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Chapter 222: A Really Stupid Rock

🕑 Added 2023-02-25 06:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Morgan

At minimum? She should be lucky if she keeps her life. I'd be furious if Tori argued for too lenient of a punishment here. Regardless of her intent she was a key piece in organising the capture of Tori, likely without even considering other avenues

Nimps

So Alessa has at minimum lost her title then when they get back to safety. I can't wait for Adrian's death, and I kinda hope Alessa is removed too.

Simon Hoerder

The discussion between Tori, Adrien and Alessa feels as if it has been forced in as an info dump. Sort of the villain monologue except it's not a monologue. But there isn't much of a motivation why they would have that discussion in the text. They don't even try to interrogate Tori or anything.


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