn't worry just yet," I tell my friend. "We have some half-finished knives in storage, and I'll try enchanting them tomorrow. Maybe it won't be that big of a deal that we only have one type of ink; the other enchantments did work after all."
“But they also eventually failed,” Sandra reminds me.
"Yeah, but the sharpening enchantment did the same thing. That's why I'm going to use steel tomorrow; I don't think wood is exactly the best material to hold enchantments. We can worry about tweaking our engraving ink formula after we see how the enchantments fair on steel. Remember, we already knew our ink isn’t the best out there, and we were always going to have to figure out how to improve it. This is just a reminder that we still need to devote some of our time to the subject.”
“I don’t suppose you were given instructions on how to adjust the engraving ink?” Sandra sarcastically asks me, knowing full well how little information I was given on the subject.
“Sorry,” I burst Sandra’s nonexistent bubble. The both of us let out a collective sigh. No one said teaching yourself enchanting would be easy; in fact, I think people consider it impossible.
But if Sandra and I can come this far, I’m sure we’ll continue to figure things out as we go.
I don't want to get Sandra's hopes up, but I already know how we can try and change our engraving ink formula. Magicite isn't the only form of crystalized mana. Considering how much is used in the recipe, I’m guessing we’ll need to switch out the magicite for other magical crystals if we want to change the elemental affinity. There might be other herbs we’ll need, but we can at least try changing up the magicite first.
Then again, I might be jumping the gun here. I need to go back and reexamine the magic items I bought, but I don’t remember there being that big a difference in the makeup of the runes I examined. I already determined the items came from different makers, and if the ink wasn't that special, it stands to reason we can still enchant the various runes with the ink we already have.
The next couple of weeks will be busy, and yet, I can't help but feel excited. I already earned the skill I was after, and I'm confident I'll only improve from here. I've never shied away from hard work, and I'm not going to start now.
**********
Author’s Notes:
5,150 words
I am alive! Sorry for the long wait. I wanted to have this out sooner, but I was away from my computer Thursday, and I got my covid shot Friday, which left my arms feeling sore the last two days. Still not at 100%, but it brings me a piece of mind knowing I finally got the vaccine.
Sadly, I haven't gotten any superpowers yet or sprouted an extra arm to type faster, but fingers crossed there's always the second shot. 😊
Tell me what you think of the chapter below. The next chapter will probably have us bounding through multiple days to speed up the crafting a little bit so that we can get to the good stuff.
I hope you enjoyed the chapter, and as always, stay safe.
Comments
Bettina
Thanks for the chapter. For the editing pot: "While talking to Sandra, I removing the kaglese arrow" -> removed " I want to hear everything before you show me what you learned tomorrow." -> yesterday? "I smile in triumphant" -> triumph "how the enchantments fair on steel." -> fare
Timo Immig
According to RR last active he is alive on there. On here no clue. Roughly 18 days of silence.
austin kutz
Yo, you alive? Been some time
Eric Gonyea
I agree you are awesome you are also entitled to take a break and have writer's block. But I'm starting to get frustrated because for the money we pay you what you owe us is transparency. I don't care if I only get one chapter a month or two for the next year but I want to know about it and not feel like we are being ignored. Seriously don't let this story die you are an amazing author but either you need to work on communication or hire someone. If I don't hear from you within the next week just to let us know you're still alive I'm canceling as well.
Chemnerd263
I know nothing about writing, but you're doing great, even if you do have a block right now. Take care of yourself, brainstorm a few chapters ahead. Find someone you can bounce ideas with to get past this bump. You're awesome, and you should feel awesome.
HyeoJ
Every chiil the fck out, holy fck. You guys honestly don't know how hard it is to write so stfu. all we can do is give the writer all our support and let him/her take their time.
Timo Immig
He doesn't help himself by saying that he tries to keep a five day schedule and then doesn't follow that 3 times in a row with 2 double time and the next chapter has already taken three times as long of a wait. If he doesn't want to be reminded then he shouldn't ''promise'' deadlines that he might not keep. Partially it's his own words that created the "conditoning".
mudokon
This comment section is a shitshow 😂, but i kinda understand the critism. You conditioned your supporters with regular updates and delay notices, that this sudden silence is giving wrong impresion. I do not support writters on patreon for x amount of chapters per month, but most probably do, so take my stupid 5$, have a beer on me and calmly think about the future of this story. I think you should restructure the tiers and tear down the pay walls when you cannot deliver the promises. Unlock everything for smaller price with achiavable goal (1chp/month) and if someone wants to really support you, they will give you more. I think thats fair to everyone and hopefully will elevate the pressure you feel. Worklife balance is very important and sarisfy those who feel like you robbing them. Take care brother and get better.
Emanuel Sla
bye
Zap
Love the story please don't let it die
Toni Pampliega
Really sorry to have to cancel the membership. I hope this is a phase an the story continues and I can come back to support it, if it has regular content. As all the patreons, I love the story. But one month with only one realease... too much. Stay safe Kosnik4!
Stephen
I've paused my membership but will gladly sign up again if you get things back under control. I wish you nothing but the best and hope you find your groove again. I love this story and hope you get your house in order.
D
Hiho, i do not disagree completely. I wrote a comment not long ago about people losing their job because of mental health issues - and said that this is his job and he is in danger to lose it if he keeps going this way. Meaning, i disagree on the fact that people with mental health issues can work just fine and in no danger to lose their job if they just keep trying.
Camelopardalis
You’re assuming arrogance. Plenty of people freeze under negative feedback, and the success of this story might inspire feelings of unworthiness. I just hope the author levels his Meditation skill and learns to deal with this. The more successful you are, the more cantankerous fans will find you. I hope he doesn’t wind up like Rothfus or Martin, abandoning a promising story.
Hamed Al-Ghamdi
Alot of people here are talking about the "entitled" people writing how they're not satisfied, and condemning them for expressing their opinions. You need to understand something, this writer did NOT take this whole thing seriously, for some reason he just took the money but not the JOB and it is a freaking job, when you are being paid more than 100k a year to write, you better be so serious about it. You better sit yourself on your PC for 8 hours or more and I don't care if all you do is stare at the keyboard, because if you stare long enough you will put a couple of words in, and the rest will drag itself will them. This is not a muse thing where you would only write when inspiration hits you (that ship has long sailed when you accepted money by implying that you would make this your main focus as a JOB). Now people would start defending the writer and asking me how do I know that he's not doing just that but nothing good is been put down on paper, well, that could be the case if the author put on a couple of chapters and they came in bad, but that's not the case, especially with this wall of silence. For those who would say something about mental health issues I would say 'really'? I worked my whole adult life and I've seen people with all kinds of Severe mental issues and every day I would see them sit next to me from 9 to 5 and preform so freaking beautifully at what they do, because they understand how important it is to thier lives to put in the work, so yeah. How I really see this ? I see that the author got comfortable and still thinks that people won't stop supporting him if he doesn't take this seriously ( especially when he's being validated in the comments ). Ps if the author does what some people here think he will do and gets a chapter at the beginning of next month... you know what that would mean? Right? (If you don't reread this shitty comment again)
Desurtfawks
Edge lords so sharp you can cut yourself on the comments. Kos catch you later bro. I know you will be back but until then.
John Koor
He's continuing to post updates on royal road, just not here.
Straven
I don't mind waiting especially for such a great read, what I don't like though is dead silence esp after hearing he got a shot I know has had some unhappy affects and results on many people. I'd be happy simply hearing he's alive and kicking.
Stephen Pearson
Fwiw, I don't think that means anything anymore; either a bug or privacy change seems to return that for anyone whose name is clicked on. Shame, since you could sometimes find good stories from likeminded people's subscriptions.
Melnik5
Take your time, write out a good outline on where you want the story to go. DONT rush. A lot of stories that i read fell apart whenever the author rushed. Don’t make that mistake and destroy your story. We can wait
Rip Woodham
It's funny how blind to irony you are. You find this comment section and immediately start lambasting a bunch of people who are holding the author to *his words.* Spamming the same comment "Retarded and unnecessary comment ..." and not even realizing how accurately that describes your own actions. I think you need to look up what an insult is, because few if any have attacked Kosnik personally here. And yet, in all these over 120 comments I don't think anybody has been as insultory as you.
White Neko Knight
Damn, there's a lot of rather rude and self-entitled individuals in the comments. Do what it takes to make sure you feel healthy Kosnik, I'm staying subbed.
Camelopardalis
“ This patron isn’t supporting any creators at the moment.”
Bobtur
Retarded and unnecessary comment ... so are you !
Bobtur
Retarded and unnecessary comment ...
Bobtur
What is wrong with all of you people insulting him ? What are you ? 15 and spending your "precious" money on this story but don't get anything to eat ? I follow authors that published twice in a year and never complained about it. What is wrong with all of you people yelling that "X dollars is too much for X chapters a month" ? Being a patreon is all about being supportive. You are technically not owed anything for it, scumbags ! You do realise you can support on patreon creators that don't publish anything, right ? Or are you too entitled for that ? So fuck you all of you, and see you next month ... or not, becuz' all the retards will have left by now.
SilentStriker
I hope everything is okay. Everyone needs a vacation every now and then.
Hauke
I love the Story. I will be back once there are regular updates again. Take the time you need and get professional help. Had to do so too in the past and it is simply a good decision. I wish you all the best ❣️
I also do so. At this point though, I'm wondering if there's any point in coming back. The story is great, I adore it, but 2 chapters per month? By the time it builds up to 110 or so, I'll have lost interest.
Derrick McDowell
I
Andar
For a lot of reasons I usually alternate between one month of subscription and one or two months without, allowing chapters to collect before subscribing again. So next month you won't see me. If I return will completely depend on whether you manage to get more writing time in again in the future - I'll probably subscribe again when chapter 110 or 115 or so is on Patreon.
D
<b>*chuckles*</b> I beat he'll release one at the first of july when all the bad people with their bad comments have stopped subscribing. At least that's what i'm hoping for, because id feel bad if something bad had happened to him and all people like me could do was rage quit. <b>@kosnik</b> I really hope you just avoid our increasingly toxic comments and you do well. Wont see you next month, but i'm following so ill see if you're back and well. Maybe write your explanation in an open post so ex-followers can read it too?
FancyPantsu
Sorry Kosnik, but I'm not re-subbing. Get your shit together.
Dave
So Kosnik4 when are we getting a refund for this month , the whole idea of this process is you submit your writing on royal road (which is still being updated once a week) gain a fan base, put the lead chapters onto patron to earn cash to write the story and get to stop your full time/ part time work to concentrate on writing the story then publish the book in the end. If your gonna be a dick and no even tell all your supporters WTF is going on or provide any kind of content accepting our money is just f'ing rude
gattala
Dude im out, the author just destroyed my excitement with this story, good luck in your work and i hope you can find the chance to fix your communication problems.
Bookman
I think Kosniks mistake was that he published the story before creating an outline for it. He himself sayed that in his head the story only went this far and he is out of ideas. Usaly Authors have a rough outline or scetch of the story from start to finish so there is always a direktion to go to. Not having one ended more then a couple web series pre mature. I can only recomend to kosnik4 to do redo the entire story as a rough outline for now. Cancel Pantreon and just try to find yourself again. The Mark of a great person is now how much they can take. Its how quick they get back on their feet when life knocks you down. To keep going when the going gets tough.
Justin
Agree with the feedback. Kosnik has done an excellent job of writing, storytelling, and capturing a great fantasy setting. I hope you are doing ok and get your mojo back. I look forward to reading your amazing story once you get through the current challenges you are facing.
Timo Immig
You have 2 days otherwise you will only have writen 2 CHAPTERS in 1 MONTH. It is not 3 days, because of timezones.
John Scott
Multiple 10+ day gaps is hard to swallow, but the communication blackout is over the top. I hope this one doesn’t die, but in the mean time I’ll look elsewhere
Hugo Lallo
Still nothing huh?
Oblivious
✌️
Robert Mullins
Canceling. If by some miracle this story is back on again in a few months I'll consider trying again.
Tom Henman
Hated to do it but canceled my support here. Far too slow of releases and no contact/info from author on why.
Thaldor
I’m out for a while. Good luck with your writers block.
Melnik5
I love the story, but where is the next chapter
D
You must be joking. Did you take a look at the patreon counter? Even with him behaving that way, people still subscribe. xD But personally ill take a break, its not like the story runs away if i continue later when kosnik has returned to his former... form. ^^
Rip Woodham
It's seeming like if you want Kosnik to receive your criticism, you're going to have to criticize with your wallet.
Emanuel Sla
i love this hystory, but why you wasn´t posted chap by 10 days?
Camelopardalis
Kosnik4- We’re used to fantasy authors having difficulty finishing a story, but it is great when you check in. Plotting the middle of a story is difficult, and plenty of promising stories have been abandoned on Royal Road. But web serials allow a lot of leeway for fluff chapters, and you are due a few. You are a talented writer with a fresh perspective and a gift for creating a world into which readers can escape. You are making more in a month than many authors make from their first contract for an entire book with a traditional publisher. I hope you can own your success, and aren’t sabotaging yourself. If you worry you might be, you might Google “success thermostat.”
Sheeprat
sad to see a good story die
Desurtfawks
"consider myself an avid mastibator" TMI bro
George Watermelon
See ya on August or September, Kosnik, I need to recharge my batteries of hope. At that moment it's not even about money, but general negative uncertainty and lack of communication
Max Kendall
Sad to say that I will no longer be a patron after this month. I understand writers block and also things happening in one's personal life, but the complete lack of communication makes it difficult for me to want to continue supporting this series. I love the world that's being built and perhaps I will come back at some point, but for now I shall be saying goodbye.
Timo Immig
3 chapters a month at the current rate of a Chapter every 10 days.
Elsie Nnaji
Woow
Elsie Nnaji
$7 for just two chapters a month
Elsie Nnaji
No chapter today? From two chapters a week to one.. are u canceling Patreon.. please let us know
Emanuel Sla
I undestend the referenci.
Dave
Hmm 41 words per min is the global typing speed average, 5000 words is less than 2.5 hours or 10 percent of one day, now I consider myself an avid mastibator but still can't figure out what Kosnik does with the rest of the time?. At $4k a post you can afford an editor or an supportive writter I will be happy to come back and support you again when your actually supplying the work.please don't fail this story
George Watermelon
What do we say to the God of Updates? Not today!
Philip Pleiss
I need to stop cursing authors. Every time I sign up for an author's patreon, the author gets writing block or ends up taking tons of breaks. When I signed up for Vladerag the author just straight up stopped writing. When I bumped up my donation to Pirateaba, they cut their writing down from 8 chapters a month to 4 or 5.
Philip Pleiss
I'm curious if she could put the water purifying enchantment on the spigot of her smelting furnace, except swap the water rune for earth or metal. Would that filter out all the non earth attuned metal, or would that filter the slag, giving her ultra purity materials?
Timo Immig
Kosnik please inform when you are late. And try not to take 10 days again.
Timo Immig
Better not. Weapons of that precision and strength are more likely to kill their creator if anything goes wrong. After all the first guns regularly missfired or blew up injuring or killing their users. Something as powerfull and prescicion based as a Rail gun would be very dangerous. Furthermore a complex control circuit is likely a high tier rune. Otherwise with low level runes it is at most a one shot weapon as the runes will dissintegrate the weapon.
Timo Immig
Doesn't she need some instructions in order to use those?
Michael Weis
She should ask Silver Herd or Pacore for a runic healing item.
Michael Weis
Railgun. She should tell Pacore that she can make a weapon to kill the Dragon. All she needs are the right runes (electrical, cooling, insulation, circuitry/regulatory, capacitor, resistor, etc.) and materials (magic metals/stones, elemental beast material). Remember that lightning tree she encountered with her Dad? Could convince Silver Herd to invest in the weapon development so they can be paid BIG by Scholl or Pacore later.
Svish
She could do that, or get her master to give her the information... but that would shorten the story- so the author would not so it.
Michael Weis
Why hasn't she called Giovanni to buy out Sandra's magic contract on her behalf so she could learn magic from her?
Michael Weis
Me too. It would increase absorption of ambient mana when she spins it, and fly off (increase weight?) when she activates mana threads on the handle. And unleash an arcane electric shock (or expel arcane force) when it hits when activated with mana threads. But it would cost a lot of mana to recall unless it's soul-bound, something that doesn't exist or hasn't been mentioned yet. That feature might have to wait till she gets her hand on the soul mage journal.
Scott Fellman
I got phiser vaccine second shot had me out of work 3 days 2 of those with severe flu like symptoms 1 of those to recover from the other two and I'm still weezing and hacking 5 days in. But you know what they say progress
Bad Timing
They are still not in agreement on that. Aaliyah want them to stay in the village, while they want to follow.
Steven Palmer
I thought her parents said that they are going with her. So did that change? Or is she still just hoping for the best that they will not go?
Imspinnennetz
I don't think that Giovanni is going to shortchange Aaliyah. He after all decided to throw his company's future with Scholl for her and risk being branded as traitor. However, Kervin will have to make a new contract with Aaliyah.
HardhatDoozer
Loved the chapter. But since she ate the contract with Gray personally and he lent her the 450 gold worth of kaglese ore, she’s in for a pleasant surprise when she doesn’t have anyone to pay back for her work. An unintended consequence of his death right after the contract was eaten.
Dave
Really happy the focus is sticking with MC for these last few chapters, it's nice progress for her to learn how the mana pathways she makes in her metal creations can facilitate enchantment and I can see the progress getting there... slowly. 1 chapter every 10 days is supper slow hope you are keeping yourself active physically and keeping the happy endorphins pumping and not becoming a cave dweller
Imspinnennetz
Sandra is responsible for figuring out the step 4 of the enchanting ink. I think when she gives birth and is able to use her mana more freely, she will be more active in helping Aaliyah experiment on runes.
Ray Johnson
Sandra is really starting to feel like dead weight. We keep hearing about how much she has helped Aaliyah in progressing the ink, but it seems that Sandra is providing minimal support at best. More realistically she seems to be mooching off of Aaliyah’s natural talent and hard work.
Imspinnennetz
I don't think she owes 450 gold as such. The original deal was that the company (Grey) gave her 450 gold (Retail value) worth of material and would pay her at 70% of the final retail price of the weapons. I think what Kosnik wanted to write is that she is paid 168-280 gold for the spears and swords (Retail value for company is 5*80 = 400 gold). She should get another 210 gold for the arrows (Retail value for the company for the 6 arrows is 50*6 = 300 gold).
alex
I am confused by something. She owes 450 and expects 168-280. isnt the majority of what she owes is from the Kaglese ore that she used to make the weapons? At least 400 was from the Kaglese, so she LOST money smelting metal and forging them into weapons? If this is how valued her skills are why is she working as a blacksmith?
Imspinnennetz
I wonder if putting small piece of spider carapace into the flame during the enchanting ink making process will improve the enchanted ink's ability to absorb wind mana.
Timo Immig
I think there was a chapter that mentioned book presses or something like that.
brandy
woohoo, glad your alive. As for the story I think she needs to stop considering it impossible to figure out engraving, After all someone already figured it out once or it wouldn't exist. She is better off than the first person to figure it out. Still say she should try building some things from earth. Nothing major, but small things like a book press would change the world. Especially if enchantments could be mass produced.
Blake Richardson
Thanks for the chapter
Black Unicorn
I would do so if I was her, she's more a blacksmith then a fighter and even Pacore should see that from her arrow. If I was Pacore when she gets to Scholl I'd have train with the best blacksmiths in the country then the best enchanters with combat being a twice a week thing to get her able to fight well but not at the point it kills her obvious talent for crafting.
Black Unicorn
I'm sorry Kosnik I've had my second shot for over 3 weeks now and no extra arm's as of yet. On a more story based note nice work. I was thinking that different mana would make different ink to use for different runes. I'm hoping scholl isn't so stupid as to not see that Aaliyah is worth more as a blacksmith then a fighter. After all back in the middle ages a lord would guard there sword-smiths vary heavily as one smith could armor many knights, but it can years to train a new smith to a level that there items can be useful.
Ken
I think a Thor style throwing hammer with a return enchantment would be cool
HardhatDoozer
The core of the story is magic smithing and slice of life, with occasional action sequences. This definitely is on point in my opinion. She even leveled her blacksmith skill this chapter. Still a skipping chapter next would be fine too.
HardhatDoozer
He definitely does. I think he’s about 20 chapters behind. But probably worth a re read.
Kelan
Aaliyah should make a list that takes into account all the costs for repairing her armour that happened due to Tabitha and give it to Pacore at the end so she can be reimbursed. As much as it probably wont make a dent in Pacore’s bank its still a friendly power move and a funny one at that imo
Kelan
We’ve just been through a whole arc of people not wanting to constantly see notifications pop up about delays hahaha
Andrew
Thank you!
ZCochraine!%
Thanks for the chapter! Well, at least if she make an engraving ink box she can put the larger collection runes on the outside since she knows those work.
Håkan Friberg
Thanks!
Justin
Thanks for the chapter.
Frank
I really like the dynamic of this chapter. The conversation seems natural and clear, despite the fact that different things happen at the same time. Now that we have a good basis, speeding up sounds good to reduce the time spent grinding skills.
Möwe Tom
Love the chap thanks boy ^^
Camelopardalis
Nice! You really have a knack for crafting crafting, ;). Might want to tweak “ While talking to Sandra, I removing the kaglese arrow shaft from the forge, moving over to my anvil to use my smaller hammer to straighten it out better. ”
Mike G.
Good chapter, thanks!
Mike G.
we see how the enchantments fair on steel. -> fare
Nick
Thanks for the chapter
Jonathan Timm
I've had to cancel my patreon to you which sucks because of financial reasons. Do you still post on royalroad
Mist of Shadows
I'm looking forward to seeing her getting into enchanting, but a bit of skipping through the some days while they work things out is probably a good idea like you said.
Infinate Fail
Although its nice to hear what she plans to do for the future, I would much rather be watching it happen, show not tell and all that. The enchanting is nice and all, but i would much rather her pull out an enchanted piece of gear as a surprise, with a half paragraph monologue about how she pulled it off, than half a chapter about how she lit a log on fire. How its currently being described allows the reader to speculate on the workings of magic and enchanting, but the majority for now is stuff that we already assumed, and could easily be skipped, while the basics are just rushed by while explaining something else to confirm our assumptions.
rasmus1070
Thanks for the chapter. It would be nice with a post about it being late tho. And I can recommend reading the #ideas-to-improve-the-server on your Discord. But other than that, thanks for the chapter : >
Aclys
Seconded, nice chapter with a nice mix of exposition to chew on a bit while being pleasant to read.
Michael son of Jacob
Since you asked, feedback: I feel like this chapter could have been skipped entirely, and the necessary lore addressed in the next chapter that skips around. I didn't feel any emotion here but frustration during the beginning, and mild curiosity when describing enchanting. In terms of chapter to plot progression efficiency, I'd prefer we'd skip these kinds of chapters in future. I'm grateful you're writing; this is just feedback to help tighten up the plot and keep me feeling things as a reader.
Monus
Nice chapter! Thanks :)
Christoffer Gustafsson
That was a good morning read. Excellent chapter.
Michael son of Jacob
Have you booked an appointment with a therapist yet?
Barrett Hess
I haven't read the chapter yet because it's 1am here, but it's nice to see you're alive, Kosnik! We were starting to get worried there for a second.
Kosnik4
Corrections
