Magic_Smithing
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🕑 Added 2021-03-29 02:15:08 +0000 UTC“Aaliyah, are you alright!” Sandra shouts from the top of the quarry.
“I’m fine!” I shout back, reassuring my friend. Tabitha’s cuts were deep, but she didn’t reach my skin. I’m not sure if that was her intention or not, but I don’t exactly feel like asking.
“You’re fine, huh? Then I suppose we can continue,” Tabitha drily remarks. It looks like she’s lost most of her excitement after our initial clash.
I ground my teeth in frustration. Is fighting me so easy that a battle maniac like Tabitha can’t even find joy in it?
No, screw this!
I might not be able to beat her, but I’m not so weak that I’ll just roll over against her!
Tabitha notices my defiant look, and her smile starts to reform. “Good, Master Pacore wouldn’t have accepted you as a student if you didn’t at least have a spine.”
I bite back an angry retort and activate Flash Step twice to close the distance between us quickly. Tabitha prefers to take the offensive, so I'll try attacking her this time.
Slashing downward, I aim for the shoulder of her shield arm. Tabitha backsteps, her feet gliding across the ground, much like how Pacore moved in our fight. She raises her shield to stop my attack, so I shift my grip and try to direct my sword towards her breastplate instead.
"Better," Tabitha remarks, raising her sword to parry my strike.
Our swords cross again, and this time I’m ready for her to-!
Tabitha jumps backward, using the force behind my attack to move easier. And to add insult to injury, Tabitha's sword flashes again right before she’s out of range, and I feel a new cut in my armor.
Tabitha stops fifteen feet away from me, with a cocky grin on her face.
The dam inside me brakes, and I shout at the infuriating woman. “Will you stop fucking up my armor, already!”
“Will you ask the same from your future opponents?” Tabitha retorts. “I thought you said you were a blacksmith? Fixing your armor shouldn’t be that hard for you.”
“It still takes time,” I hiss in frustration.
Tabitha snorts at my remark, “You’re the one complaining about time? You’re not the one who needs to train a child from scratch before master returns.”
I’m stunned by what Tabitha said. Does she consider beating the shit out of me a necessary training method, all just to save some time?
Tabitha's grin widens when she sees my shocked expression. "You're the one who chose this; remember that."
“When did I ask for this?” I slam my hand against my breastplate and the deep cuts Tabitha left in it.
"When you agreed for me to train you," Tabatha grins like a demon. "I offered you a choice," she points out. "You could've denied my offer and waited until master came back for you. However, you choose to accept my tutelage, and now you represent me."
“What?” I ask, not understanding her reasoning.
"You asked me to train you," Tabitha reiterates. "The next time master sees you, your growth will reflect on me. Master Pacore wrote about how talented you were and your future potential, but all I see are bad habits you've learned in this backwater territory."
“I’m fifteen and not a warrior,” I feel the need to defend myself. “And I’ve still been practicing sparring with a sword and other weapons for years now!”
Tabitha laughs like she just heard the funniest joke in the world. "And tell me, did you out-level the people you've been sparring with?"
“Why does that matter?” I answer Tabitha’s question with another question, not wanting to mention my father’s or Camden’s levels to my sadistic sparring partner.
“You won most of your bouts then,” Tabitha presses her point.
"I don't see how-," I begin to say, but Tabitha cuts me off.
“A rabbit can’t teach a dragon how to fly,” Tabitha states with a knowing look. “Unless your sparring partners were ex-military or retired monster hunters, I doubt they could’ve properly taught you anything more than holding your weapon correctly. You would’ve been stronger and faster than them with much more Stamina. Unless you’re pushed during training, you’ll start to form bad habits. It’s said it’s hard for the weak to teach the strong.”
“I’ve learned a lot from others,” I counter.
Tabitha points her sword at me. "If you had a competent teacher, they would've told you; you shouldn't have practiced with so many weapons. My master didn’t let me add a shield to my training regimen until Sword Skills reached level 75. Let me ask you, was Axe skills your highest weapon skill?”
Tabitha’s eyes drill into me, and I reluctantly answer. “It’s close, but Hammer Skills is my highest weapon skill.”
Tabitha nods her head. "I thought so; I'd call your master incompetent if it weren't," she sends a quick glance up at Master Del before turning back to me. "You should've brought a war hammer to our fight, not an axe and a sword."
"But I've sparred the most with my sword and axe; why would I use a weapon I'm not familiar with?" I find myself asking a surprisingly chatty Tabitha. I can admit she knows a lot about combat.
“And yet, your Hammer Skills is still your highest leveled weapon skill; why is that? It’s because, as a blacksmith, you hold and swing your hammer more than anything else. Weapon and tool skills are by far some of the easiest skills for a person to learn. As long as you have some decent training, reaching level 50 in these skills is easy for people like us." I assume Tabitha is talking about talented individuals because reaching level 50 in a skill, even if it's tier 1, is considered impressive by village standards.
“Weapon and tool skills are the representation of the time you’ve spent practicing with them and grant a natural familiarity whenever you use them. Though you say you’ve fought more with your sword, I could tell your body was much more relaxed with an axe in your hands,” Tabitha explains.
I never realized that! I know it always felt more natural to work in the forge than spar with dad and Camden, but I didn't know that feeling came from my skills.
“You should not have focused on so many weapon skills, or at least kept one as your main weapon without spreading yourself so thin,” Tabitha reprimands me with her sword still pointed at my chest. “And that is only the first problem I’ve noticed. If we are continuing, prepare yourself!” Tabitha rushes at me again without any prior notice.
I hastily find my footing, which I'll admit softened during Tabitha's impromptu lecture. Tabitha leads with a shield bash attack which I use Flash Step to dodge. I'm using Flash Step a lot, and it's burning through my Stamina at an incredible rate, but I can’t dodge Tabitha otherwise.
Like Pacore, Tabitha’s footwork is scarily precise with no wasted movement. That said, I don’t get why I can’t match her. Tabitha might have a few more points in Dexterity than I do, but it can’t be by much. That means she has to be using a skill to move like she is, but what is it?
I bring my scimitar up defensively and block two quick slashes from Tabitha. She’s still trying to cut up my breastplate like earlier, but I’m feeling less malice behind her attacks now. Is this just her way of teaching?
My sword is larger than Tabitha's, and yet I can't seem to push through her defensives. Each time I swing, Tabitha blocks with her shield and delivers a lightning-fast counterattack. And whenever she attacks, I try to block her sword with my own, but she never lets our clashes turn into Strength competitions.
This is nothing like my training with Camden; he'd be out of breath already. And though dad can match my Strength, he can't keep up with my movements whenever we spar.
I see what Tabitha meant when she said the weak couldn't teach the strong. Dad and Camden did teach me how to hold an axe and sword, but if I compare all our sparring sessions to my fight with Pacore and now with Tabitha, I can see we might as well have been children fooling around.
Every fight I’ve been in has had me forcing out a victory through the strength of my stats.
The goblins weren't trained warriors. We ambushed the chameleon spiders as a group. I used up all my mana to blow up the bandits. Then, I did the same thing again when I encountered the soul eater.
I haven't won a single fight through skill!
"Stay focused!" Tabitha shouts, reminding me I'm still in a fight. She stabs her sword at my gut, and I'm forced to use Flash Step again to evade.
Only as soon as I shift positions with my skill, Tabitha swings her shield at the spot I appeared and sends me flying through the air.
Mana Skin absorbs a lot of the impact when I hit the quarry floor, but I still groan in pain as I get up. “How do you know where I’ll be?” I ask, hoping Tabitha will take the bait and give me a minute to catch my breath.
I know my plan succeeded when Tabitha doesn’t immediately appear in front of me, trying to stab me. “Your footwork is terrible,” Tabitha flat-out tells me. “You know a few basic stances, but again, you aren’t used to shifting between them during combat, probably because you’ve never needed to. I can take one look at your feet and see whether you’re going to try and attack me, shift positions, or defend. That, combined with your stiff movements, makes reading you a breeze.”
“Stiff movements?” I stretch every morning; how am I stiff?
“Yes, what footwork skills do you have?” Tabitha asks me, having moved back into lecture mode.
I know this pause in our battle won't last forever, so I touch up Mana Skin and try to recoup some of my lost Stamina while answering Tabitha. "I have Running at level 77. Is that what you're asking?" At this point, I don't even care about revealing a few of my weaker skills to Tabitha; I'm not exactly winning by keeping them secret.
Tabitha freezes, hearing my skill level, and her eyes go wide.
"What, 77!" I hear Sandra exclaim from the top of the quarry. I'd like to see her expression right now, but I won't take my eyes off Tabitha. I don't know when she'll resume our sparring, and I won't be caught off guard again.
"I see, so master wasn't exaggerating your potential," Tabitha throws me off guard with a respectful nod. "I didn't manage to pass my first level 75 skill test until I was 32 and after much hard work. For you to get a tier 1 skill to that high of a level at your age is certainly commendable. You must have put a lot of hard work into it," all of the sudden compliments from Tabitha make me start to feel a little embarrassed. I wonder what Tabitha would say if I told her Meditation was higher than Running and that my highest leveled skill is actually Sense Mana which is tier 2.
“I don’t know why you put so much effort into such a skill, but I can respect you for it. However, though Running is a movement skill, it isn’t what I was referring to. I meant skills like Steady Feet, Quick Feet, anything with feet in its name, really."
“Uh, I have Double Step and Flash Step,” I embarrassingly reply, seeing where Tabitha is going with this.
“I see, is that all?” It’s sad to see Tabitha going from praising me back to looking disappointed. "I'm sure those skills help you run long distances relatively quickly, but neither of those skills will help you in combat without significantly more training.”
“But Flash Step has helped me a lot, and it’s the only reason I can dodge most of your strikes,” I point out to Tabitha.
“Flash Step is a common tier 3 movement skill. It’s unlocked when you cover a certain amount of distance in a certain amount of time, but it's dependent on the skill it originated from. Your skills are meant more for linear movement, so unless you unlock more movement-related skills and integrate them into Flash Step, I’ll be able to predict where you’ll appear every time you activate the skill,” Tabitha explains.
I’ve always pushed myself to go faster, but I haven't prioritized movement during my battles other than flash stepping away from enemies. Or, as Tabitha might point out, I never needed to.
“I have a lot to teach you,” is the only thing Tabitha says further on the matter before resuming our sparring.
You'd think having one of my significant flaws pointed out to me would improve my chances of winning. But now I'm stuck overanalyzing all my movements, trying to overcome my sloppy footwork. As I block a flurry of swings from Tabitha, I'm trying to move more while keeping up a reliable stance, holding a weapon I was told I shouldn't be using. Is Tabitha aware that her advice is throwing me off, or is that her diabolical plan?
"Now you're overthinking," Tabitha berates me, cutting yet another slice into my breastplate. At this point, I've recognized I'll have to take the thing apart and reforge the plates inside, and now I’m curious just how many cuts my new armor can take before it becomes useless.
“Thanks for pointing that out!” I yell, trying to counterattack. Activating Double Strike, I aim for a small opening I think I see in Tabitha’s defense. She blocks my first slash with her sword and the second using her shield. Tabitha then proceeds to shift my sword to the side, freeing up her own sword, which she uses to score another hit on me.
We continue to trade blows with each other for an agonizing twenty minutes, and in all that time, I never get a clean hit on Tabitha. I grazed her armor once, but her smile makes it hard to tell if she just let me do that.
Sweat is pouring down my face, my mana pool is half empty from refilling the holes in Mana Skin, and mentally I feel just as exhausted. My arms are trembling, holding up my scimitar.
The only thing that shows my attacks weren’t completely pointless is the small amount of sweat on Tabitha’s forehead. Her armor is pristine, but seeing her start to show some fatigue means I put up at least a semblance of a fight.
"That was a good warm-up," Tabitha's demon grin doesn't even anger me anymore. "Can you continue?" She asks me in an excited voice. She's flip-flopped emotions so many times, I've given up on trying to read her and decide to take her question at face value.
I want to say, let’s continue, but our last few clashes have been exceedingly one-sided. Shaking my head, I sheath my sword. “I’m done,” I tiredly collapse to my knees.
“Really?” Tabitha asks, clearly disappointed. “You can’t continue a bit longer?” She pleads like a child asking for another cookie.
"I don't think it will be very exciting for you if I do," I wheeze with a bit of sarcasm.
“Hmmm,” Tabitha hums in thought. “At least you have a decent amount of Stamina. You might not be well trained, but at least you lasted longer than some of my other sparring partners.”
I choose to take that as a compliment, while Tabitha looks like she’s thinking hard about something. “Where to start, where to start?” She mumbles to herself.
Oh, gods, she just spent the last thirty-something minutes putting me in my place, and she already wants to start my training!
“You don’t have a proper weapon with you right now, so I suppose we should start on your footwork,” Tabitha ponders out loud, walking towards me.
At least I can let out a sigh of relief when Tabitha sheaths her sword and moves her shield back over her shoulder. I may be tired, but the thought of figuring out how Tabitha and Pacore move as they do fills me with enough energy to get back to my feet. I’m ready to learn whatever secret skill they were using.
Tabitha stops a few feet in front of me with a serious look on her face. “I’ll have to start you with the basics, just as Master Pacore did with me when he took me in as his disciple.”
“Ok,” I grin, letting a bit of my excitement show.
“You’ll need to learn the skill Master Pacore has taught all of us.”
"I'm ready," I confidently reply, which earns me an approving nod from Tabitha. Sandra is going to be so jealous after I master whatever skill I'm about to learn. Wait, I cast a glance up at Master Del and Sandra, who look happy to see our sparring session is over. Is Tabitha going to teach me a new skill in front of them? I would assume a skill Pacore teaches to each of his students must be a well-kept secret; shouldn't Tabitha ask them to leave?
“Hold up your arms,” Tabitha instructs me, not caring one bit about our onlookers.
“Like this?” I stick my arms out to my sides, trying to follow her directions.
“No, like this,” Tabitha moves directly in front of me and positions my arms. “Bring this foot forward,” she kicks my right shin guard. “Now, move your other foot here,” she taps the ground with her boot.
I feel like a mannequin as Tabitha directs me into a weird full-body position. How does positioning my body like this help with my footwork?
"Alright, that looks right," Tabitha nods at her handiwork before moving uncomfortably close to me.
What is she?
Tabitha takes my left arm and has me wrap it around her armored waist. She then proceeds to take my other hand into her own, and my brain crashes.
“Now match my feet,” Tabitha instructs me, stepping forward, so I need to step back. "Good, keep doing that."
My body relaxingly follows Tabitha's as she leads me in a slow dance. That's what she's doing, right, dancing with me? She isn't teaching me some super-secret skill or anything; she's just having me dance with her.
When my brain finally reboots, I stop in place.
“You messed up already? We haven’t even picked up the pace yet,” Tabitha looks up at me with disappointment in her eyes.
I pull away from Tabitha and take a few steps back. "What the hell are you doing?!" I shout at her.
With a puzzled look, Tabitha cocks her head to the side. “We were dancing, obviously,” she answers in a matter-of-fact tone. “Do you not know what dancing is? Is this village that remote?” Tabitha’s seemingly genuine questions make them that much more insulting.
“I know what dancing is!” I hiss. “I’m asking why we’re dancing?!”
"Oh," Tabitha has a light bulb moment. "You see, dancing together is the quickest way to earn the Dancing skill," Tabitha replies like that’s the answer to all my questions. It doesn't help that I hear Sandra laughing from the top of the quarry. Can't she go back to feeling concerned for me?
I swallow back the anger slowly building; yelling won't solve anything. It's just so frustrating that Tabitha seems to have lost a few brain cells since we stopped sparring. She articulated my flaws perfectly when she was pointing a sword at me; now she's teaching me with half-answers. “And why are you teaching me to dance?” Keeping the anger out of my voice is harder than I thought.
“To fix your footwork,” she simply explains.
“With dancing? This is the first thing Pacore taught you?” I bluntly ask, picturing a giggling Pacore messing with a young ignorant Tabitha.
As if on cue, Tabitha brightens up at the mention of her master. "Of course, Master Pacore, in all his wisdom, spent our first lesson teaching me to dance. I was young and reluctant to learn such a skill, but master took the time to explain to me why the skill is so important," Tabitha continues to sing Pacore's praise while finally giving me a decent answer.
“You see, what is dancing, if not a duel using our feet,” Tabitha proclaims. “You have to match your opponent’s rhythm and predict where they’re going to move. It is a beautiful form of battle that the nobility has been practicing for ages!”
Why do I get the feeling that’s just how Pacore worded it so his battle maniac student would listen to him?
“Let’s try again, and this time, try not to mess up,” Tabitha offers me her hand. I blush as I step forward and take her outstretched hand.
Tabitha repeats the initial steps, and I quickly find myself in a slow rhythm waltz type of dance. I wasn't exactly Mr. Popular back in my past life, and the only dancing experience I have under my belt is a couple of awkward middle school dances, where I was the definition of a male wallflower. My stats allow me to keep up with Tabitha's movements, but I'm stiff and overly focusing on her feet.
I feel like a fool, and it doesn't help that Sandra sounds like a cackling hyena overhead. I'm glad she finds this funny! Plus, while we're dancing, Tabitha has her battle grin plastered on her face, and I soon see why.
The longer the two of us dance, the faster Tabitha's footwork speeds up, to the point I'm almost tripping over her feet. So, she does treat this as a battle and is deliberately trying to trip me. It's hard enough with her being shorter than me and leading the dance, but I certainly can't match her skill. If Pacore demanded she had her Sword Skills at level 75 before picking up a shield, I could only imagine what level Tabitha's Dancing skill must be at. For that matter, what level is Pacore's skill at? Not even Tabitha's movements could compare to Pacore's.
It isn't long before I'm stumbling backward after tripping over one of Tabitha's armored boots. I try to drag her down with me out of spite, but like a slippery snake, Tabitha pulls her hands free and watches as I crash to the stone floor. Is it so much to ask for an ordinary teacher, I ponder to myself as I look up at Tabitha?
"Again," Tabitha leans over and offers me a hand back up. She may be brutal in her training, but she's considerate in her own way, I guess. Taking her offered hand, we start over from the beginning.
Again, I try to match Tabitha’s footwork for as long as possible, and again I end up falling on my ass.
We repeat this again...
And again…
And again... with the time I stay dancing, only improving by a few seconds each time.
Having not fully recovered after the sparring, and just like running for long periods, my Stamina bar starts to drop pretty low. The fatigue of dancing continues compounding with my earlier sparring session's exhaustion, making getting up more and more difficult.
I get a short moral boost when I feel a slight shift in my soul indicative of a new tier 1 skill, but falling on my butt again quickly reigns in my joy.
“Again!” I stare up at Tabitha’s outstretched hand.
“I don’t suppose you can teach me any other skill?” I ask, taking Tabitha’s hand, aggreging to another round of punishment.
“You need to work on the basics first,” Tabitha tells me, sounding like a real teacher for a moment. “If I tried teaching you a stronger skill, and even if you were able to learn it, that doesn’t mean it would do you much good.”
“Why?” I ask, dodging one of Tabitha’s feet.
“You lack knowledge that comes from having a good teacher,” Tabitha points out to me, shifting her feet and picking up the rhythm.
"Hey!" I try kicking her shin, but Tabitha easily dodges.
“Do you think I don’t speak the truth?” Tabitha asks me, not caring that I tried to kick her. She twirls us in place and sends a glance up at Master Del. "The stone kin, the person you called master, he is 'stripped,' yes?" She whispers to me.
I almost lose my footing then and there, but I manage to shift my hips and hop over one of Tabitha’s feet. “How did you?”
"I couldn't feel much magic from him while we were walking here. Stone kin place great importance on magic, to the point they look down on anyone with little to no magic. Our kingdom had to order masters armor because the stone kin outpost bordering Scholl wouldn’t accept any of his personal orders.”
"Pacore can't use magic?" I ask, surprised by Tabitha's casual revelation.
Tabitha nods like it’s no big deal. “Master Pacore never had talent with magic, but that never stopped him from becoming great." Now it makes so much sense why Pacore had such a massive magic gem embedded in his armor. It was so that other people could charge his equipment, and he wouldn't need to worry about the enchantments running out of mana.
“That’s good to know, but what does that have to do with my master?” I ask Tabitha, oddly keeping up with her increased speed for the first time.
“If your master has no mana, then his people would’ve treated him as worthless despite any success he might have had, just like Master Pacore. They would not have wasted their time teaching him crucial information," Tabitha spells it out to me.
I grit my teeth in anger; I know how much master was underappreciated. Master Del doesn’t like to talk about his life before he left Truset, and I can see why if what Tabitha is saying is true.
“Many believe the higher the tier a skill is, the stronger it makes them. It’s the job of experienced masters to dispel this rumor. Yes, the higher the tier the skill is, the more potential it has, but as I said earlier, it needs to be supported by your lower tired skills.”
Is that the reason why I'm having trouble leveling Precise Strike and my other skills past level 40? Is it because Blacksmithing has yet to reach level 75, or is it because my highest weapon skill is only level 61? It makes sense you need a strong foundation; that's probably why my magic skills are leveling quicker than my other skills. From tier 1 to 4, all my strongest skills are mana related, after all.
“Then if I practice dancing night and day, I’ll be able to beat you?” I cockily grin at Tabitha.
She chuckles, "You're welcome to try. Skill levels aren't everything. Let me ask you a question Master Pacore asked me when he accepted me as his student. Who would win between two evenly leveled warriors? Both men have the same stats and are the same age; the only difference is one has spent every minute of his life swinging his sword at a practice dummy getting his Sword Skills level to 100, verses a man who fought in numerous battles and managed to only get his sword skills level to 75?”
“The warrior who participated in all the battles,” I confidently answer. That’s obviously the answer she was looking for.
Tabitha nods with a smile. “You’re smarter than I was at your age. It again comes down to how you practice. You can dance twenty hours a day and eventually raise your skill level higher than mine, but it won’t improve your footwork in battle by much. Just because you have a high-level skill doesn’t mean you’ve mastered all its applications.”
I’ll have to seriously consider that as I move forward with my training. I started off hating this day being looked down on by Tabitha, but she's not as bad as I thought. She's undoubtedly simple-minded, but you can't deny the passion she has for training and combat.
I may be tired, but I finally see the reward dangling in front of me. It's at this point Tabitha trips me again, and I end up on my butt.
“If you continue this training, you'll at least be able to put up a fight eventually," Tabitha reassures me, offering her hand again.
I want to reach out and continue our training, but I need a quick rest. "Can I just sit here for twenty minutes?" I ask.
"If you must," Tabitha calmly replies, pulling back her hand. Her excited grin disappears and is once again replaced by her passive stare.
I turn away from her, not wanting to be reminded that she's just standing there waiting for me to catch my breath. Using this short break, I plan out the rest of my day and how I'll proceed in the near future.
I'll need to leave my armor at Del's, so mom and dad aren't worried when I get home. Plus, I should stop by Anastasia's and have her do a quick touch-up. I wasn't seriously injured today, but my ass is sore, and I'm sure I'll have a few bruises from my earlier sparring. That’s the short term, but more importantly, I need to reconfigure my schedule to fit in training sessions with Tabitha.
She’s shown just how much I lack in my fighting skills, and fixing those problems is just as important as my other skills. I need to spar with Tabitha, work on my forging, finish deciphering the engraving ink recipe, all while finding time to practice my mana skills. But I’m not sure if there’s enough time in my schedule for all of that?
And how am I going to tell Tabitha I won’t be able to spar with her as much as she wants?
Turning my head slightly, I glance at Tabitha out of the corner of my eye. She’s still watching my every move with her stony expression.
I’ll break the bad news to her later, no reason to make her mad when we still have hours left in our training.
Why does it feel like life is becoming busier?
Oh well, life moves on. The only thing I can do is continue to do my best. I’ll make mistakes, but I’ll learn from them. That’s life.
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5,150 words.
What do you think? I know I got quite a lot of pushback on the last chapter, and I see what you guys were talking about, but it wasn’t what I was trying to convey.
It was never my intention to make Tabitha a dislikable character. I wanted to portray her as a very forward battle junkie, that admires her teacher. I guess I need to keep this instance in mind when I introduce new characters in the future.
As for Aaliyah, the last few chapters were meant to show she isn’t perfect. Her abilities are incredible, but she’s far from being the strongest person on Yurilia, especially considering she’s yet to go further than Drey, which is in a small corner of Olebert.
It was never my desire to make Aaliyah infallible because that isn't realistic. I make mistakes, and I'm the writer, so I couldn't possibly make a character like that. I know some people think Aaliyah should be less childish because of her past life, but I want people to remember she died pretty young by earth standards. She's never experienced all the troubles of life back on Earth and had to change her outlook on many things when she was reincarnated.
Sorry for the rant; I just felt like a few of these points needed to be said. I care about everyone's opinion, and when you point out things you don't like in the comments, I honestly try to correct them to the best of my abilities.
Please continue to comment below. Love the chapter or hate it; I appreciate the feedback.
I hope you enjoyed the chapter, and as always, stay safe.
Comments
Spleenslitta
Aaliyah needs to have some true opposition and Tabitha & Pacore are just those kind of characters. If she just breezes through all obstacles with ease what is the point?
seasparks
people don't like Tabitha????? she's unironically so cool!
Nikola
I worry about Tabitha's health such a binary existence can be good.
Tabitha hums in thought. “At least you have a decent amount of Stamina. You might not be well trained, but at least you lasted longer than some of my other partners.”
TheOne320
Thanks for the chapter. A general question, but why does Aaliyah not ask Sandra what her masters cost would be for her teaching rights? Even if it were a lot, I think the benefits of learning all of Sandra's spells would even out the price.
Alteron
Like always I am looking forward to the next chapter, I believe that Tabitha and Aaliyah have the potential to be good friends, they are both training fanatics.
Sheeprat
I have been meaning to say this but please dont listen to the comments to much this your story taking criticism and changing things here and there is fine but dont get in a bad place and try to change every detail because of it you can not make every one happy
jiecut
Nice to know she still has gaps in her skills and training. Exciting progress on the horizon. Also she has Lvl 40 sword skills which is nothing compare to her opponent.
tibbish
Its a balancing act. And you have to consider too that this is the author's full time bill paying job now as well. The author obviously can't go and try to please every individual complaint, the story would be a mess, BUUUUT they also shouldn't ignore consistent and widespread complaints either. So far we've just had 1 chapter (the previous one) where a lot of people complained so its not entirely unreasonable that the author at least try to do some sort of changes to address that. Which they did. And I think the author did a good job of it too going by my reading + how the comments are mostly this time as well. So I think saying ignore all the comments is a bit strong. "Everything in moderation" is a cliche but it also has a lot of truth to it too.
Melting Sky
Dragons are just better than humans. It's been quite clearly stated he is one of the most powerful humans in the two largest human empires on the planet.
closeded
I've like Tabitha for the most part; what I haven't liked is Aaliyah's behavior around Tabitha.
Guilherme Silva
Seriously, there haven't been 30 years since the idea of footwork being important became part of our culture, and they don't have our amount of information. Canden have the minimum training and her dad not even this.
Alonzo garcia
I think it’s just high time she learned some useful stuff and we get back to the basics to build some foundations as the training arcs always claim. Great chapter
conkerer
Great chapter, I love how they ended up talking about footwork. Basic of the basics and I'm shocked that Camden or her dad wouldn't be able to tell her about it but if they were just bullcrap as teachers I guess that's how it is. I'm still confounded why she would ever think smacking a shield head on would be a great idea ( I'm pretty sure even a child who has ever touched a shield a bit would imagine that isn't the smartest idea) but highlighting her lack of experience works wonders in this arc. Mostly a nitpick really since there is a lot of good here going into the overall arc.
Alonzo garcia
This man is stating facts out here
Kelan
Tabitha is too different from Aaliyah, as well as being borderline bipolar with her only having two emotional settings of emotionless and dripping wet when talking about pacore/fighting. They won’t get along or at least in my eyes if my significant other cant even fake interest in my hobby (A’s case being blacksmithing) I don’t see any romance being possible.
PrinceCorwin
I feel like readers often see characters the way that main characters see them. You introduced Tabitha with our heroine immediately disliking her, which led us, the audience, to dislike her as well.
Bookwyvren
Wonderful, just wonderful. Found you because of Macronimicon, and spent all night reading everything posted from beginning to end. I like Tabitha and her weirdness because it feels like her master would only take on the strange and talented. so she fits right in as a character and how she acts for me. I can’t wait to meet the other apprentices.
Lommel
I put off reading Ch 91 because reading the comments there made me afraid I would not be able to stomach it without being able to read a more digestible follow-up chapter(s). THE COMMENTERS ARE SOOOOO STRANGE! Ch 91 is perfectly fine. @Kosnik4, you have my permission to mostly ignore the comment section. Maybe look at _my_ comments because mine are mostly reasonable, but you may ignore most others.
Håkan Friberg
I think with this chapter it's getting back on track. What grated me was the fact that she was forced into an apprenticeship, whether she needed it or not is another discussion, and her response is to casual swallow everything Tab is throwing at her. It would make more sense if Tab just forcefully forced her to submit. But she represent someone who, perhaps not willing, considered killing Aaliyah as a better solution than to leave her unclaimed. So far we had close to no backlash from that part of the story. It would be expected she'd be grumpy about that and not take any shit from Tab. Yes you wanted to convey a battle junkie but it's like she has a master painter infront of her and ask him/her "but can you play Mozart, if not - what good are you?". Of course I exaggerating but just to make a point. I love the novel and you can't please everyone at every turn. Keep up the good work!
Augustus
She show it in the fight against Pacore and it would be a waste to leave a mage as well, when he already left Tabitha as a guard and trainer. It would take time away from training her in combat, and would likly not be effective since they would lack materials to help train, Aliyah has plenty of weapons and armor to train with and I thinking that magic training would require books, and more specialized training materials to be the quality of training that would help her. Even if a common mage would come what would he teach her the magic words? The mage would have the same issue as Sandra, mana control would end up with her teaching the mage, and I dont think that changing or hiding the mana signature is a common skill so it would require a high level teacher, which would be better used at the front the finish the fight quickly.
Lommel
This can only be said be someone who's not experienced anything even remotely similar. She actually acts quite reasonably given the context you mentioned. I'm fed up with people claiming it "reasonable" to just go with the flow under such circumstances. or even "appreciate" it. It can be as beneficial as you want to make it on a purely logical level, but ANY creature with a big enough brain HATES being controlled. That's actually one of the actually valuable and reproducible insights in psychology. Example: experiment Rats in electrifiable cages experiment. Two groups of rats had the exact same exposure to being "grilled" by electrical currents. However, one group got the switch to turn it off (for both). The ones in the group with the switches was completely fine even after many "electrifying" experiences. The other group, although not a second longer exposed - but without control over the situation - was a total mess and very unhealthy looking. So the "objective" reality does not matter one iota. Loos of control over ones life SUCKS and is what living creatures pay most attention to. No matter what some commenter here says. You cannot compensate with nice gifts for loss of control. You prefer being a tightly controlled employee with a strict contract, or earn much less but as your own boss? Many of those who have a reasonable chance for the latter - and the MC here has perfect chances of making a living - choose the latter, especially after experiencing corporate life.
Ninetails
Indeed, it also really tramples over her worth as a smith, all of which causes dislike for her. We would have gotten a much nicer impression of her if she had instead repeated trip her up, disarmed her, thrown her around and had the weapon get to critical positions.
Ninetails
Indeed, her passion is blacksmithing, her main talent is magic and easy skill leveling. Close combat is just a bit of self defense for her, that was kind of necessary.
SFS
I kind of think that Aaliyah learning to fight will help her blacksmithing in the long run. Right now most of her designs are basically either things she's seen in media, or things that she remembers from earth. Neither of these can take into account the skills and stats of this world. I think by learning and seeing how high level people actually fight, what kind of skills they use, and how they move, she can better design and build equipment to compliment the abilities of the users.
Dikfor
You never played Star Wars Galaxies. lol
thkiw
I still think aliyah is an idiot for not mentioning her talent in magic. Sandra can't teach but it doesn't mean no one else can! Just a few words and they might find her a proper teacher. Doesn't scholl control drey? Surely someone stayed behind. Even a normal battlemage would skyrocket her abilities. She doesn't even know how to change her mana signature yet! How can she use flame or earth spells singlehandedly without even trying? Her mana manipulation abilities are much stronger than any other abilities she might have! It's a shame she doesn't use them!
ActionKermit
Agreed, there's so many of us that trying to incorporate everyone's feedback would lead to incoherence. The main thing is to keep going and reflect.
John Scott
I like that people are calling her on her shit. She was too high level before so no one in the village could really tell her no if she chose not to listen. Hopefully this is the start of a more mature world view. I like adding some fighting, since now that enough people know of her, I doubt she would get left alone without some martial ability. I could see her turning into a monster hunter to get more supplies for crafting.
mpop
” crackling highena” should be ”cackling hyena”.
John Scott
Huh. The only one I can think of is Perrin from wheel of time.
Atli
Thank you for the chapter!
Sheeprat
i do not under stand why people want nothing but crafting even if you love your job you dont do it 24/7
Alteron
They are pretty good, but there’s a large change happening, I think it’s for the better, and I am curious about the future.
Max Scherer
I mean sure it sucks that MC gets beaten, but I just hope that same doesnt happen when she shows her blacksmithing skills.
Melting Sky
"I care about everyone's opinion." This right here is what is screwing you. Fixating on what you think everyone in your audience wants rather than on the story you wish to write will poison your entire creative process and eventually it may even cost you your drive and ability to write at all. Trying to please everyone is the surest way to end up pleasing no one. Quit worrying about what random internet idiots think of your writing. The only person's opinion that truly matters when it comes to writing this story is your own. The rest should be taken with a grain of salt.
tibbish
I think this chapter AND the last one were pretty good but I guess I'm in the minority here.
Alteron
Thanks for the chapter, one thing that bothers me is Tabitha’s destruction of the armour. In a training session the deliberate destruction of expensive equipment shows arrogance and disrespect.
Infinate Fail
Our mc was never really meant to be a sword woman. From birth she worked on magic skills, and by all rights should be a mage when it come to combat. Her skills with magic are a result of her natural talent. With melee combat she has to learn without any pre-existing knowledge and seemingly no natural skill. She really needs to do a little magic, maybe get questioned on mana skin to show Tabitha her magic talent, then be taught by a mage. She is not a warrior class, but a mage!
Bonobo
Thanks for the chapter, loved it!
Carl Mason
I loved the chapter, but if Aaliyah is going to continue training with her, she needs to make some armor that doesn't care about for Tabitha to cut up all she wants.
Andrew
Thank you!
Wei Tung
can't wait to see Aaliyah level up and surpass Tabitha
Black Unicorn
I think you hit the nail on the head here. I've gone from a low ranked school where I was one of the best kids there to a high end school and it was odd and humbling and I learned a lot more about a lot of fun things that I'd never have been able to at the lower schools. Hell I even learned how to make moonshine out of leaves for heavens sake.As for her seeming dum now just think her only female friend and the only real mage came back and she's trying to learn by force something that's vary hard to compare try learning the foxtrot with no one else and no music and no step map pad. Its going to make you prity stupid if your kind of single minded like Aali is, though she is a lot better then Tabitha
Knightfire
Nor is Pacore a beast when you look at the wider world or he wouldn't have been trashed by the Dragon. Aaliyah lives in a small corner of a small corner of the world.
Knightfire
Really liked the chapter and I like the story progression. Aaliyah to me is not acting childlike but instead very realistic. Whatever her past life, in this life she has had very few setbacks. Moreover she has been the most talented person around by a large factor. When you have been the biggest frog in a small pond, you are very likely going to act like a brat when the world or Pacore or Tabitha suddenly make it clear that you do not know how big the world really is.
Black Unicorn
Vary good! I thought Tabitha would be a bit more forceful then you made her but still good. I love the bit on dancing, one little known fact is that a lot of football star running backs and wide receivers take ballet to better there movement. also male ballet stars are STRONG! if you think the ballerinas are light your wrong some can wight more then 160lb even as thin as they are because there all muscle and bone almost no fat.
Jywert
I don't get the negativity but do realize when people say they don't want another fighting story. I would agree that I am here for the crafting too, and not for the fighting. But people do seem not to realize how one's worldview/position affects your behavior. Going from a low-tier public school to one of the best departments in University to study and learn will make on humble to be able to learn. Many times you need to learn how to learn again. But do agree how the latest has been a bit bashing. "Me dum dum no understand". Overall I would say I do like the story and people seem to forget how "early" we are in this story and the author's experience in the creation. But there is a mismatch between her "real" age and current age. It won't matter in the future as much but is she 15 or are they 30+? The childish part is very reasonable for one age 15 but for older ones? Not so. One could also say that people after a point stop growing mentally and only age physically. The experience in life grows one's mental age and maturity, but one needs to willing to learn. To recap this rambling mess. I do agree with negative feedback but I would also not change anything or very little. Just keep up hammering.
HardhatDoozer
Well we know that the materials that the armour are made of are top tear for Her former country and made with either 3rd or 4th tier skill level. But it doesn’t have protection runes yet. So that probably gives Tabetha a strong advantage through skills and enchanted weapons.
Limbus
Liked the chapter.
David
How can Tabitha so easily cut through both Mana Skin and Aali's armor? Is Aali's armor just not very good, and Mana Skin worthless against a sword? Or is Tabitha's sword epicly enchanted or her sword skill extremely high level?
Mist of Shadows
I'm not sure calling her simple minded is the right way to say that little miss MC... single minded would be better, it hurts the ego less.
Bsoxmk2
I enjoyed this chapter. It made Tabitha more likable and I also liked how Aaliyah is taking Tabitha's teachings to heart.
Zarik0
I still say MC is too much a hasty stupid child who dont think at all and is shocked at everything obvious, that seem too much wrong and false with her background and what she did already in this world In the last 5-10 chapter i feel its another MC who get more childish and have thrown her brain This aspect is a hard negative for me The other aspect the author write are good (i like particulary some of the choice the author take in the plot/story) but this new childish no brain aspect ruin and impact all other, this is boring and unrealist and make me growl/sight/roll eyes/paf my head every 4 sentence most of the chapter because her childish stupidity who feel wrong (for the past MC and in realist way) appear everywhere And you didnt need to make her stupid and childish like this suddenly for "make us see" she is not perfect and can fail and make mistake and vs the world she still have a long way, that is obvious and we already have exemple of this before, this is so forced and feel wrong the suddenly childish aspect with her not thinking at all, its like you lobotomied her suddenly (And the bashing with same interaction with mother all time is zzz too at some point)
Blood Shade Games
I enjoyed it.
Desurtfawks
Wooooo, its on time!
1Crash
This chapter spells out what I thought you were aiming for with Tabitha. I couldn't quite get why people were so upset with the battle last chapter? But hey if so many people have complaints might be worth taking another look and spelling it out like in this chapter. Great story still and I still think it has tons of potential. Very entertaining A++ work keep it up and happy you got the chapter out on time :D.
GingerClanger
Could Tabitha be a Future Love Interest..!? Is Sandra's Wedding Safe from Aaliyah's Clutches..!? Is this the Start of Aaliyah's All Female Harem she Always Wanted..!?
luda305
This chapter does a very good job redeeming Tabitha as a character.
Chilling_Monk
I thought tabitha was alright even if weird. Aaliyah in the other hand has been behaving like a brat for a while. Sure she has been involved against her will but they really gave her the best scenario opportunity so she should st least appreciate the effort to teach her.
Rhaid
I kind of agree. This is a crafting story, but it seems she is now going to be focused on fighting a whole lot. I came here for crafting, not to watch her become a fighter due to her wounded pride like this. Hunting the camo spiders was decent, but at the end of the day I want to see some cool crafting and her selling the crafts/becoming famous because many people see her craft.
Straven
Honestly I'm happy with the chapter and the stories progression. She's not op nor instantly catching onto everything with no effort let alone work. Her work along with her skill got her here and it's with those two that she'll only continue to grow. Thank you for another great chapter, looking foreword to the time she manages to shock her new teacher so much her emtionless face breaks into clear shock, again!
David Zimmerle
Never understood why every blacksmith character I find specializes in a non-hammer weapon
marids
It's a sad day when one finds out a when a previously promising fiction is no longer worth following/reading. I used to think the problem was from Tabitha, because of how annoying and irritating her entire character is. But no, after some introspection and thought I've realized the problem is entirely from Aaliyah instead. Aaliyah doesn't need to tolerate Tabitha. She doesn't need to do any more than the very minimum to satisfy Pacore's terms while doing things. She doesn't have to care about being able to beat Tabitha. She could choose to not care about learning to fight well with actual thinking in combat for real tactics and strategies over simply getting enough stats and skills and equipment and whatever else to become powerful enough to not even have to think to win in fights. But no, she's doing all this because she got goaded and her pitiful pride couldn't take it, neither from Sandra for her teasing nor Tabitha's provocations. People were right. Aaliyah is a child. One that I didn't mind neither the flaws nor the immaturity of due to how entertaining she could make her life to read about. But in the end instead of being a protagonist that is fully in charge of her own story, she's just one character that's acting in relation to the actions of other characters, which is sadly not the kind of story I care much for. Thanks for all the chapters, and I'll wait for the free chapters to catch up.
Tom Henman
Good much needed chapter! Starting to tie some things together and develop a relationship between T and A. (wink wink nudge nudge)
HardhatDoozer
Tabitha certainly picks up on hints of the depth of Aaliyah‘s potential and age. I think it’ll be good. Training with people with much lower stats is always awkward.
Melnik5
crackling highena
Nick
Thanks for the chapter
HardhatDoozer
Skipping one, and now we are in a bit easier territory now all helped I’m sure.
HardhatDoozer
This is really where I thought we were headed with Tabitha. But you know the storm is always darkest before the light. The flowers come out because of the dreary or menacing rain. Tabitha is an opportunity like that. This chapter finally gives her that chance.
Obsidianking
Good chapter, I absolutely agree that Aaliyah is a frog in a well and we're now seeing the problems with small village life style. I really like how your expanding the skill system, were skills are not so rigid and they lay the foundation for the future. Tabitha came in with some baggage for the readers maybe, but I think this chapter paints her in a more likable light. The dancing is a nobels duel was funny and a good example. Keep up the good work, maybe have tabitha observe Aaliyah, around the village and see how hard working she is and stuff.
Chip Twothousandone
great chap
Robert Mullins
Are you okay? do you need someone to call the police? I don't know if it was intentional or an accident but, you're updating on schedule today.
Justin
Really good chapter! I liked where you went with this one. MORE PLEASE!!!!
GuyWhoReadsALot
I enjoyed it.
WalkingPark
Damn. An update on time. Cool!
Kosnik4
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